*The Destiny...* FF*,Complete** thanks*- Page 6

Enjoyed this part it was nice

hey devika

Devika di...
your FF is superb love it...so much

Thank you...

Hello, before you start the next part, i want o to say something

Radhika is a women whose past left her to face bitter realities of life all alone and to fight for her child with the world and in all this she lost all support from her near ones on whom she always depend ...one wrong decision of our elders can easily let life of a youngster to hell that also without their realization.. (thanks)

But while trying to survive, she met Dev, who happened to be her boss.. at one time she thought she is losing herself in front of him (the other one, she is forced for the marriage, this is something she felt for Dev) . But then Radhika is backing up from the relationship when she see the media mocking at Dev and his family, taking on her bitter past. who is still pregnant. (remember, Dev has only Dadi adn only Dadi understand her potha, so when Dev decided to marry Radhika, dadi agreed,) . But the story making of media made Radhika to think twice and she leave him behind , as she couldn't see his name to be spoiled because of her past,by making stories of her past...

now in an accident (may be planned that coems later) she lost her child, so she is in shock,in deeep shock that she don;t know what she is really doing, whether she is walking or running. She is trying to thread it together at some point to see where she went wrong, but then once she reach to the fact that she lost her child, she is it losing again.

She in dilemma getting back to her village.. there everyone trying to harm her because for them she is a disobedient daughter, who left her family without their permission... , but Dev comes and saves her.. so now the story Begins..

Bit and pieces of Dev and Radhika's past interaction may come later.. but otherwise,, how he will convince her against the society, how he will let her realize what is true love, how to trust someone above all, especially after a bitter past, or maybe help her to stand back on her feet to face the society once again with a determined face..

In short, how Dev can bring her back to life, because love is not past, love should fill the day, and it should grow by the passing of time.. no place for any ego.. love is patient and love is sharing... love is giving, or sometimes love is that silent support.. so will Dev be successful ?... so that's where we are heading to... hope you all got it now...

Part-3

Dev was sitting at the side chair near the bed, holding her hands in his, and his eyes were fixed on her tired face.

" Mr. Purohith, she is OK now, why don't you get fresh up, and take some rest, you look very tired too."

Dev jerked to the door side from where he heard the sound with a clam face: I am fine sister.. he looked at the nurse as she walked in with a tray ..

Nurse: You didn't take any rest!.

Dev: no, its fine

Nurse: call us, if you need anything.ok

Dev: yes sister'... he replied with a thankful gesture ..

Time just passed by.. It was Tulsi's sound that pierced his ears'.. (Tulsi, his cousin sister) .. he slowly rubbed over his eyelid and opened the eyes and looked around.. he still at the bed side chair and his one hand still holding onto hers. He looked at Radhika in concern, as if he missed watching her'... Her face was turned to the other side. He turned his look also to that side and found Tulsi talking to Radhika

"Uthgaye Janaab".. Dev heard his daadi's sound near him.. and found her standing next to him..

Dev: Daadi !.. Tulsi!.. when did you come?

Daadi: hum.. few minutes earlier. But how are you feeling now?

Dev: better daadi, I think I slept for long?

Daadi: its OK, you needed that. The nurse gave us strict instruction not to disturb you...

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.Daadi continued..:usually they say not to disturb the patient, but here we are in doubt .,thinking who is the patient?

Dev: daadima, aap bhi na..

Daadi came and sat near him. And brushed over his hair once..

Daadi: Dev, I cannot wait anymore and I can't see you two suffer like this anymore.

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Daadi freed her hand and brushed over Radhika's head slowly and said : beta, time is the answer for everything. It may take time for the healing and i tell you..it never wait , it just move on and take you with it. From now onwards you are not alone, you are going to have all of us in your journey'... with that dadi placed a comforting and reassuring kiss over her forehead.

Daadi: I think we need to leave now. and looked at Tulsi and said: let's go..

Daadi: ha, Tulsi from now I need your help for everything, we don't have much time..

Tulsi: jee, dadima'... she smiled at Radhika and placed a kiss over her forehead and looked at Dev as if giving him the support. He tried to smile at her too..

Daadima as she walked towards the door said: Dev , Birju will bring your stuffs, so you don't need to worry..

Dev: thanks daadi..

Daadi: no thanks, just come home soon with Radhika'

He watched her as she walked away.. he came back to reality and found Radhika's face still emotionless and looking at the side .. daadi and Tulsi disappeared... he tried to bring a relief smile as he recollected dadi's words and asking Tulsi to help her with everything..

. he looked down to the bed and found his hands still holding hers'... he never left those, even in his tired sleep, not even when he realized his daadi is around, he didn't feel like leaving it for a second, to walk out with Daadi.. he just kept them safe in his.. he looked again at Radhika's face. She looked at him with her pale eyes'

Dev: how are you feeling now?..

RAdhika didn't say anything.. but just looked at him unbelievably'.. he tried to read her eyes..

Dev: Radhika.. you still look tired , take rest..

She didn't turn her look away.. still kept her eyes on him for an answer..

maybe now he understood what's in her mind..

Dev in his softest voice : you lost your conscious on our way, that is why I brought you here., little far away from our home, but... he tried to reason, and met her unsatisfied eyes again..

Dev: RAdhikaaa, don't look back at your past. I know it was/ is painful.. . we can't change the past , but it is over.. and now I am here with you to share that pain'... and I know why you went to Shivpur again...!.

in a wet tone he tried to spill those broken words out..:. you never thought of me for a second.. my face never came in front of your eyes.?. .. how can you think of leaving me alone like that Radhika.. I am incomplete without you and I can't take a step without thinking about you.. then how could you take such a big decision ...maybe my ego forced me to act differently with you, to pretend in front of you that i can live happily without you.. to show you off my fake stand... I know many things happened, and all were talking about us. But I don't care about that. I don't want them to understand or clear their doubt in our relationship. I failed to convince you that, that is why you walked away from me,..

the shaking voice of his throat reached her ears.., she saw the peeking tear drop in his eyes.. but she lay still, looking deep into his eyes..

The sound of Birju brought them back to reality. He kept the bag on the table and asked for anything else before walking out understanding Dev's silent response...

Dev looked back again at RAdhika's face. He lowered his face and placed a soft kiss over her cold hands and then with little hesitation released her hand'...

went and opened the bag and took a fresh pair of dress and moved to the restroom'

RAdhika looked at her hand where she felt the warmth of his lips. She felt it shivering as he left it free ... she felt the cold again..

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Nurse: so Mrs. Purohith, how are you feeling now?.

She just looked at the nurse plainly.

The nurse checked on the fluid bag and said: you are so lucky dear, you have got such a caring husband. You should have seen his face when he brought you here in his arms. He did shout at everyone to get the immediate help possible for you especially when he heard the Dr asking him to register your name first... he said RAdhika..

But then Dev came out all freshen up..

Dev: I feel good sister..

Nurse: hum.. we were thinking of bringing another fluid stand for you, you didn't eat or drink anything , right?. Anyway now your wife looks better, so you both can try to have something to eat.. and ha Mrs. Purohith, if you can eat and drink well, then we can discontinue this fluid and you may be able to go home soon too..

Dev: Thanks sister, I will make sure she eat something..

Nurse: good.. call me if you need anything.. ok..

Dev: sure sister..

He went and sat near her and stroked over her head, looking into her eyes he asked: how are you feeling now ..?

She just nodded her head conveying she feels good..

Dev: lets' try to eat something.. I hope Birju brought something good, tastier to tongue... ha ha..

he tried to bring back his normalcy into it..

Radhika watched him as he opened the tiffin bag and she watched him coming near to her with a plate.. he tried to feed her but she didn't open her mouth..

Dev:o k, I also think this food doesn't smell tasty.. let me call daadima, and ask her to cook something tastier herself..,... you don't know Radhika she is a very good cook, it's been long since she got into kitchen, she is so lazy you know. She make me to cook for her when Birju take leave.. but still she won't get in there. But now , let me ask her to do it... as she doesn't have any other choice. and then looking back at her.. ok , one second, let me grab my phone.

He saw her automatically opening her mouth.. with a smile he placed the food in her mouth..

Dev: ye hui na bath.. don't worry Radhika.. vaise ye khana bhi thoda acha hoga, Birju only made this na. ..aur dadine bhej diya na hamareliye'...eat only as you feel , ok. But at least try some.. it will surely help you.. she took few more bites and Dev understood her struggling to swallow it down...

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Dev: ok baba, now let me try some..ok,

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Dev: how are you feeling now?

Radhika forced herself to get the words out, but it couldn't pass the lump..

Dev: don't worry Radhika, you will feel better soon, OK.. he just looked into her eyes.. his cell phone rang, he attended it .. she just watched him throughout.. time just passed by.. she wake up in a jerk.. and found him still holding onto her hand and sleeping sitting on that chair next to her bed.

she looked at his sleeping face. His face was looking calm.. all the memories flashed through her.. from the time he shouted at her coming late to work to the time she walked away from him ... it was a freezing moment for her and may be for him too..

I just ran away from there, I saw you moving on your life, but deep in mind I know , I hurt you badly and you are hurting yourself badly, to show me that you are happy..

I wish I have listened to you once, and accepted your words that i need you in my life...,

I wish I didn't made that comment.. that I don't need your help, I can stand on my own,..

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I wish I held you tight in my arms as you forced me to walk with you in front of the media people,..

I wish you should have just looked into my eyes and read my mind and held me tight in your arms close to your heart, to calm me down, and made me feel everything will be alright..

But alas! I can't hold back that time .. as you said, we cannot do anything now to get back there..

but is there is any hope for my existence now. Her other hand just stroked over her lower tummy as she thought of that, this would have never happened if I have tightened my hold on your hand'...

He looked at her closed eyes, he felt calm.. but his forehead tightened as he noticed the wet streak on her cheek.. he lifted his hand up, and dried them softly.. she felt the warmth of his love as she felt his soft lips over her forehead'.

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Thank you for reading my post today. Take care Devika P.S: questions or doubts.. ask me..😃

HI DI!!!SORRY FOR LATE RESPONSE OF 2ND PART.
(di firstly read 2nd para,in my opinion ,for continuity i needed to write like this only.)
U told that u expected yelling from me,right.now why should i hesitate in telling my true feelings na.this was the first time i responded for telling only that i have read ur update but hide what i really want to tell.After reading update and before post part where u appreciated geet fans so much,i was really hurt and was going to tell my inner feelings but then i read priya's comment and then ur response.Don't know why i felt like i should not tell u what wanted and at last after 2 days sent the response.I thought may be geet fans supported u ,praised u always ,write very great things always so i took step back and above that it was the story of geet as others said,i had no objection with that but u know radev love is different.In this,what was the main reason of dev leaving radhika inbetween way,his ego nothing else na so how could this be possible for our radev ,how could have we accepted that.

but now i am really really proud of u .u know why bcoz radev fan remains radev fan whatever it is.its true that u started with geet but as past only i think ,the present which u are writting ,there is no ego,only radev's love .i can sense its a radev story only,its our dev and its our radhika.u can not write against that love.As u said u started geet after cb1 end ,similarly i also saw but for 1 or 2 that also not complete,inbetween changing channels bcoz i could not connect with it like u ,i didn't know story of that but they used to argue fight for small small things,i don't want to hurt anyone here ,am sorry if i am hurting,this is my viewpoint only that i could not find that endless love,to understand other first which is our radev love.

one more thing,i don't know but i feel like we could not pass our emotions,our feelings,our love to ur ff to u.but i tried my best always.ur ff is only of real life where there is no villian but only the strengths and weeknesses on the basis of which story always is moving.we also used to live in dreamworld like we will get this ,that but when we don't get that we feel hurt.U know truly i learnt the lesson to take not words as like but try to find the real meanings which was rads mistake,i used that only one 2 days ago and 4 to 5 days ago too.whenever i feel hurt ,u know ur story comes in my mind.one that frog story too.
I used to beg update or frankly told what we need that was not for hurting u di and it never meant that u are not writting good or a bad writer.I felt like i can say and know u very well so only.

I THINK IT BECAME ENOUGH NA,I SHOULD STOP NOW.but really di these 2 updates were so so good ,touching that i can't control to read the next one,wonderfull .

thanks a lot for being with us ,thanks a lot.

Really intreseting story so far. I loge it so far! I can't wait for your next update!