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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasia.

This is brilliant shivi!! .. Nupur's fear had me in shivers too .. she is one soft candy trying to showcase herself in a walnut shell .. can so relate to her character ..

Mayank was sweet and soft and can't wait for ahead ..

Continue soon ..
❤️



thank u so much fantu🤗

Originally posted by: Payal-15

Shivi i loved the Harley Davidson ride...its one of my fav brands in clothes too lately😆


n about Nupur's fiesty reactions n fears n Mayank expaining it wid a in the face story but like that to a kid...ahh just loved it all!!!!!!!!!👏⭐️

now post next part NOW😳😆



thank u so much pallu🤗...posting😆

Originally posted by: mayurlove

very nice update.

Thnx for pm.😊


thnx:)

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Shivi
beautiful update
awww i just loved it dear
nups and maynk both r very sweet and cute
beautifully written
keep it up



thnks faria:)


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Posted: 14 years ago
thnks:)

thnks:)

Originally posted by: capricornFA

shiviii🤗 🤗
again marvellous update😳😳

well its realy true dat every girl has to put some shield around her so as 2 protect herself from surroundin environment in new town,for achievin dis she has 2 develop some ego and sometimes rude behaviour... and u have presented so well in case of nupur👏 ...dat inspite of her ego she is definitely fragile and delicate from core,its just a shell around her 2 keep her safe😳

well ur mayur is just opposite of mayur of mjht😳 thought i realized it earlier but im sayin it now😆...and dats realy great cz sometimes its very tedious 2 see same monotonous😆

great work🤗...luv ya🤗 update soon😳



yes my mn are different from the actual show😆

thank u so much fari🤗...love ya🤗

Originally posted by: kirti123

enjoyed reading it

amazing part😊



thnx:)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

still grinnin after reading d whole update!!!
awesum update shivi
luvd it!
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm🤗



thanks supriya🤗

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

beautiful to say the least...cant wait 4 mayank to come out with his feelings 4 nupur audibly...plzzz continue soon shivi..its getting thoroughly interesting u see😳



thnkx pallabi😳

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

ufff...shiviii...u r just BRILLIANT...👏👏
too gud re...too gud...when ever i read ur updates...i justtt...go awww...😍
meri smile tu rukti hi nai...😆
u r moving the story...beautifully shivii...😳👏
i can understand Nupur's fear...all alone...but mayu is tu sweetheart...😳
i just LUV there convo...n u r writing it amazinglyyy...👏👍🏼
just too gud...continue soon sweetyyy...😳
i just can't wait to know wot Nexttt..??
😃
its getting interesting n interesting 😳
luv yaaa...❤️
Annu🤗




thank u so much annu di...love ya too🤗

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Cute part
I'm luvng this story more and more
cont soon



thnx:)


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Prada_176

Part 9

Entertaining part

Their convo is fun to read totally hilarious and witty

Yes with your sprained ankle I can totally imagine you running behind me with a knife to stab me."😆😆

Beautifully written


Originally posted by: Prada_176

Part 10

Smiling like idiot through out the update

I loved Mayank bed time story

"Miss Ego was a new girl in town. She could be nice and gentle if she wished but she loved to put up a feisty side. She thought she could scare anyone with her kung-fu moves but the truth was she was easily scared. She was fun to be with unless you hit the wrong chords. She had a beautiful smile that is when she cared to smile. There was only one major folly with her. She had a huge swollen ego that disallowed her to analyze the situation rationally and say sorry."

With her limping legs, she dreamt of murdering me someday. So Rocky this was all for tonight mate."🤣🤣

Amazing update

Continue soon



thnks:)

Originally posted by: aysha_mayur

Shiviii

🤗
AWSOME UPDATE!!!...I just loved it!!!!!😳
Hayeee can't wait for Mayank-Nupur romance...I m sure jitne fierce woh hain utna hi fierce unka romance hoga☺️🤣
and I loved Mayank's Bedtime story😳😳🤣
Jaldi update kar ladki😳



thank u so much shu...love ya
🤗
🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
This ff is freakin aweesome! I mean right from the first chapter, your addicted. I simply loved your characters. From outside they're something and from the inside something else... & the cat-dog fights they have are hillarious.. 😆 And of course Mayank's flirty nature... Gosh! I think I'm addicted to this ff... update veryy soon. :)

Its simply amazing, you write really really well... Please PM me next time you update. :)

-SilentPrincess-


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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 11

"I still can't believe it!"

"Liu, it's true."

"Man what an act! He puts up on this whole drab of discipline and ethical research and principles and this is the reality of that f**king bas***d!"

"Shhh…lower your voice. Everyone will get to know."

"I don't care. Morgan needs to be taught a lesson. He made a pass at you and he thinks he can hold your marks? Nupur how did you handle it? Girl, I m so proud of you."

"Well at the start it was pretty hard. Then I learnt an important lesson that I just need to trust myself."

She passed me the amniotic sample. We were in the hospital lab doing our work and discussing about the pervert Dr Morgan in hushed tones.

"So what are you going to do now?"

"Liu, I have a plan. I will complain to the hospital dean with proof."

"Proof?"

"We will scourge it from his emails and stuff. The monster will be nailed."

"Woah Nupur! Brilliant idea. I know of a guy in the Chinks market who is a good hacker. I see a remarkable change in you."

"What's that?" I raised my eyebrows.

"You seem so relaxed about it. And I love your confident smile."

"It's nothing Liu. As I said I am just trusting myself to walk."

"It seems as if someone has done some magic on you and changed your entire persona." Winking she went back to write down the readings flashing in the computer screen.

"Concentrate on work Nupur." I reminded myself.

REAGENTS:

Pro-Lab Amniotest consists of disposable swabs impregnated with Nitrazine yellow dye. The swabs are packaged in individual sleeves. Swabs are sterilized by gamma radiation and are sterile until opened…………………………………..

I saw my smiling image reflecting on the glass table below the papers. Your smile. It's beautiful…

Zzz………zzz.zzz…zzz…..zzz……zzz….zzz

I picked up my cell on silent mode vibrating like a maniac. My heart almost did a somersault seeing the number flashing in my cell.

"Hey Mayank."

"Hey Saxena. Are you free tonight?"

"I'll have to check my schedule. "I said edgily. I tried to control the excitement palpable in my voice at the prospect of meeting him again.

"Don't worry it's not a date. I am sorry to break your heart babes."

"Mayank!"

"It's Lauren's birthday today. Lauren you met her at the games. Remember?"

Lauren. Yes she I was the blonde chick with envious pouted lips. I had wondered at the amount of plastic hanging in there.

"I do remember. But she is your friend. How can I come?"

"You are my friend now. That way you become her friend too. I am not used to hearing a no."

"There is a first for everything in life Mayank."

"Bang on Saxena! So finally you agree to come. The Riverdale Edge, Westside.10 pm."

"But I never said a …."

"I'll be waiting."

"You won. I sighed. Cool."

"See you then, bye."

My heart was pounding loud and clear. I felt the hot blood rushing in my veins. I felt the world coming to a standstill. Only every part of my body was alive. My happiness knew no bounds.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………..

"I like him…… I like him not."

I plucked out the petal of the dried orchid as I repeated the lines.

"I like him…"..why do I like him? Surely I can't fall for him. How can I trust him?

"I like him not…"I don't need to trust him. Trusting myself is enough. There has to be some explanation why I am feeling so jumpy and prancing around in my room with a flower. He has just invited me to his friend's birthday bash. Not sure if there is anything like love but I can't deny the fact that I was hating that time was moving so slow.

Dia' call brought me back from the myriad thoughts debating in my mind.

"Dia ….you are the one who I was wanting to talk now!"

"Usually at this time you are engrossed in your work for the next day. What's troubling you? Or rather who's troubling you?"

"Troubled ? who me? No way. Just wanted to know if cream top matches with dark blue denims."

"Where have you hidden my Nupur? This girl on the phone is interested in fashion!"

"Very funny Dia. I just needed an advice for a….for my friend Liu. She wanted to know. And as you know I had no clue."

"Ah..it's Liu…tell her to add a squash jacket to it."

"Liu is thanking you."

"Liu is welcomed. Now out with the truth. What happened? You are asking for fashion tips. And you sound so happy. Is something special happening tonight?"

"Nothing special is happening." I wished she would not grill me.

"Nothing?...there has to be something you are hiding…OMG….did he kissed you last night?"

"What?? …NO…Dia you think too much! I told you we are just friends."

"If he didn't kiss you then you are right."

"Did you call to discuss this? How can you leave poor Ian alone?" I tried to divert the topic.

"No…I called to ask a medical advice from you."

"Sure. Go ahead."

"What you use when you get insect allergy? We went to explore the jungle in one of those small Hawaiian islands and Ian contracted infection in his fingers."

"Use…NASONEX…it should work. Between why you guys needed the jungle to romance? Bedroom is more hygiene."

"Eww…that 's gross Nupur. But very useful advice. Don't worry Doc we will follow your instructions."

"You'd better." We laughed.

"Now go and get it for Ian."

"Yup. Thank a lot hon. Bye"

"Anytime Dia."

I turned to ransack my wardrobe for a squash colored jacket.

………………………………………………………………………………………..

10:45 pm. I was a bit late.

Hurrying I went inside. The restaurant was crowded. I tried searching for him.

"Hey Nupur!"

"Jake…hey…well Mayank invited me here."

"Good you came. We are going to have a blast. The birthday girl is yet to arrive."

"And Mayank?"

"He arrived already. He must be around here only."

"Thanks Jake. "I craned my neck to spot him.

At the far corner there were arms wrapped around so tightly you can't distinguish if it's one person or two. He was there kissing Isabelle.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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So when the girl started to dream, she was jolted back to reality!! .. SIGH!.
Some people should not dream.

Beautiful shivi!. .. wish nupur can teach Morgan a good lesson!
Continue soon . ❤️

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Once a flirt...always a flirt...
Poor Nupur... she just started dreaming... and her dreams are already shattered...
Awesome update eagerly waiting for Nupur's reaction, continue soon Shivani. :)

-SP-
Edited by .SilentPrincess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
This was Amazing! m loving the way the story is proceeding..really wanna see how N handles Morgon...do cont soon:)
thanx fr the pm :)
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
here again the stark reality hits nupur way too poignantly,just when the girl was trying to start afresh,brewing a new dream in her heart,everything got back to square one..sigh!! i myself am feeling humiliated seeing nupur's broken dreams n trust as an aftereffect of one master stroke, being initiated by the person she had started to love..continue soon shivi💔

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