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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuri16

its awesome.🤗...
luved abhiya's romance.😳☺️...very well written 👏
thnx 4 the pm😊...continue sooon...


thanks a lot...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sdoll

WOw!!! so niceee.


thanks...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 8

[dobriyal house]

Arnab: madhu….mujhe lagta hai ki ab time aa gaya hai ki ab panchi ki bhi shaadi ho jaaye

Madhu: tum sahi keh rahe ho…par panchi…uska kya….kya wo manegi

Arnab: she has to agree

Panchi overhears everything.

Panchi: no dad…it wont happen. Main shaadi nahi karungi

Arnab: tumhe karni hogi…hum tumhe hamesha ke liya yaha nahi rakh sakte

Panchi: toh kya main burden hu?

Arnab: tumhe jo samajhna hai samjho…par ab hum tumhe aur yaha nahi dekh sakte….u have to get married

Panchi is crying and taking her keys of car….she leaves

Madhu: thoda jyaada nahi ho gaya

Arnab: I know…par mere paas koi option nahi tha…pia is married…she is smaller..aur ab panchi ke liye log baatein bana rahe hai….i had to do this.

Meanwhile panchi is crying and driving her car like a maniac. She is angry….but more than being angry she is disheartened. She cant understand why her parents are doing this. Panchi is thinking all these things when suddenly a truck comes driving fast towards her. She is freezed at the moment and doesn't know whats happening. She tries to apply brakes but is unable to do so. She pulls the stearing in other direction and the car skids turning upside down by hitting a tree. Panchi falls on ground and is bleeding.

[raichand house]

Pia is very tensed. She is feeling uneasy. Abhay is watching her carefully.

A: kya hua pia…tum itni tension main kyu ho

P: pata nahi…but I am not feeling good…something is not right…kuch bura honewala hai

A: cmon pia…m with u..kuch nahi hoga…vaise bhi we we will be going tomorrow for our honeymoon…so think about that…

P: plz abhay….i don't know but

Abhay comes near pia and hugs her.

A: its alrite…kuch nahi hoga

Suddenly a pia's cell starts ringing. Pia picks it up. But pia is shocked to hear it. pai is unable to move.

A: kya hua….pia…kya hua…

P: abhay wo….wo….panchi

A: panchi kya?

P: panchi ka accident ho gaya hai..she is in hospital….we need to go

Abhay and pia go to meet panchi.

[hospital]

Dobriyals along with abhay and pia are waiting. Madhu is crying while pia and misha are consoling her. Panchi is in operation theatre. Doctor comes out.

Madhu: ab panchi kaisi hai…wo theek to hai na

Arnab: kuch toh boliye doctor

Doc: panchi is out of danger but

Pia: but kya

Doc: she is in coma. Aur kab tak bahar aayegi hum kuch bol nahi sakte.

Pia starts crying and abhay is holding her. Panchi is brought out and shifted to room. Everyone follows her. Sid also arrives in the mean time. He sees panchi lying there in that state. He is not able to control himself. abhay notices pain on his face and realizes that sid has finally fallen for a girl.

A: sid….i want to talk to u

S: but…

A: now

Abhay takes sid in corner

A: whats happening….i mean u…u liked panchi

S: yes abhay…I started liking her but…but its over

P: no its not over….sid u are a vampire…why cant u heal her

S: pia….its not possible…panchi has hurt herself….but the wounds are not outside but inside…I cant heal her internal wounds…I wish pia…I wish I could do that…

A: everything will be fine sid….

S: I hope so

Here I end it….i know it was short and there was no abhiya romance and u all were waiting for it eagerly…but I wanted to do this to panchi since a long time…I am sad breaking sid's heart…..but I had to do this…next part will be full abhiya….i promise….but I still hope u like it seeing "her" this way….press like button if u like it and do comment…

Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update... I hope Panchhi will be fine... continue soon
Edited by pari_smart - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update!lol,peehu,dat was naughty!!haha!waiting 4 abhiya..n thanx 4 pm!
Edited by abhiora - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
short and nice update peehu
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Short n nyc update peehu😊
Edited by Beb0 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice peehu. Keep it up. Liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update!
Hahaha. . U did it to panchi ! But i'm feeling sad for sid. .
I want to see him happy. . He deserves happiness
eagerly waiting for abhiya's romance
thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
Peehu thanks yaar finally birdie ka kucha to kiya waiting for next update

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