~Maine Pyar Kiya~FF Maaneet *Thread 1* - Page 39

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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing update!! i liked it coz u made maan say those three magical words first and geet going all shy and not saying it!!! aik chumma to banta tha BOSS!! hahahahahahahah... neva mind we'll hav it the next tym!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee!!!!
finally maneet said those magical words to each other!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful songs
all three splendid update
love it core
excellent job
sweety
muah
bless yu
thnx back to back updates
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...both said i love you...amazing...n by the end...maan asking whether they can kiss...will they kisss?????awww...n now back to KC...cant wait for that n samaira john n sasha's reaction...haha...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 15

Maaneet went to the office separately. They didn't want anyone knowing the status of their relationship. Their relationship was just blossoming and they wanted to enjoy cultivating their love. Maan ignored Geet and only talked with her if he needed to. Sumaira, Sasha and John noticed. "We finished this love story before it even began"...Sumaira boasted and all of them gave a high 5.

Adi was the only one that knew Maaneet were seeing each other. Adi had a smug look seeing the enemy side celebrating.


Adi sir we really missed you when you went Mumbai".

"Really? I wonder why!" he fixed his glasses. "People MK has called a meeting as soon as he comes into the office..so as you know kisi ki khair nahin".

Maan walked in with his entourage and went straight to his cabin to make a call. He looked around to see if anyone was watching..he knocked on Geet's cabin which was ajoint to his. Geet came near the glass. Maan was resting his hand on the glass, she mirrored it. Both smiled. Maan gestured with his hand pointing to himself "I" and then with his thumb and fingers made a heart "Love" and then pointed at Geet "You". Geet blushed and shook her head...Tasha walked in Maan's office. Geet ran to her seat.

All the staff gathered round and Maan walked in his typical MSK style. "Today I will start by saying what happened at the party was despicable, unprofessional and beyond comprehension. I Maan Singh Khurana will not tolerate anyone harassing any employee..Geet is an employee just like all of you and what you John done that night..well lets put it this way that if you were not family friend I would have handed you to the police for sexual harassment...I demand all my staff to be treated with utter most respect..understood? From now on no one will mention what happened that night. I am a professional man and I do not like gossip".

The staff were looking at Geet and felt sorry for her that Maan was so callous towards her- she was just an employee-they registered that in their brain. Sumaira smirked that Maan was not involved with her. "Okay back to business...Geet!" he raised his voice. She got up nervously.

"Yes sir?"

"You were suppose to finish this project by today and may I ask why it isn't finished?" he asked her with a tinge of naughtiness in his eyes. The tone he used suggested he was being a hitler.

"You have no answer..may I ask what have are you up to these days that you were at home while we went to the factory opening so why isn't it finished?". She pleaded with his eyes that you know everything. "Sir main busy ti ".

"Geet MSK does not like excuses, you better pull yourself together otherwise you will have a grave punishment". He kept a straight face. Sumaira, Sasha, Tasha and John all looked happy seeing Geet being told off.


"Dekha Sumaira tumara raasta ab saaf hain..get close to MK"...

"Yes Sasha you wait and watch now"...Sumaira went off and phoned her father to tell him the good news.

Maan called Geet in his cabin. She came in looking annoyed. "Geet come and sit with your notepad I missed you". She never replied. "Geet why the long face?"

"You told me off infront of everyone and said I was just like any other employee". She smacked the pad on the desk.

"Aur nahin toh kiya kehta that I love you so the Sumaira gang can make your life hell..believe me I would have made soorma of his hadeeya if he ever did that again". Geet realised she had made him angry. "Maan haan wo aap kahe rahe teh uss raat ke you have something important to tell?"

" I love you"

"Arre Maan I know that but.."

"That was what I was going to tell you". Geet smiled and he got up and took her hand. He was about to come close that Tasha walked in. Maaneet separated.

Geet was in her cabin and Sumaira walked in. She purposely made loud stiletto sounds. "Geet I warned you and I was right, see MK has called you a ordinary employee now, so I take your friendship is no more? He must have seen the real side of you. You village girls only go after rich men to take advantage. You watch how I make MK mine right under your nose". Geet looked on at this strange girl. Maan rang "Geet what did that monkey want?"

"Same old Maan is mine etc" she rolled her eyes. "What did you say?" Maan asked teasingly. "What can I say your mine already".

"Oh really?"

"Yes really now put the phone down and stop flirting".

"Geet I feel like hugging you" he lowered his baritone.

"MSK control yourself we are in office"

"Geet why don't you say something nice you always trying to get rid of me".

She nervously knotted the phone cord. "Uhhh well Maan ..I'm too shy to say anything...Maan today you look dot dot dot dot..now you work it out?!"

Maan shook his head..she can't even say sexy? "So do you"

"What Maan?"

"You look dot dot dot dot...SEXY too" he whispered. "Maan!" she said in a state of shock. "Geet we make a sexy couple".

Sasha walked in and Maan changed his tone. "Well speak to you later". He put the phone down. "MK it's nice to see you in a good mood again..a smile always suits you..you got a nice glow to you". Maan thanked her for the compliment.

All the staff left early and only Maaneet were in the office. Maan walked in smirking at the chance of being alone with Geet. She was busy finishing off. "Geet chalo chale"

"Maan thora kaam hain panch minute...otherwise kal meri class pir sabke saamne loge". Maan shut the files and looked at her and then pulled her up. "I want to take you somewhere before we go home". Maan took her to a local park...it was huge with lots of trees and flowers..there even was a small river with ducks and fishes. Both were walking side by side and suddenly Maan took her hand and both began walking like a couple. "Geet at home we can't meet each other properly and nither at the office so that's why I bought you here..I want to be near you touch you..".


"What makes you think I will let you touch me here?". She began running away from him and he ran after.

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Geet stopped breathless near tree..She was scared of his intentions. Ye phoolo ka mausam, ye joolu ka mausam

She moved away while he was coming closer.

Arre bhool na koi karna hain bhoolo ka mausam

Maan grabs her hair seductively and brings her face close. She looks at his intense eyes.

Tere bina jag lagta hain soona

Geet puts her dupatta across barring his glance.

Shaadi se pehle muje nahin choona mm, mmm mmm

He tried to touch and she stops him. Maan attempts to kiss her but she keeps moving him away.

Ab ke baras ikraar kare ge, agle baras hum pyar kare ge

Maan gets irritated that she is not letting him close.

Naam na le barso ka, kar vaada kal parso ka, ek ek pal saal se doona, tere bina jag lagta hain soona

He pins her near a tree to kiss her.

Aaa

She moves her face.

Na na na

He is about to walk off in a huff that she grabs his hand and explains shyly.

Choti umar ki main naar naveli, main kya jaanu ye prem pehli

Maan smiles at her innocence and covers her eyes and then hugs her from behind.

Bhool ke saari batiya, meech le apni ankiya, tuj ko dekhao pyar ka namoona

Geet turns around seductively and Hugs Maan and sings.

Tere bina jag lagta hain soona

Maan teases her that she cannot touch him before marriage and she rans after him and he picks her up and puts her in the car to go home.

Shaadi se pehle muje nahin choona na na na

Kumkum was worried why Maaneet were taking so long. "Adi ye Maan bi na uss bechari ko bi kitna kaam karvata hain..poora din uss dusht ke saat kaise guzarti hogi?". Adi smirked *If only Maa you knew!".


Precap; Maaneet break the bed.😲

Previous: Part 14
Next: Part 16

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
are yeh kya hogaya. me first to comment yaar. i was posting for more demands but it just landed under ur update😆😆😆😆😆😆. i ammm sooo happy that i am commenting first. sooo far the update is nice. chalaak maaneet. doosro ko dhokha de rahe hain😆😉


ohhh sooo sweeet nadiya. i love this updating thing. pls update soon yaar i have to go work. or pls pls pm me and i can read from blackberry. can we pls pls have maaneet kiss sooon😉. and i know u will make it magical because in romantic scene u r guru😉 i know i am demanding more but u know i am one of ur greediest reader😉
Edited by jasraj123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
SO FAR UPDATE IS FANTASTIC😳😳 U REALLY R THE BEST...I LOVE YOU❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
OOOHHH GRAVE PUNISHMENT..WE ALL KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS😆😆😆😆

AHEM AHEM ON THE WAY😳😳 KEEP IT UP NAADIA!!! LOVING THE UPDATE😉

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