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Posted: 14 years ago
bidzyy dear finished reading this one too...
ab mein kya bolu...loved all teh chapterzz...specially Taanu n Mayur confession scenes were damnn good...it was sooo sooo sooo ROMANTIC...
n i must say tht my heart was beating very strongly after reading all those MN n AT scenes😳😳
Sr.insp abhijeet was coool ha...thnk god..i thot u forgot him :P
n the promo was MINDBLOWINGGG
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u everyone for ur precious responses and here's the last chapter of this story .. 😳

happy reading!!
love
bidushy ❤️



Chapter-19

With the rise of the sun, everyone went busy in their daily activities as it was an ordinary day for them .. But for Anurag, Taani, Mayank and Nupur, it was a very special day .. They were going to start a new part of their lives with the ones they loved the most ..

"Taani, Taani!", Mayank gently caressed Taani's forehead and whispered in her ear .. "Uthja behena ..", he said to her again with brotherly affection ..

"Bhai! Sone de naa.", Taani murmured in her sleep .. Mayank giggled and said, "Taani, aaj teri shaadi hai ..", and as he said that, he could see Taani's cheeks turn red due to blush ..

Taani shyly smiled in her sleep and said, "Tu jaa, main aati hoon .." Saying that, she pulled the blanket over her face .. Mayank shook his head and chuckled ..

***

"Nupur, yeh acchi hain?", Anurag showed Nupur a red-coloured lehenga excitedly .. Nupur saw the lehenga from top to bottom and smilingly hugely, she nodded .. "Great! Toh phir yeh pehenkar dikha ..", Anurag said grinningly .. Nupur nodded and turned around to the trial room but just then something struck her mind and she stopped .. "Dada!", she said turning back ..

Anurag said smilingly, "Haan bol!" Nupur walked closer and said with sisterly love, "Main aap ke liye woh sherwani select kiya hai ..Aap please try karke dikhaiye naa .." Saying that, she pointed out to the beautiful off-white coloured sherwani .. "Meri choti behen ne mere liye select kiya hai, acchi toh hogi hi naa ..", Anurag said to Nupur pulling her cheeks and Nupur smiled ..

Nupur wore the lehenga her brother Anurag had chosen for her .. As she came outside, she had an ocean-sized smile on her face seeing her big bro standing in front of her and looking so handsome in the sherwani she had chosen for him ..

"Waah dada! Aap toh hot lag rahe ho! Taani toh aap ko dekhkar behosh ho jayegi ..", Nupur said teasingly but Anurag was in a different world .. His eyes were shining with tears which didn't go unnoticed by Nupur .. "Dada, aap ro kyun rahe ho?", she asked him innocently ..

Anurag cupped Nupur's face in his hands and said, "Tujhe dulhan ki jore mein dekhna maa-bauji ka sapna tha aur aaj woh sapna pura hone jaa raha hai .."

Tears flowed from Nupur's eyes .. She was not in a state to speak anything, instead, she just hugged her brother tightly who hugged her back ..

***


Taani came to the drawing room wearing her as-usual kurti and jeans and seeing that, Mayank frowned .. "Taani, tune dekha nahi kya ki maine tere liye kuch rakkha hai tere bistar par?", he said. Taani made a sad puppy face and said, "Sorry bhai, maine dhyaan nahi diya .. Abhi jaakar dekhti hoon .." Mayank smilingly said, "Good! Jaldi jaa aur fatafat ready hokar aa .." Before Taani could question him, Mayank left from there .. Taani confusedly went to her room ..

Mayank was pacing outside Taani's room, waiting for her .. "I hope ki usse woh pasand aaye.." he said to himself nervously ..

"Bhai!", a voice from Taani's doorway alarmed him .. He immediately turned back and saw his little angel in the beautiful pink lehenga .. Seeing that, he felt his heart contented with immense joy .. Tears of joy formed in his eyes ..

"Bohot sundar lehenga hai, thank you so much ..", Taani said emotionally looking at Mayank who was finding too hard to say anything .. He just headed close to Taani and kissing her forehead, he said with teary eyes, "Bilkul pari lag rahi hai meri behen .."

Tears brimmed in Taani's eyes too .. "Bhai!", she said emotionally and hugged Mayank .. After they broke their hug, Mayank said to Taani smilingly, "Chal aaj rone-dhone ka din nahi hai .. Shaadi ki shopping bhi toh karni hai .. Waise bhi, Anurag aur Nupur toh shopping karke vapaas aate hi honge .. Tu so rahi thi iss liye main nahi jaa paaya unn dono ke saath, aur Anurag ne bhi kaha ki tujhe disturb naa kare .."

Hearing Anurag's name, Taani's cheeks turned crimson red .. "Bhai, main ready hokar aati hoon ..", she said and shyly ran to her room .. Mayank laughed ..


***


Soon it was evening and as everything was planned, all four would meet up in the temple after their shopping .. Anurag and Nupur was already there in the temple .. Anurag was talking to the priest and Nupur was standing near the stairs waiting impatiently for Mayank ..

Mayank and Taani got out of the cab .. Taani blushingly ascended the stairs .. Mayank's gaze immediately landed upon Nupur and seeing her in bride's attire, he felt his heart stopped .. Their eyes met which turned into a beautiful eye-lock ..

Taani tapped on Anurag's shoulder while he was talking to the priest .. The touch was obviously familiar to Anurag and it brought a sweet smile on his face .. He slowly turned back and was speechless seeing his 'jhalli' Taani as his bride ..

Mayank ascended the stairs with his eyes still focused on Nupur .. Finally when they were standing close to each other, Mayank whispered huskily in Nupur's ear, "Bohot khubsurat lag rahi hai .." Feeling Mayank's warm breath on her skin, Nupur heaved a deep sigh and smirking, Mayank went inside the temple .. Nupur shyly smiled and followed him ..

Mayank and Nupur stared Anurag and Taani and teasingly smiled .. "Dada!", Nupur said shaking Anurag .. "Taani!", Mayank said shaking Taani and they were back to the reality .. Anurag and Taani embarrassedly lowered their eyes which made Mayank and Nupur giggle ..

The priest was chanting the marriage verses .. The brides and the grooms were stealing glances at each other with a slight smile .. "Aab var vadhu ke maang mein sindoor bhariye aur gale mein mangalsutra daliye ..", the priest said .. The grooms smilingly put sindoor on their brides' forehead and mangalsutra around their necks .. Then they took the 7 pheras around the fire holding each others' hands and with this, they were bonded with one another in an eternal relationship of 7 births ..


***


"Nupur Chatterjee Sharma!", Nupur blissfully smiled as she said that .. She stared deeply at the full moon in the sky and smiled .. The full moon was lighting the world in the dark, just as her life was lightened with the light of her love .. After waiting for months, finally she was with the one she belonged to .. This brought a smile of satisfaction on her face ..

Mayank slipped his hands around Nupur's bare waist which made her shiver .. "Mayank!", she said in a displaced breath but was interrupted as Mayank covered her lips with his palm ..

"Sshh! Kuch mat bol .. Sirf iss pal ko mehsus kar ..", Mayank said to Nupur in almost an whisper and Nupur felt her heart beat really fast ..

Mayank caressed Nupur's hands and entwined their fingers tightly .. Bringing his face a little closer, he kissed her neck and Nupur closed her eyes in pleasure .. Mayank smiled seeing the effect he had on Nupur .. Picking her up in his arms, he led her to the bed and laid beside her ..

They turned towards each other and snuggled closely .. "Mayank, aaj mujhe sab kuch mil gaya..", Nupur said in a breathless voice looking intently in Mayank's eyes ..

Mayank intensely gazed Nupur and smiled as he could clearly see only love for him in her eyes .. He cupped her face and kissed her forehead .. Pulling himself back, he saw her eyes closed and her lips curved in a beautiful smile ..

Smiling, Mayank nuzzled his nose in Nupur's neck and kissed there passionately .. Nupur moaned in pleasure and gripped Mayank's sherwani in her fist ..

Pulling himself back, Mayank turned off the light .. In the dark, he captured Nupur's lips in a deep and passionate kiss and with this, their souls became one for eternity ..


***


Anurag came inside his room .. His jaw dropped .. He was shocked to see the sight in front of his eyes .. His newly wedded wife was sleeping .. Sighing, he laid beside Taani and stared her confusedly .. "Yeh kaisi jhalli biwi mili hai mujhe? Hey Kaali Maa! Isse kuch akal do ..", he thought in mind dramatically ..

"Taani!", Anurag said softly in her ears putting his hand on her shoulder .. "Anu, mujhe sone de..", Taani murmured in her sleep which made Anurag angry ..

"Aaj humari suhag raat hai aur tu so rahi hai? Kya ajib hai yaar!", Anurag said irritatedly and turned his face towards the other side ..

Taani opened her eyes and took a quick glance at the irritated Anurag and mischievously smiled .. Suddenly, she shifted her head from the pillow to Anurag's lap and closed her eyes again ..

Anurag's anger vanished off in a second seeing how innocently his wife Taani was sleeping .. He smiled and gazed at her .. The breeze played with Taani's hairs, flying them on her face which made her even more beautiful .. Anurag tucked the strains of her hairs behind her ears and kissed her cheek ..

Moving back, he noticed the shy smile on Taani's face which was enough to tell him that she was pretending just to pull his leg .. "Ohhoo! Toh meri biwi mere saath natak kar rahi hai .. Abhi dikhata hoon isse ..", he thought and smirked ..

Anurag sensuously caressed Taani's cheek with his fingers .. Taani felt her heart pumping fast .. "Anurag, so ja .. Mujhe neend aa rahi hai ..", she said and laid properly on her side .. Anurag naughtily smiled and snuggling all up to her, he buried his head in her neck and kissed her shoulder ..

Turning Taani to his side, he huskily said, "Taani!" Taani opened her eyes and their eyes met, leading it to a deep, intense eye-lock ..

Taani cuddled to Anurag and hid her face in his chest .. Hugging tightly, they felt each others' warmth with their eyes closed .. Once they broke off, they entwined their fingers tightly and sealed each others' lips with immense love and passion, and with this, they surrendered themselves to each other in the beautiful and magical night ..


***

Finally, after a lot of problems, Anurag-Taani and Mayank-Nupur were happily married .. Their lives were full of joy and peace and they four were enough for each other .. In short, they had made their own peaceful world .. Sharmas and Chatterjees, happily ever after .. 6 months had passed like this ..


***


"Taani! Mera lunch box jaldi de!", Anurag shouted as he was late for his office .. "Aayi!", Taani came running up to him with his lunch box .. "Yeh le!," Taani said and they exchanged sweet smiles at each other ..

"Abhi tu jaa aur sham ko jaldi aana!", Taani said and turned around and suddenly she felt her dupatta stuck with something .. She looked back and blushingly smiled seeing Anurag holding her dupatta so cutely ..

"Jaane se pehele ek good bye kiss!", Anurag said mischievously and Taani, shyly smiling, pecked softly on his cheek .. "Thanks!", Anurag said smilingly and headed towards the main door but he was dumbfounded when he saw a girl at the main entrance looking at him intently .. "Anurag! Main tumhare liye vapas aa gayi hoon!", the girl said and Anurag was hell shocked to react on it ..

"Tum?", he said after a moment of shock .. Taani confusedly stared Anurag and the girl and she felt the earth being snatched beneath her feet when the girl ran and hugged Anurag ..

Anurag forcefully pushed the girl away from him and glaring her angrily, he said, "Ashlesha, tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Aur tumhe yaha ki address kaise mila?"

Ashlesha smilingly said, "Bohot hard work ke baad tumhare ghar ka address mile hai.. Aur tum aise kyun react kar rahe ho? Main toh sirf tumhare liye vapas aayi hoon.."

Taani came in between Anurag and Ashlesha .. "Excuse me! Teri himmat kaisi hui aise ghar mein ghusne ki? Aur tu hai kaun?", she said staring furiously at Ashlesha ..

"Main Anurag ki fiance hoon..", said Ashlesha with pride .. Taani was dumbstruck and she looked at Anurag for an answer ..

"Taani, tu ek minute rukh!", Anurag said to Taani seriously .. "Ashlesha, for your kind information, tumhare aur mere beech aab koi rishta nahi hai .. Woh rishta bohot pehele hi khatam ho gaya tha .. Aur haan, ek baat aur .. Main apni patni ke saath ek khushaal zindagi ji raha hoon, so don't you dare try to come in between us ..", he slipped his hand around Taani's waist and said to Ashlesha emphasizing on each word with furiousness in his eyes ..

Taani smilingly turned her face towards Anurag and stared him lovingly and then at Ashlesha with so much pride .. "Now please get out from here and don't you dare come here again ..", Anurag fumingly said and Ashlesha left from there ..

Anurag took a deep breath to calm down and turn towards Taani to face her .. "Taani!", he said lowering his eyes .. Taani could sense guilt in his voice .. "Mujhe maaf kar-", Anurag was interrupted by Taani as she put her index finger on his lips .. "Kuch kehene ki zarurat nahi hai .. Mujhe tujhse koi safai nahi sunni kyuki main tujhpar khud se bhi jyada yakeen karti hoon ..", she said to Anurag looking deeply in his eyes .. Anurag contently smiled when Taani assured of the trust she had for him .. Without saying anything, they pulled each other in a tight hug ..


***

Mayank stopped his taxi outside "Sur Recording Center" to pick up his wife Nupur .. 30 minutes was left for Nupur's recording to finish, so he decided to wait for her by remaining inside the taxi .. Sighing, he leaned back and closed his eyes and remembered of all the happenings in his life in the past 6 months .. Their marriages and starting of new lives, building up their own peaceful world, his frustration of not getting a job due to his criminal record but even in this bad time, Nupur, Taani and Anurag supported him fully ..

Finally, all was well in their lives .. His sister Taani was happy with her husband and he was obviously happy with his Nupur.. He smiled and looked around his taxi and said to himself, "Agar Nupur meri life mein nahi aati toh pata nahi mera kya hota! Main toh itna frustrate ho gaya tha apne job ko lekar par thanks to my intelligent biwi ki usne mujhe yeh idea diya aur aab main khud se income karta hoon!", as he said so, his face glowed with joy and excitement ..

Soon it was vanished when Mayank saw Nupur talking with an unknown guy.. He felt something burn inside him.. Gosh! He hated this over-possessive nature of his.. But what he could do either! He loved Nupur very dearly and seeing her with another guy was hard for him to digest!

He furiously got out of the taxi and went near Nupur.. "Nupur,I think we are late! Chal ghar chalte hai." Nupur smilingly said to Mayank, "Haan Mayank bas ek minute! Waise, yeh Adhiraj hai.. Main jis gaane ka playback kar rahi hoon, uss gaane ka male singer hai yeh!"

Mayank and Adhiraj introduced themselves to each other by shaking hands with smiling faces .. "Nupur, Anu aur Taani ghar mein humara wait kar rahe hai..", Mayank said to Nupur impatiently and once Nupur and Adhiraj bid farewell to each other, Mayank and Nupur walked towards the taxi..

They sat inside the taxi and Mayank started driving.. Nupur observed Mayank's each and every expression and she could see anger depicting on his face.. "Kya hua Mayank? Aap itne gusse mein kyun lag rahe ho?", she asked him curiously..

Mayank rolled his eyes and said, "Mujhe teri kisi aur ladke se jyada baat karna bilkul pasand nahi hai..", and this made Nupur chuckle..

"Jalne ki bu aa rahi hai kahi se..", Nupur said teasingly and looked here and there and this added fuel to Mayank's irritation .. "Nupur, shut up!", saying that, Mayank glared Nupur..

Nupur burst into laughter .. Mayank turned his face towards Nupur and his anger disappeared seeing Nupur so innocently laughing and finally he ended up in laughing.. They stared each other smilingly and Nupur rested her head on Mayank's chest..


***

"Chote papaaa, Choti maaa"

"Papaaa, Maaa"


14 years old Mayuri screamed standing near the stairs and sat on the dinning table .. "Yeh charo bhi naa, always late! I'm sure yeh log romance karne mein busy hai!", she said and sighed.. Mayank, Nupur, Anurag and Taani arrived in the dinning room and smiled at Mayuri, who irritated looked at them..

"Princess Mayuri itni irritated kyun hai?", Taani said to Mayuri pulling her cheeks and sat beside her.. Mayuri made annoyed expressions and said, "Choti Maa, mujhe kitni bhukh lagi hai aur aap log itne late kar rahe the.."

Mayank, sitting opposite to Mayuri and next to Nupur, said making a puppy face, "Aww sorry beta! Maaf kardo.. Woh hum fresh ho rahe the baccha!" "Haan haan! Pata hi hai kitna fresh ho rahe the, gaale pe lipstick ka nishaan jo hai jijaji!", Anurag said mischievously and giggled.. Taani and Mayuri giggled, too and Mayank and Nupur was all embarrassed..

"Chup chap se khana khao sab log!", Mayank said glaring at everyone and cleaned the lipstick from his cheek with the tissue.. Nupur shyly lowered her eyes and the rest giggled even more..

"Bhai! Aab attitude marna bandh karo theek hai!", Taani said and laughed and Mayank could not hold his angry-young-man attitude anymore! He laughed and seeing him like that, the rest four laughed to the extent, and with this, they lived happily ever after in their joyful world!


**The End**

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Writer's Note

Here comes the end of Mayur and Taanu journey called "It's all Destiny" .. I'm really very nervous and I really hope that i could give a nice ending to their story .. 😳

Thank you to all of you for your awesome support and appreciations .. A big tiight hug to everyone.. 🤗

Really as it's my 2nd FF with a very common concept of "Journey from Friendship to Love" with pure filmy masalas, I wasn't expecting such a nice response but you guys motivated me a lot .. 😃

Eagerly waiting for your comments/criticize .. 😍

Love
Bidushy ❤️



Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wao dear
that was so lovely and cute ending
I really loved jealous Mayank
thanks for Pm
Waiting for your,s next work
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...very beautiful ending bidu👍🏼
loved jealous mayank,
It has all shades of relationship,bro-sis love
than our own tanu and Mayur,
really Its All Destiny😳
awesome yaar😍
I just loved it.
❤️
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
dearest bidzy...this was damnnn GOOOD...
but im sad as 1 of my fav ff's is ending😭
but...Loved the entire update...
loved the 6 month leap n the 14 yr leap...it was sooo coool...
i have no words to say actually👏👏👏...really HATS OFF TO YOU...
i hope such kinda FF's be shown on INDIAN TELEVISION
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part...
and a lovely ending❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww...
Bidz I thoguht I would get more chapters...
Reading ur FF always got smiles on my face,,,,,,, FF full of filmy masala but also very much in touch with reality...
I just loved it...
And the ending was sooo sweet... Kya bataun... Im lucky ur writing a TaAnu FF... so we can keep in touch...
Loved the FF... Had one of the best ending I ever knew... Love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww you ended it
it was a fab ff
loved thier story beautifully written
enjoyed your ff
please write more mayur ff
thanks for the pm
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kirti123

aww you ended it

it was a fab ff
loved thier story beautifully written
enjoyed your ff
please write more mayur ff
thanks for the pm
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Enjoy "ibaadat" ff naa ;) n thanks every1...

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