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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for commenting late..btw it was just fantstic dear..:)continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrah.

sorry for commenting late..btw it was just fantstic dear..:)continue soon


dont say sorry...😊...thanks for liking😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
abhiya romance wz sooo sweeett!!! i loved it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

abhiya romance wz sooo sweeett!!! i loved it!!


thanks...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 5

Time travels fast. It just feels like yesterday to pia when she first met abhay. She found him rude and arrogant. But some piece of heart always fell for him. Today, pia knows the darkest secret of abhay and one day she is gonna be one of them. Pia is marrying abhay and is in love with him unconditionally.

The preparations are on full swing. Dobriyal house is decorated with lights and flowers. Pia is getting ready for her mehendi. She is very happy as her dream is finally coming true.

M: pia!! U look beautiful

P: thanks misha

Madhu: mera bacha...u look beautiful

Panchi: pia lets go. We gotta go down.

Pia is dressed in purple lehenga with silver beads on it. Her hair is half tied with curls falling on her forehead and face. Panchi and pia walk down stairs together.

Arnab: pia...tum kitni pyaari lag rahi ho

P: thanks papa

Pia is made to sit. Mehendi is being applied on her hands. Pia is blushing continuosly. She cant move her eyes around as she can feel people staring at her. Right now she is craving for abhay. But abhay couldn't be here because it isher mehendi and abhay is not allowed to see her. But aliya and arjun are present.

Aliya: pia...u look beautiful. Mehendi bahot sundar hai

Arjun: I wish abhay yahan hota

Aliya: whats there to wish? We all know what can abhay do

P: errr...vaise wo hai kahan

Aliya: as if u don't know

P: aliya?

Aliya: he is not allowed for mehendi...but

P: but?

Aliya(winking): u know he will come

Mehendi is over. But pia is restless as she hasn't seen abhay the whole day. Pia is in her room alone trying to call abhay. But she is unable to reach him. She calls in raichand mansion, but no one picks up the phone. Pia is now worried. She tries to call abhay one last time. This time he answers her call.

P: abhay..kahan ho tum...mera phone kyu nahi utha rahe

A: mere paas aur bhi bahot jaruri kaam hai pia tumse baat karne ke alava

P: why u behaving so rude abhay? Kya hua?

A: listen pia...m busy. Will talk to you later.

Abhay disconnects the phone. Pia is confused but breaks down. Tears start rolling down her eyes.

P: why? Why abhay? Kyu kar rahe ho tum aisa?

Abhay on the other hand can feel that pia is crying. She is in pain and weeping. Abhay comes to pia's room through window.

A: pia! Open the window

P: go away abhay...i don't want to talk to you.

A: plz pia...let me explain atleast

Pia opens her window to let abhay enter. Abhay sees that pia is still crying. Her eyes are swollen. Abhay hugs pia and kisses on her head.

A: I am sorry pia. But I had to do this

P: but why?

A: pia..our superiors had called us. They came to know that I am marrying a human.

P: superiors?

A: yes..superiors...even vampires are ruled by someone. We call them superiors. Its agains the law to marry a human. But I am breaking all laws. It was necessary at that time to keep them away from you..to keep u safe. Thankfully, when I told them that u will be one of us...they agreed. Otherwise there would have been a war. But they will surely come to check that if I have kept my promise

P: I am sorry abhay. I cant handle when u are away from me.

Abhay wipes tears from pia's eyes.

A: how can u even think that I will be angry and rude with you? U are such a cry baby

P: plz abhay...talk for urself

A: now will you show me your mehendi

P: uske ke liye tumhe mehnat karni padegi

Pia starts throwing pillows on abhay.

P: catch me if u can

A: dont challenge me

P: but I already did

Abhay with a jerk pulls pia's hand towards him. Pia bangs againt his chest. Thers an eyelock between them. Abhay is about to kiss theres a knock on the door. Hearing the knock, abhay disappears within a second.

M: pia what are u doing? Was someone here? I heard u laughing

P: no...no one was here...kaun hoga yaha(it made her smile)

M: alrite then..good nite.

P: goodnite

Misha leaves and abhay appears.

A: kisi ne sahi kaha hai

P: kya?

A: saali

Pia punched abhay in his guts.

The day was over and a new day has risen. Pia is up early today. She is very excited as only one day is left for marriage. Today..its sangeet in dobriyal house. And ofcourse all raichands with abhay would be present too.

M: aaj phir smile kar rahi ho...dream se bahar aao.

P: aww...aaj kuch bhi bolo...I will not be angry..

M: pia...get out of bed.freshen up. Aaj sham ko sangeet hai. U have to look good

P: ok

Without arguing pia leaves to freshen up.

[raichand house]

Arjun: ek din aur...phir pia will be in our family

A: cant u call her bhabhi

Aliya: possessive?

A: never mind

Arjun: pia sounds better

S: its really gonna be fun from 2moro

Abhay rolled his eyes.

A: I will make sure pia is safe from u all...she needs protection from u all notorious vampires

S: bodyguard is back in business again!!

H: enough everyone..get ready...we have to go to dobriyal house

[dobriyal house]

Pia is ready for sangeet. So are others. The guests have started to arrive. Raichands are yet to come. Sometime later, raichands arrive. Abhay is dressed in offwhite sherwani with red embroidery. Pia on the other hand is in pink lehenga.

Abhay and pia are staring at each other. They cant take their eyes of each other. Pia is blushing but still looking at abhay. Abhay is smiling looking at pia.

M: inhe dekho...kab se ek dusre ko ghoore jaa rahe hai

Aliya: rite misha...kuch karna padega

Arjun: par kya

S: romantic close dance..let them have their fun today

Abhay and pia cant hear what the discussion is all about. Right now they all see is each other.

Song main agar kahoon from om shanti om is played.

Sid approaches panchi and asks for dance. Arjun and aliya come together.

Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun (abhay staring at pia)
kehana chahu bhi tho tumse kya kahun
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun (abhay comes and asks pia for dance)
kehana chahu bhi tho tumse kya kahun
Kisi zaaba mein bhi, woh laafaz hi nahi (abhay and pia start dancing)
Ki zin mein tum ho kya tumhe baata sakoon
Mein agar kahoon tumsa haseen ( abhiya are twirling around)
Kaayanaath mein nahi hai kahin
Taaref yeh bhi tho, saach hai kuch bhi nahin (pia falls in abhay's arm)
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun

Shokion mein doobi yeh aadayein, chehare se zalki hui hai(abhay moves hair from pia's face)
Zulf ki ghani ghani ghataein, shaan se dhalki hui hain
Lehrata aanchal hai jaise baadal, bahoon mein bhari hai jaise chandini (abhay and pia hugging)
Roop ki chandini
Mein agar kahoon yeh dil kasha (abhay kissing pia on forehead)
Hai nahin kahin, na hogi kahin
Taaref yeh bhi tho, saach hai kuch bhi nahin (abhiya eyelock)
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun

The music stops but abhay and pia are still staring at each other.



M: guys...song is over...u both can leave each other

Aliya: rehne do misha..aaj inhe kuch nahi dikh raha hai..they cant help themselves.

Misha and aliya leave. Abhay pulls pia in one of the empty room nearby

P: yeh kya kar rahe ho

A: kyu? Tumhe nahi pata?

Abhay moves the strands of her hair behind her ears. Pia starts moving but abhay puls her through waist. Abhay comes closer to pia. Pia is again struggling to move but abhay agains pulls her towards him. This time, pia's earing gets stuck in his sherwani. Pia cant move.

A: ab tum kahi nahi jaa sakti

P: koi aa jaega abhay

Abhay slowly removes the earing from his sherwani. Pia now steps one step backward. Abhay comes near her and starts putting the earing. Abhay is touching her ears slightly making pia tickle.

A: its done pia

P(whispering): abhay

Abhay pulls her hand behind and touches his lips on her shoulder. He starts brushing his lips from shoulder to neck. Pia has given in. abhay leaves her hand and pulls her towards him catching her with her waist. Pia too has her arms around abhays neck. Abhay and pia both give in and start kissing. Pia is feeling so weak that she could have fallen if abhay didn't have his arms around her waist. They leave each other to grasp some air.

A: I love you

P: I love you too.

They hug each other.

Precap: abhiya marriage with their romance

I tried my best to give you a nice update...spare me today if I didn't live upto ur expectations...but I still hope u like it...press like button if u like and comment

Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very romantic update peehu. loved it.
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
how cute just loved your especially precap, sorry was not able to reply u earlier
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Posted: 13 years ago

awasome update dear

loved it😊
thnx for d pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc pehu...
i loved it..
abhay n pia r really romantic...
they r so cosy yr... i cant stop imagening it...
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice peehu...u really did gr8 job...😊😛
loved abhiya romance...i cud just imagine...😊
update soon...marriage will be a big big treat for us...😃

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