MAANEET SS; destiny or faith...Thread One - Page 49

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi...thanks 4 da pm n amazing update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
AWESOME UPDATE
MAAN AND GEET R IN LOVE BUT THEY R CONFUSED
PLZ MAKE THEM CONFESS ABT THEIR FEELINGS

CONTINUE SOON
BYE TC
LUV YOU
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
loved da snow fight
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
superbbb parts!
glad to see that maneet are getting closer!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pms!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely update silky!!
sorry 4 late reply
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

Waiting for Update




u need to wait a bit yar...m still not ready with the update...busy in office dese daysss...will try and update soon... i promise
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanku all for ur encouragement on all previous 10 parts''!!!
hope u like this too...😳😳




PART-11


Both of them were eating their food''geet could not take her eyes away from maan'on the other hand maan could notice a change in geet's behaviour,


Maan: kya baat hai geet tumhari tabiyat to thik hai na tum kuch le nahi rahi ho?

Geet: ji sir sab thik hai'bas muje bhookh nahin hai

Maan: geet jahan tak muje yad hai hum dono ne kuch bhi nahin khaya tha'.or tumhe bookh bhi lagi thi or jab khana hamare saamen hai to tum keh rahi ho bhookh nahin hai

Geet did not say anything'..she could not even understand what was happening to her..the mixed feeling of emotions for maan...she dint felt like that ever''!!

Geet: sir main apse ek baat puchu?

Maan: haan geet bolo kya baat hai?

Geet: sir hum wapis kab ja rahe hai

Maan: geet kuch hua hai kya''?

Geet: nahin sir waise hi

Maan: geet tum bhool rahi ho ki hum dost hai or dost ek dusre se koi baat nahin chupate na'chalo batai kya baat hai.? Or rahi baat wapis jaane ki to jaise hi kaam khatam ho jaega waise hi hum wapis chale jaenge

Maan: par isse pehle tum muje batao ki baat kya hai?

Geet(self-thought) ab main maan sir ko kya batau ki mere saath kya ho raha hai, jab muje khud iss baat ka jawab nahin pata''..he babaji please meri madad karo'koi to raasta dikhao na

Maan: geet main tumse baat kar raha hu or na jaane tum kiss baat mein khoi hui ho

Geet(self thought) agar main or chup rahi to pata nahin maan sir kya sochenge mere baare mein'kuch to batana padega sir ko

Geet: vo sir main na apni di ko leke pareshan hu pata nahin vo kiss haalat mein hongi''.pata nahin main unki help kar bhi paungi ya nahin

Maan(interrupts) geet tum phir se wahi sochne lagi maine bola than a hum kuch na kuch raasta nikal lenge'par tumhe agar zyada tension ho rahi hai to aisa karo apni di se baat kar lo shayad tum better feel karo

Geet: par sir

Maan'par var kuch nahin ye lo phone or baat karo apni di se main abhi aaya zara fresh hoke

Maan leaves and Geet dials meera's number from maan's cell'' meera picks up the call

Geet: hi di..kaisi ho or sab thik to hai na


Meera: arrey geet main abhi tere baare mein hi soch rahi thi,,,,tu thik se pahunh to gayi na

Geet: haan di mera chodo or ye batao vo ladke wale aa rahe hai na aaj?

Meera: nahin geet unka aana postpone ho gaya hai

Geet: hey babaji thank u'.aapne meri sun li

Meera: par geet ek tension or ho gayi hai

Geet: kya hua di, sab thik hai na?

Geet was talking to meera wherein maan comes'geet gets cautious.

Geet: vo di main apse baad mein baat karungi

Meera: par meri baat sun to'vo ladka or koi nahin tere boss hai maan sir''.

Meera realizes that the phone is already disconnected and the main thing she wanted to share with geet she missed that.

Maan: kya hua geet sab thik hai na

Geet: main bahut khush hu sir babaji ne meri sun li vo ladke walo ka aana thode time postpone ho gaya hai'chalo meera di ke liye kuch time or mil gaya

Geet was so happy while sharing that with maan'..maan was again lost in geet's cute smiles'''and then


Maan: chalo ye to acha hua or iski wajah se tumhare chehre par muskaan to ayi

Geet: thanku sir'..ye sab aapki wajah se hua hai

Maan: ab khadi khadi thanku karti rahogi kya? Hum jis kaam se Shimla aye hai vo kare ya nahin'waise hi kafi mushkilo ke baad hum yaha pahunche hai '.to kya iraada hai chale??

Geet: ji sir chaliye

Maan and geet leave for the meeting''..!!! There was a bit of sunshine after heavy snowfall so walking was not a problem now. The meeting was quite successful and all their demands were agreed.

Now their office work was finished. Both maan and geet were walking on The Mall (actually mall is a place in Shimla very famous where tourists roam and enjoy; it is not like normal shopping malls)😉😉

Geet: wow kitna sundar nazzara hai na'.har taraf hariyali hi hariyali hai or upar se burf ki safed chaadar. Maine to pehle kabhi aise nahin dekha hai

Maan: haan geet ye to hai'..aisa lagta hai kissi jaanat mein aa gaye hai hum

A person walking nearby told them the view of the town increases its beauty 1000 times more in the evening.

Geet: par kya fayda hum to tab tak wapis chele jaenge na

Maan(self thought) lagta hai geet ka jaane ka mann nahi hai

Maan: geet agar tum chaho to hum ek din yah ape ruk ke Shimla ghum sakhte hai

Geet: ji sir main kuch samjhi nahin'..hamara kaam to khatam ho gaya hai na

Maan: haan geet kaam to khatam ho gaya hai or vo bhi umeed se jaldi hi'..kya tum Shimla ghumna chahti ho ya wapis jana???




Well do u want maan and geet to enjoy a day in shimla?'..ur comments will decide whether they should stay or not''..? Actually the answer from geet is in ur comments''will be waiting to know geet's answer now''.!! I know update koi itna acha nai hua but will try and improve in y next update''.!!!😳


Please do comment...😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey yieepee
me first
loved it
but the conversation of geet and meera gets disconnected
plz clear the misunderstanding between them
yes geet sholud stay for one more day


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Posted: 13 years ago
i think they should stay one ore day...waise bhi morning tak raaste bilkul clear ho jayenge😉

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