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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Shalve

congrats on yr new FF.. interesting start...do continue...


thanku so much 😊
m just updating part 1.. 5 mins
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasraj123

really nice starting. keep it up and pls continue soon


Thanks a lot.. just updating part 1.. it will take 5 mins 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Congrats on the new FF dear
amazing prologue
the concept it really interesting
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54


PART 1

It was a monday. She was getting ready for her college.
Rano: Geet bete jaldi aayo.. otherwise u will get late.
Aayi mama.. she shouted from her room. As she descended the stairs, all eyes were glued on her. She looked so beautiful even in her simplest dress. She was wearing her father's fvt colour white. She came near him & kissed on his cheeks.. Happy b'day papa. He hugged her & kissed on her forehead. Thank u beta.. love u.
Luv u too dad. Suddenly she realized she was late. She quickly touched her mama's & papa's feets & kissed brij veerji on his cheeks which was her daily routine. Bye everyone mai bhaut late ho gayi.
Rano: Geet but breakfast.
Plz mama.. bye
Before rano cud say anything, she ran from there towards her car.

She was already late for her college. She looked up. Babaji ek tho first day upar se I'm late.. plz bacha lena babaji. As she was abt to enter the college, she bumped into him & fell straight on his broad chest. Dekhkar nahi chal sakte the. He snapped her away & was abt to say something but his throat went dry. She looked at him & just kept looking. She removed his hand from her waist. Her touch sent thousand walt current down his spine. He had never felt like this before. So many girls used to drool over her but he had never even looked at them once. But when he saw her, it felt different. As if an angel had descended directly from heaven. Her white milky skin, he wanted to feel it. She snapped him out. Can't u see n walk.. ek tho I'm already late upar se tum. Chado.. ab hato mere raste se.
He didn't got a word of her. Hato naa.. she repeated. He halfheartedly got aside & watched her going from there. He felt as if something very impt was going away from him.

She ran to reach her class on time. She didn't wanted her first impression to be bad. On her way she bumped into Parul & Khushi.
Oh God ab tum log bhi dekh kar nahi chal sakte. She made an angry face.
Parul - Kyaa hua geet tujhe. Hyper kyun ho rahi hai?
Mai hyper ho rahi hun?? She made a cute face. ek tho sab mujhe late karvane me lage hain n u r saying that why I'm being hyper.
Khushi - Aww.. hamari geet ko kisi ne tang kiya. Kiski itni majal ho gayi?
Mujhe kya pata. Don't know who that guy was.. agar janti hoti naa tho chodna nahi tha maine use.
Parul & Khushi said togethe- Ladka??
haam tho
Parul - Geet u really didn't said anything to him??
Ab yaa wo I was abt to say but wo.. haan.. wo bhag gaya.
Khushi- Jhut.. Its showing on ur face geet that u r lying. Wo bhag gaya yaa tu hi use kuch keh nahi payi??
Tum dono na pagal ho gaye ho.. why wud I lie chalo ab we r getting late naa
Parul - Theek hai abhi tho we r leaving u but class ke baad tujhe sab batana hoga..ok?
Theek hai baba.. abhi tho chalo.

She couldn't get a word taught in the class. Something was bothering her. That pair of eyes glued on her.. staring her. It felt as if those eyes wud eat her.. consume her. Geet khud ko control kar aisa sab mat soch.. She wondered while getting out of the class. Parul & Khushi joined her in the canteen.
Parul - Chal geet now tell us
Kyaa bataun.. She asked cutely.
Khushi: Geet kahan khoyi hui hai.. arre we r asking u abt that guy.
Ek tho I can't stop thinking abt him upar se yeh bhi shuru ho gaye.. she mumbled.
Parul - Get u said something??
Nahi nahi.. I didn't said anything. Just then her cell rang. She thanked babaji. Bach gayi.. she murmered.
She saw the name flashing - brij veerji. She answered the call. Ji veerji kyaa hua?
Brij: Gudiya tujhe kaha tha na maine we have to plan a party for dad. Tu ghar kab ayegi?
Veerji abhi tho meri sirf ek hi class hui hai.. aise kaise
Brij: Plz gudiya.. aaja na. See its abt dad. Plz come na
Veerji aap emotional blackmailing band karo.. ok.. I'm coming.

She hugged khushi & parul. Sorry guys.. jana hoga.. veerji bula rahe hain.. sham ko dad ke liye b'day party hai n u both r coming.. ok
Parul- Theek hai.. bye
Khushi- Geet aram se jana kahin tu phir se kisi se takra naa jaye.
Stop it yaar plz
Khushi- Acha ok.. bye
She hugged them & left from there.


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Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Mariam94

Congrats on the new FF dear
amazing prologue
the concept it really interesting
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm


thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
awesome udpate dear
loved it...
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: abinaya.m

really nice plzzz continue


Thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Mariam94

awesome udpate dear
loved it...
cont soon


Thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Awesome update... loved it
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
congrats for ur new ff
gr8 start

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