Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 2 ~ Pt 55 Pg134 - Page 57

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Maan is a naughty DD. lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update. hayeee geet and challenge doesn't go togather. love the way she said that she can't stay away from maan. sooo nicely written.👏
thanks for pm and pls continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow superb
so now maan is going more romentic aham aham
dadi is so cute ...jald se shadi karwado
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
they r getting closer...
cant wait for the next...pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
awesome update yaar thanx for pm
and waiting for maan official confrontation 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii Mahima
amazing upd dear
superb
mindblowing
do upd soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa
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Posted: 14 years ago
SOOO TINNY MINNY UPDATE...BUT IT WAS SO GOOD...WAITING FOR UR LONGWALA UPDATE...SOONNN
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sory 4 late comment as u know my school!! But realy Awesome n gud update. M loving there cute nok jhok n romance too. M very eager 4 maan's offical conforntation. So Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 50

Geet looked at maan tears threatning to fall from her eyes. The whole world seemed vanishing in front of her eyes. Only what she cud see at that moment was him. She couldn't express her feeling. But he did knew what she was feeling then.
He just fluttered his eyes indicating her that he do understand well what she is feeling right now. a tear escaped her eye. How much she tried to control her but she just couldn't. Dadimaa wiped her tears. She was still looking at him. A smile formed on her lips with her eyes still cloudy. Geet bete aise koi rota hai kyaa. Chaliye now stop crying.
She wiped her tears & gave a faint smile. Yah she was happy & these tears were of happiness. Wo kitni bhi koshish kare un aansuon ko chupane ki par wo chupte hi nahi.. Ab tho aisa lagne laga tha ki wo bhi usi ki zuban bolne lage the jo uske dil me basa hai.
chaliye bete ham ab chalte hain.. u rest.

She went leaving them alone. Silence occupied the room. He went near her & finally broke the silence. Taking her hand in his he sat down on his knees. Jaan I want to marry u. Will u marry me?

Her eyes filled up. Tears threatning to fall from her eyes. She broke up in his arms. He hugged her protectively caressing her back, soothing her. Jaan aise rote hain kyaa. Stop crying. She was nowhere to stop. It was all so special for her. His suddenly asking her to marry him.. shaadi.. the dream that every girl sees.. she had also seen.. marrying to his prince charming. Finally her dream wud be accomplished. She wud be marrying to the one whom she love so so much.. who is her life.. her everything. Oh god she was flying on the ninth cloud evn higher than that if there was any! She was so happy. Her tears cud not stop. When ever she is so happy she cries.. always. In HP always her veerji her mama her papaji used to soothe her. she always used to cry hugging them whenever she was happy. She was reminded of her family. She sobbed even more realizing the meaning of what mama always told her. That it was not her real home.. her real home wud be her husband's home. And how she will never even think of going back to her mayka when he wud be there with her bcoz he will never let her miss her family. then he will be her family. Now she realized how correct mama was. how maan has become her family. And now they will be one.

He cupped her face & wiped her tears with his thumb. Bolo naa jaan.. jawab do naa
Haan.. she hugged him sobbing yet again. He was so happy. Her jaan wud be with him. He wud have a complete family. Dadimaa anni him & now his jaan his geet! His eyes too become cloudy. She cupped his face. Yeh kyaa.. mujhe rone ko mana kar rahe ho aur khudki aankhen nam ho gayi.
He just hugged her. I love u jaan..
I love u too maan

Next day

He got up with a smile on his face. Last night he had planned something. And now he had to do it.. for his jaan.. his geet. He quickly freashened up & went downstairs. Everyone was waiting for him on the dining table. Bhai aaj phir late. Aap raat ko beth kar jaagran karte ho kyaa? Anni complained.
He shot her an angry glare & then turned towards dadimaa. Dadimaa geet kahan hai? Wo theek tho hai naa. Abhi tak so rahi hai kyaa. Uski tabiyat tho theek hai naa. Itni der tak tho wo kabhi nahi soti. Use kuch ho gaya tho mai abhi dekh kar aata hun.
Maan bete ab ham kuch bolen.
Wahi tho dadimaa aap kuch bata kyun nahi rahi hain
Bete if u will let me speak tabhi tho ham bolenge naa. Itna pareshan mat hoyiye bete. geet bilkul theek hain. wo subah subah uth gayin thi but tab tak aap bhi anhi uthe the tho I said her to sleep. She is absolutely fine.
pakka na dadaimaa?
bete aapko ham par bharosa hai naa?
theek hai dadimaa tho mai office jaa raha hun. Geet ko bata dijiyega.
Bete kal hi tho aye hain aap. Itni jaldi office
dadimaa ek impt meeting hai bas wo attend karni hai. mai jaldi aa jayunga..
theek hai bete.. as u wish.

Geet got up very late. It was almost noon. She saw the time flashing in her cell. the alarm was ringing from 9pm. But she didn't realized. He babaji itni der ho gayi. pata nahi dadimaa kyaa sochengi.
dadimaa yeh sochengi ki aapki tabiyat kharab thi thats why u got up late.
dadimaa aap.
Haan bete. Ham aap ke liye breakfast laye hain. aap jaldi se fresh ho jayiye aur phir kuch kha lijiye. Phir medicine bhi tho leni hai naa.
Medicine?? She made a face on the name of medicine.
haan bete ab dawai tho leni padegi naa. Acha jab maan will come back tab le lena.. ok
Ji dadimaa

She freshened up & had her breakfastwhich was actually her lunch. Maan also came back & rushed to her. He knew he was late. Geet ko medicine deni hai.. mujhe bahut der ho gayi.. i know usne abhi tak nahi li hogi. He came to her room & gathered all her medicines. Geet tum ne kuch khaya?
Ji maan but aap yeh kar kyaa rahe ho?
He came close to her & sat on his knees. Chalo geet have ur medicines.
Maan.. medicines.. she made a face.
Geet medicine tho leni padegi naa..
nahi maan mai nahi lungi.. plz
jaan aise nahi karte.. chalo jaldi se have them.
plz maan
Geet tumne injection lagva liye but tumhe medicine nahi khani. Yeh kyaa baat huyi
Injection.. her eyes popped out. Maine kab injection lagvaya?
Geet tum hospital se aise hi aa gayin theek hokar?
Haww.. maan un logo ne mujhe injection lagaya tha?
haan geet but isme kaunsa ajuba kar diya unhone.. tum bhi na.. chalo ab jaldi se kha lo
Maan aapne unhe mujhe suyi lagane di.. chi chi.. kitna dard hua hoga mujhe. she looked up. He babaji mujhe tho soch akr bhi darr lag raha hai.
Geet tum pagal ho gayi ho?
Maan.. she made an angry face.
Acha baba theek hai I'm sorry bas. Chalo now have ur medicines.

He finally made her have the medicines. she had no other option left. She made faces but finally had it. Chi maan yeh kitni kadvi hai.. yuck.
He hugged her sideways. Koi nahi jaan.. mai hun naa abhi dekhna u will say yummy.
maan mai itni kadvi dawai khakar yummy kaise bol sakti hun?
He took out something from his pocket & showed it to her. aise
dairy milk!! Mere liye??
He nodded his head.
She quickly ate it. Yummy
See I told u naa u will say yummy.
she smiled & hugged him. Love u maan.
I love u too jaan.
He hugged her back.


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update maan still worrying for geet continue soon

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