SS**~~Love will always remain(last part pg6)

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navneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

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i will update today,actually today is my frnd's bday i have to make a vm for her,after that i will update ,,,and thnx for the support,,its really overwhelmed,,and after ur comments i really want to write more and give ma best,,thanx alot guys,,

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Anshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

wow nav...great yar..
loved it...:) :)
do continue soon...

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Vibha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesome part
loved it
do continue soon
will be waiting for second part

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Pratibha Sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

luvd it...very nice...curious to knoe abt d suspence...continue soon n pm me...tc :)

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akshara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

NAVU jann dis waz too gud...plz continue..n dun underestimate urself...think dat u r d best..

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SHAHAD971

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I'm sure you'll manage...the beginning is already nice and so i would like to read more of it.

Continue soon...

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navneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 2
Arohi

today was a very happy day,had a lot of fun in college with my freinds,,and more happy because i take panga with some boy in my collage,and my best hobby is to fight.i came back form collage and noone is at home.my parents do not know about my and arjun relationship,my parents love me so much but they are very possesive and cared about me,because they knows that i am very bholi bhali type girl,they think i am not so old to undersatnd the difference beetween right or wrong.they always asked me to dont to beleive on someone so easily,,and specially on boys,so i didn't tell about my relatioship to my parents,because i dont want to hurt them,i think i will told them when it was a right time,when arjun completed their studies and me also,and when my parents think tht now i am able to take my own decisions,i am waitng for that right time...
today noone is at home,so as i ever do i called arjun,,dialled his number its busy,i get always nervous when he didn't pick up my phone,i dont know why...
but finally 4th time he picked my phone...

Arjun: hello!!

arohi:hi shona (i never used those gita pitas words like swetheart and darling like tht,this is so cheapy for me,and recently i watched tararumpum so i loved that name shona,i called him shona sometimes when i am in good mood or in a roamntic mood,,,he also called me shona,,)

hows's u,how was ur day?,,,how many girls u saw today,,kitno pe line mari,koi pati jan nahi?(normally i am very silent type of person at my home,when i start to talk noone can stop even interrupt me,jab tak mein khud na thak jau,,we always have convo about 2 3 hours and i think he get only 5 6 minutes to talk,thts why i love him bcs he never stopped me and interupt me,,he always listen to me very carefully and answer me with yes or no or with smile)
so today i am also so talktive,,,i am telling him what i did in college today,he treats me never as his girlfreind we are always like best freinds who shares each every moment with each other,,i never thinked that i should not talk about boys with him,,he never minds when i talk about boys.what i always do with boys,my fightings with boys and all,he knows that i know my limitations,and he blindly trust me that i never do anything wrong,or anything that hurts him...

i am talking with him and sudenly he interupt me,,he did this first in these 2 years,,

Arjun:arohi,can you please listen to me,can u please keep queit for sometime, that i also get chance to say something (he said this with angry voice)

arohi: oh ho aj mahashya arjun bolenge,wah wah mon warat kab tod lia apne,humein bataya hi nahi (i am very funny type girl also,i knew that he was angry ,for wht reason i dont know,but i love to pull his leg or tease him when he get angry,,i love to do this,,i did today also the same)

Arjun:- arohi ,will you please shut up and stop doing your childish behaviour,if i am telling you that i want to talk with you,you can't even sit keep quiet for a second and listen to me!!please

Arohi: i get a shock,because i never heared arjun talking with me so rude. i get nervous now,what was happened that arjun is behaving so rude.

Arjun are u okay?? what happened ?? is anything wrong
(i am childish and funny,but i don't know i have a good thing in me that i can undersatnd other person feelings with their expression or with the way they talk,that is the also main reason that i get frankly with everyone,,

i understand a little bit what arjun want to say,but my heart is stopping me to think)

Arjun:- yaar i want to talk with you something seriously,but u...

arohi: arey itna gusa,kyu aj shanidev ke darshan kar aye ka ,itna gusa baap re baap (i again treid to change his mood)

Arjun: please arohi please listen to me,please yaar (he said with very calm and low voice)

arohi: ok ask what you want,i am serious now.

Arjun:-arohi i want to say you something from somedays,and i thinked about that so much.i dont know but i didn't get a courage to tell you,i dont know how can i ask you (he is saying each of his word with a stop,,that he didnot want to say but he have to say)

arohi: his voice and with the way he said these two lines,i understand what he want to say,and i realised what is going to happened,but my heart and my mind fails to understand these happenings,or can say that they are not ready to hear what arjun wants to say.

i interupt him to change the topic because that feelings was not good what i m feeling right now.i change the topic and said to arjun,acha i love u toh 2 years pehle keh dia tha,ab fir se kehne mein itna dar kyu lag raha hai,itna sochne ki kya baat hai,ab toh tum bhi certifeid besharam ho,han agar tumhe sharam aa rahi hai toh mein bol du kya..(with a sweet smile)

arjun:please arohi stop this,i know you undersatnd what i want to say,please dont stop me today,this thing is related with our whole life,dont convert it into a joke,our life is not only fun,be serious yaar..please aj mujhe kehne do,warna it will be too late for me and for you also.arohi you know me more then me,i never need and feel to ask you something or explain you something,bcs you understand and knew all before i say something,the main reason of our relationship is our trust and our believe,jiski wajha se aj hum ek doosre ko khud se jyada jante hai!so please arohi i know i no need to say somthing today also,because you know my each and every heart beat and what is going in my mind,so pls dont try to ignore this truth ,whhich is more then our relationship and trust and love!

Arohi:- i undersatnd all,bu i want to hear this from arjun.
arjun kuch bhi kehne se pehle yeh soch lena ke jo tum bolne ja rahe ho uske baad uska anzam kya hoga.tum jante ho ke tumse better mujhe aur koi nahi samj sakta,toh tum yeh bhi jante hoge ke tumhari woh baat kehne se mera kya hoga.aur tum yeh bhi jante ho ke mein tumhe kabhi blame nahi karungi aur jo tum mujhe karne ke liye kehne wale ho woh mein kabhi nahi kar paungi.
(i still have a hope in my heart that arjun will never said this''

arjun: i know arohi,par i thinked so much about this.you know our families they will never accept our realtionship,your family may be aceept this but my family will not accept this and i dont want that i told u these things 4 5 years later when it will become impossible for us to get seperate,you love ur family so much and i also,we will not go against our families,and our family will not going to accept this relationship,i want that you live your life happily without me..
Arohi can we freinds again,only freinds.

Arohi:- uski is baat ne ik pal ke liye meri dunia cheen lai.dhadhkan dil ka rasta bhul hai,aur soch dimag ka,rooh jism ka,,aisa laga ke kuch tut gea mere andhar,,i am speechless,totally in shock,,i dnt know how to react,i am silent ,kuch mehssoos nahi ho raha tha,bas akhon se pani aa raha tha,i cut the phone,,after 5 minutes i realised what had happened with me...mere sare sapne,emotions,fellings,hapinees,,sab aisa lag raha tha mere se door chali gai ho,,mujhe kuch ehsaas nahi ho raha tha,bas mera dil ro raha tha,,aur dil itna roya ke akhon se ansuo ne behne ko mana kar dia aur akhon ne rone se,,ek jinda lash kaisi hoti hai uska ehsaas us pal mein maine kar lia,dil tutne pe kya dard hota hai uska ehsaas kar lia,kisis ke chale jane par kya dard hota ehsaas kia maine,sapne tootne par kya hota hai ehsaas kia maine,jindagi hatho se choot jane ka dard,uska ehsaas kia maine,,us ek pal mein maine apni jindagi kho di,apne sapne ,apni khushia,apna pyar,sab kuch door chala gea,aur mein kuch nahi kar pai...us din pehli baar mein roi,dil se dard saha nahi ja raha tha aur akhon se ansu bahaye bina raha nahi ja raha tha,us din mera dil royea jo pehle kabi kisi ke liye itna nahi royea,,

dard ,kisbaat ka dard ho raha tha mujhko yeh nahi samj aa raha tha,,
dard is baat ka ho rha hai ke mujse mera pyar cheen gea,jan dard is baat ka ke mera pyar arjun tha jo mujhe chod kar chal gea.
dard is baat ka ke mere sapne toot gaye jan fir is baat ka sapne todne wala arjun tha,
dard is baat ka ke mere emotins ka majak ban gea,jan fir is baat ka majak banane wala arjun tha,
dard is baat ka ke mere pass jine ki koi wajha nahi bachi jan fir is baat ka ke jeeney ki wajha cheenne wala arjun tha,
dard is baat ka ke meri khushia chali gai,jan fir is baat ka ke khushia le jane wala arjun tha.
samj nahi aa raha tha kis baat par rou kiske liye rou ,apne upar jan arjun ke liye!kaun sa dard mujhe jyada chont de kar gea sab kuch jane ka jan fir arjun ki wajha se jane ka,,
mujhe sabse jyada dard dia kisne arjun ne jan mere pyar aur wishwas ne,
karti toh kya karti,,ussey wapis lana mushkil tha,aur ussey bhul jana namumkin tha,,jindagi jeeney ki har wajha mujse door chali gai,,us din itna roi ke akhon se ansu khatam ho gaye par dil se dard nahi gea!

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please do comments,how it was,,,next chapter will update soon

Edited by nav92 - 14 years ago