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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#261

oye..u didn't pm???😡
not fair...not fair..
n e ways caught up wid the update
phew...
awesum update dearie
plz reveal the whole mystry soon!!!
and yeah...maan must hve hear vicky and geet
confessing each other..
poor he..
feel sad for both of them!!!

continue super soon

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skdevil

@skdevil

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Posted: 15 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
oye..u didn't pm???😡
not fair...not fair..
n e ways caught up wid the update
phew...
awesum update dearie
plz reveal the whole mystry soon!!!
and yeah...maan must hve hear vicky and geet
confessing each other..
poor he..
feel sad for both of them!!!

continue super soon

i pm to all dear
plz check ur inbox

sorry if u didn't recieved it

will send u now

and for past i m already writing the next part of my both ff's

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#263

really good, waiting eagerly to see what happened when maan came back to propose to his geet...how come vicky and geet were engaged and what happened...great writing and great storyline...

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Anupama

@anupm04

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Posted: 15 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: skdevil

yeh for confusion dear u hv already mixed my both ff's

Agar geet n vicky ki shadi thay hui to ye samir kahan se aa tapka? N why maan wants her to marry him?

this line aplied for my another ff bandhan & maan & geet r already married in this ff

n this is the link of that ff dear

FF- bandhan

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1728832/new-ff-bandhan-mg-full-part-10-pg-83-28-jun

sory dear i was reading the ff bandhan first n left for some work so when i was commenting the post thought that it was bandhan sorry

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 15 years ago

#265

nice...

maan was in love with geet n was going to propose her...but what happened...??

loved the way he punched brij...he will never let any1 hurt her...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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skdevil

@skdevil

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Posted: 15 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: sindu555
loved it ...

the best was the punch Maan gave to Brij ...

continue soon

love
Sana

hhheee
more are to come n the next chapters

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skdevil

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Posted: 15 years ago

#267

Thanks to all who liked and commented and part is for them all

PART 8 :-

Geet watched as her father lay lifeless in a state of coma , tears started spieling
from her eyes on seeing her father in such state , she sobbed as acute innocent kid as if she lost her Favorited toy. her father was been a loving figure ever since he entered in her life, not even once she questioned about her existence , he just read the letter and accepted her without questioning anything . even when nobody was at her side he supported her the most , how can she forget the pain taken by him just for her sake , it was his blind trust and unending
love that was always a pillar that she needed most .

he gave him love and what she gave him in return , today she was lieing as a lifeless body in front of her eyes and she can't d anything .

how helpless she is ?

and fresh tears started to came in her eyes just thinking about all this ,

she felt dizzy by all the sudden uptake of emotions going through her

she sat down on the bed and watched her father with longing eyes , she missed him so much...

Maan watched as geet helplessly sobbed beside her father, he much wanted to stop her from crying, but he also know how strong is her relation with her dad and no force and nobody can stop her from crying her eyes out, and may be in a way it was good she will felt at ease after the breaking of ice inside her but it was unbearable to see her in that state ...

Maan watched for sometime to pass , but as he saw geet crying placing her head at her father's chest,
He felt torn within, may be it was his love that is not letting him watch her in that state

Unable to stop himself he walked over to geet and placed his hand over her shoulder , he watched for sometime for geet to turn but upon getting no response he somewhat forcefully made her look at him , he sit on the table and watched his barbies tear stained face , never in his life he felt this much helpless ...

He removed tears from her eyes while nodding her head in no Unable to hold
herself anymore he hugged him for her dear life

As the warmth seeped in the piles of tears started flowing from her eyes making her choke while speaking ...

GEET- papa will be all right na ...

MAAN- why woulden't he ?

and his throat chocked while speaking

geet relaxed her self completely on maan and maan tried to gather himself , today he felt great full to be their for geet as he had no shoulder to cry on when his world was broken ...

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PAST

Maan made his way inside the mension but stood at a corner watching the whole scene going on their ...
he was actually amazed to see him complete family in hall at this time f the day
he smiled seeing his barbie siitng beside vickey laughing like a kid ... she is such a cutie pie

and than he tried concentrating the whle talk going in between mr. handa and dadimaa

DadiMaa( DM) - mohinder i am very great full to you for agreeing on the marriage proposal , i so much wanted to marry maan first but you him , he don't think about marriage .

Maan smiled as he heard his DM talking about his marriage , but he heard next make him actually tremble at his place

Mr. handa - oh, don't worry maa g , actully i am more than happy with this marriage , as far as geet and vicky are happy with this decision i have no problem ...

VIKEY- uncle ji i love geet dearly and i promise u to take care of geet with my life

Mohinder placed his hand on vikey's head to bless him ...

here, maan stumbled back as he heard the word I LOVE GEET and then MARRIAGE . it means dadi maa was talking about vikey and geet's marriage

He tried gaining his posture and tried searching for an answer to his silent plea, he watched geet';s face just t satisfy his heart may be this was wrong news , may be geet does not love geet . may be he was sounding horrible but what can some one d at that time...
But to his horror geet looked down while blushing , all good spended with her run down in just front of his eyes , he was truly broken it was just geet that he desired and today she loved someone else ...

he walked back gathering all unshed tears in the fears of getting caught by all. He was about to turn when he came face to face with adi's concerning eyes , tears was about to spill from his eyes when he heard anni's voice , he tried concealing his emotions before coming face to face with a happy family ...

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PRESENT

He came out of his little world when he felt the hold on his shoulder loose , he was satisfied to see a much calmer geet now

Geet after releasing herself from his hold watched her fathers face , he was lying as a lifeless person ,
she combed his hair by her little fingers ,she so much wanted to be on him on her side and now being
with maan she know nothing can go wrong ...

Maan cleared his throat to get her attention, geet looked up to see maan and saw his one
shoulder was wet by her non- stop crying for an hour

Maan watched geets eyes fixed on him

MAAN(innocently)- we should move now as we are running late

still getting no response from her maan again nudged her

MAAN- you ok princess

GEET(fumbling)- oh, i just ... your shirt is wet ... and looked down

maan just smiled at her innocence

MAAN-my everything is all yours to do anything you want so what does a wet shirt means ...

geet just stared at maan and maan again cleared his throat

MAAN- we should move now

geet nooded after making her way to the door but only after giving a longing look to his father

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First of all i am sad today . as i opened my this ff to update i watched likes of my previous post i got shocked literally , i sended like more than 152 pms and got 47 likes and few comments , i m not cribbing for comments and likes but if u don't like my work u can tell me i'll discontinue my both ff , sorry if i m rude but actully i felt like i should stop them and u can tell me if u want me to discontinue , i wont mind as it will save my holidays

love
simmy

Edited by skdevil - 15 years ago

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kooliio

@kooliio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#268

Awesome update!

Loved how maan punched brij!
Now he will not dare to mess with geet!

Aww poor geet was so sad...!

What happened to her dad???

Hope he will be fine soon...!

Cant wait for the next update!

Please continue soon!

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#269

what a beautiful relationship Geet has with her father. i feel so bad for all 3 of them Geet's dad, Geet and Maan.
wonderful update
thank you for the pm!