FF(Maneet):Dil mil gaye Thrd 2 Upd prt 34 pg 140 - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy piya
waiting eagerly for the next update..
plz plz update soon
cnt wait for maan face to face confession
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_GurTi

heyy piya

waiting eagerly for the next update..
plz plz update soon
cnt wait for maan face to face confession

sure dear waise abhi baitke main maan ka confession hi type kar rahi hoon...i mean still thinking k kaunse scenes daalne chahiye...if u want me to include something then tell i will try to include it
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Waiting for the update dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Waiting for the update dear.

typing dear...mostly will update tomorrow if u want me to include smthing then do let me know
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Part 28

Geet: I really love u Maan'kya tum mujhe iss layak samajthe ho k tum mujhe apni zindagi mein shamil kar sako

Maan stopped his car immediately' He couldn't believe what he was hearing

Maan was restless from the previous night itself

He had decided that whatever the case he would reveal his true feelings for geet today itself and hence instead of going to the office he decided to go to the radio station to meet geet

As usual he was listening to geet's program and he was wondering as to why geet was insisting that he should not miss her program today

He didn't had to wait for an answer for too long

He was surprised that Geet was confessing her love for him in front of the whole world

He was right there in front of the radio station when geet mentioned those last words "I love u maan"

These were the sweetest words that maan had ever heard

The words were still resonating in his ears

He closed his eyes and was recollecting each n every word that his geet had just now mentioned'yes his geet'this thought brought a smile on his face

Meanwhile,

Yash: Ok guys I never thought k humare segment ki shuruwat itne khoobsurat andaz se hogi' I cannot tell u'll k aaj main kitna khush hoon'main bus yahi dua karta hoon k meri best friend geet ki saari khwahishe puri ho jaaye

Yash: Ok friends right now thode der k liye hume geet ko uske sapno ki duniya mein rehne dena chahiye till then you'll enjoy 3 back to back songs

Yash: Geet tum jaanti nahi k aaj main tumhare liye kitna khush hoon

Geet is silent'

Yash: Kya hua geet'itne der se itna kuch bol rahi thi ab chup kyun ho

Geet: Yash maine aaj apne dil ki baat tho keh di magar maan k dil ki baat main nahi jaan payi'

Yash really wanted to tell geet the whole truth but then he knew that maan had planned a surprise for geet n hence he decided to keep quite

Geet: Pata nahi kyun aisa lag raha hai k maan yahi hai'mere paas'Yash main abhi aayi

Geet is coming out

Maan: Geet dil tho ye kar raha hai k abhi aakar tumhe apna jawab de du magar tumne mujhe itna pyara surprise diya hai issliye mujhe bhi tumhare liye kuch khaas karna hoga'bus aaj shaam tak intezaar geet

Maan starts his car and goes away

Geet comes out. But she could not see maan anywhere'

Geet: pata nahi maan ne mera program suna bhi hai ya nahi'call karke puch lethi hoon

She takes her mobile

Geet: Nahi'mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye'pata nahi unka jawab kya hai

She goes back

The show ends. Geet is still waiting for Maan's call.

She goes to attend her lectures

Afternoon

Geet's house

Geet: maan ka abhi tak koi call nahi aaya kahi wo mujhse naaraj tho nahi'

She opens the door and goes to her room

She leaves her mobile and goes to the kitchen to have her lunch

When she returns she sees a message on her mobile

The message was from maan

Geet: (happy) Maan ka message

She opens to read the message

Message: "Geet agar tumhe mujhpar bharosa hai tho shaamko mujhe milne aa jaana mera driver tumhe tumhare ghar se pick kar lega'main tumhara intezaar karunga umeed hai k tum zaroor aaogi"

Geet: bharosa tho humesha se hai maan'main zaroor aaungi

Evening

Driver drops geet at a particular place and then goes away from there

Geet: Ye kaisi jagah hai'yaha dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aa raha'

She then notices a house

Geet: Shayad maan is ghar k andar ho

Geet opens the door but the room was fully dark

Geet: Yaha itna andhera kyun hai'light ka switch kaha pe hai

Maan: Geet light on mat karna

Geet: maan'

Maan: haan geet main'tumhe darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai'aaj tumhare saare sawalo k jawab tumhe mil jaayenge magar isse pehle tum mere sawal ka ek jawab do'kya tumhe mujhpar yakeen hai?

Geet: Khud se bhi zyaada maan

Maan: Tho bus darwaja bannd kardo aur mujhse ye vaada karo k jabtak main na kahu tum lights on nahi karogi

Geet: Jaise tum kaho

She closes the door

Maan's confession begins

Maan: Geet tum soch rahi hogi k maine tumhe yaha kis wajah se bulaya hai

Maan: Geet darasal main tumhe aaj uss shaks se milwana chahtha hoon jisk bina main apni zindagi guzaarne ki soch bhi nahi saktha

Maan: Wo mere mann ka sukun hai'mere armaano ki roshni hai'dil se nikalnewali ek paak dua hai'wo mera junoon mera aasara aur meri nazaro mein basa hua sabse khoobsurat khwab hai

Geet: "Khwab"

Maan: Haan geet khwab

Maan: tum usse milna chahti thina aaj main tumhari ye khwahish puri kar deta hoon. Magar isse pehle k tum usse milo main chahta hoon k tum usse ek baar meri nazaro se dekho

Maan: Dekhogi na?

Geet: Haan'

Maan: Kaha se shuru karu'

Maan: Jaanti ho geet wo aam ladkiyon se bilkul pare hai'bilkul alag'aur bahut hi dilchasp

Maan: (smiles) Wo kabhi masoom hai tho kabhi shararati'kabhi shanth tho kabhi chanchal'kabhi narm tho kabi sakth'kabhi bholibhali tho kabhi ek number ki ziddhi

Maan: Gusarthe hue har ek pal mein uski adaao k daaman mein kai naye rang jhudthe jaathe hai

Maan: Jaanti ho geet pehle meri zindagi ek kaajaz ki phool ki tarah thi jisme koi mehek ya khushboo nahi thi'bilkul hi berang si'

Maan: magar wo mere zindagi mein ek aisa saawan bankar aayi jisne meri zindagi ko gulshan ki tarah meheka diya aur gunguni dhoop aur rhimjhim barasthe hue saawan k milan se jo satrangi bahar jhilmilane lagti hain thik ussi tarah meri zindagi ko bhi ek gulistaan ki tarah sajah diya

Maan: Uske Chand se chehre pe jab kabhi bhi zulfo ka parda girtha hai'tab uski khoobsurati mein jo raunak cha jaathi hai'usse dekhkar dil mein bas ek hi khwaish hoti hai'k agar mujhe kabhi bhi khudha mil jaaye tho main unki balaye le lu'unke haatho ko chum lu'jo unhone itni gehraai se usse tarasha

Maan: Uski muskurahat samunder ki dhun ki tarah lagti hai

Maan: Uski nazare bolti hai geet... jab wo apni ghani palko ko jhukhathi hai tab mano aisa lagtha hai k jaise shaam dhal rahi ho...aur jaise hi palke uthakar wo aapko dekthi hai tho subah chalne ka ehsaas hotha hai
Maan: Wo mere saaso ki raagini hai geet...mere dil ki sada hai...najane kyun uski kahi hui har ek baat sachhi aur achhi lagti hai
Maan: Wo mere andhere raastho ka aur soyi hui manzil ka ek ruhani sitara hai...meri yaado ki mehke hue gulabo mein bus ek ussi ki khushboo aur parchayi hai
Maan: Uski aakhon mein ek badhi hi meethi si nazakat, kashish aur sharmilapan hai...apni nighahon se woh kuch aise adaoke teer chalathi hai k wo kabhi bhi kisi bhi shaks ko apna gulam aur deewana bana de
Maan:uski maasumiyat ko dekh kar hoor bhi sharmajaatha hai...ji tho humesha yahi kartha hai k umr bhar uske pyar k taranum mein main dubtha jaau
Maan: Wo mere dil ki pehli aarzo bhi hai aur wahi iss dil ki aakhiri tamanna...uske bagair zindagi jeene ki toh kya main marne ki bhi nahi soch saktha
Maan: Zindagi ki patri par tanha chalte chalte mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas bhi nahi hua k kab mera haatho mein ek aise haseen humsafar ka haath aa gaya jisne meri zindagi k raastho mein ek phoolo ki chadar bheecha di jisse k mera daaman khushiyon aur pyar k shauhrat se jagmagane lag gaya
Maan: Mere mukadar ko ek hi pal mein usne badal diya...usne mujh jaise pathar ko ek khara sona bana diya
Maan:meri zindagi mein jo bhi kami thi ussne wo kami bade aasani se puri kar di
Maan: Uski khushi k liye main apna sabkuch lutha saktha hoon...bus raat din rab se yahi sajdha kartha hoon k meri zindagi...meri jeewan sangini ko humesha khush aur mehfoos rakhe
Maan: Main uske bagair ek pal bhi nahi reh saktha...wo sabse anmol khazana hai jo k rab ne mere liye tarasha hai...aur iss khazane ko main kabhi bhi kisi ki nazar nahi lagne dunga
Maan: Geet tum usse milna chahogi na
Geet: Hmm...
Maan: Thik ek minute baad tum lights on kar dena tumhe iss kamre mein meri dil ki dhadkan...meri saaso ki sargam...mera pyar aur mera ek lautha khwab...meri jeewan sangini nazar aayegi...
Geet: Hmm...
After one minute
Geet lights on kar dethi hai...she slowly opens her eyes
and then she is completly surprised
The whole room was full of mirrors
Geet couldn't believe her eyes
Tears of happiness started rolling down her cheeks
Geet: Iska matlab maan mere baare mein keh rahe the...smiles par wo kaha hai...
She then notices a door and goes inside
Once again she is totally surprised
The entire floor was full of rose petals...the room was beautifully decorated with candles...
But then there was something different in this room... the walls of the room were decorated with her photographs
Geet notices a letter and something else which appeared like a gift
Geet opens the letter
Letter: Geet...tumhi mera khwab ho geet...tumhi ho jiska maan singh khurana ki zindagi mein pehla aur aakhiri haqh hai...
yeh taufa mere taraf se ek chotha sa nazrana hai...main jaantha hoon k ye bahut hi maamuli cheez hai magar tum agar chaho tho iss taufe ko kabool karke iss mamuli cheez ki khoobsurathi mein char chaand laga sakthi ho
Main tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon...
tumhara aur sirf tumhara maan
Geet opens the gift
Geet: Ye...ye tho wahi saari hai...jisse maan ne lene se mana kar diya tha
A beautiful smile appears on her face
TO BE CONTINUED
Precap: Chand se parda kijiye😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
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love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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aww luvd da confession relii relii nyc
awsome update
update soon x
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THIS WAS AWESOME...MAAN'S CONFESSION WAS NO LESS THAN THAT OF GEET...N YES IT WAS SOOO DREAMYYY...I REALLY LOVED IT...CONTINUE SOON N THNX FOR THE PM...
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awesome...kya shayri hai...kis andaaz mein jazbaat ka bayan kiya hai mohtarma...wah wah wah...hum to kayal ho gaye aapki is ada ke...
it was great Piya and looking forward to rest of the night...

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