@MAAHI VE@#2 MG ff-12th JUN,chap- 42, pg 81 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
updating in a little while!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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hey guys, i am back with an update...well i really enjoyed writing this and from now onwards its going to be even more fun but i have a constraint though "TIME", i am a proffessional now u see...😕!!!!!

well thanks to all of you for being so nice and wishing me...LOVE U ALL SOOO MUCH!!!!! i cant really predict when i'll update but i'll try my best for twice a month...

i know its been like so long since i have updated SOCHA NA THA and LOVE-THE WAY I KNOW IT, i seriously dont have time😭😭😭...and MAAHI VE isn't a short story, it's a looonnnggg one and its my baby so i am writing this very often thats it...😕😭😭

chapter 33:

maan drove the car to planext x v-day party!!! silence was observed in the car. heer looked out of the window and prem looked disinterested. maan chuckled and rolled his eys looking at them and murmured "my 2 stupid best friends"!!! he sighed and nodded after few minutes.

maan: koi mar gaya kya???

both heer and prem felt surprised by his sudden comment and turned to face maan. when maan realised that both of them were staring at him endlessly for no reason he felt uncomfortable!!!

maan: what??? stop staring at me like that u 2...why are u both scowling???

both sighed at maan and resumed what they were doing earlier. now that's something he dint expect!!!

maan: are u both leaving me alone and just continue scowling rest of the way???

no response, ok that means a "yes". time to continue what i was doing, maan thought to himself!!! "yeh kahaan phas gaya main???", he muttered under his breath!!! maan drove the rest of the way in silence. he did try listening to the radio but heer got annoyed for god knows what and literally banged on the system to shut it down. after a while maan put some music on, which this time got a big no from prem. maan just prayed his friends dint ruin the music system in any way, actually he just hoped nothing was damaged!!! he rubbed his temples in denial and resumed driving. after a good long 10mins they reached the venue, obviously scowling!!!

meanwhile, geet had got home and was in her room after having good long chat with her family. she was about to change when her phone buzzed.

geet: hello???
pari: hey geet, patha haina aaj v-day hai???
geet: haan tho???
pari: tho kya???
geet: wahi tho main bhi pooch rahi hun...
pari: haan ...main bhi tho wahi pooch rahi hun...
geet: pariii...
pari: geeettt...
geet: awww pari phon pe chillao math. teek se batha ki kya kaam hai...
pari: maine kab chillaya tujhpe??? woh tho tum thi...
geet: tune mujhe majboor kiya tha chillane ke liye...
pari: maine??? kab???
geet: kab ka kya matlab???
pari: matlab???
geet: wahi tho main pooch rahi hun tujhse...
pari: main bhi...
geet: pariii chup kar!!!

there was a brief silence. both could hear each others breathing, thats it!!!

pari: geet tu teek haina???
geet: agar tu mujhe confuse karna bandh karegi tab main teek rahungi na???
pari: achcha...sry!!!

geet could feel pari making a baby face on the other side of the phone and she chuckled.

pari: tu has kyun rahi hai???
geet: kuch nahi, ab bolna kya baath hai???
pari: 10 min main ready ho ja hum planet x jaa rahe hain!!!
geet: par kyun???
pari: zyada naatak math kar, main teri ghar pahuchthi hun!!!
geet: ha ha ha...teek hai, bye!!
pari: bye!!!

geet wore a white dress for the party and was ready before pari showed up. obviously, she looked stunning and pari was complaining all the while that why she looked like an idiot and not geet. geet just laughed at her gestures while driving. they reached the venue, parked the vehicle and went inside. on the other hand, maan was sitting like a statue between his friends, while heer and prem were watching the crowd!!! maan finally decided to go and dance on the floor. he turned to heer,

maan: heer, shall we dance???

heer raised an eyebrow at him, questioningly...

maan: come on, i am getting bored here. dont mock!!!
heer: hmmm ok!!!

maan turned to prem

maan: tu chal raha hai ki nahi???
prem: nahin...

maan frowned and left with heer to dance. as of today, no girl approached maan for a dance because of his dress color!!! many felt jealous of heer thinking she was the one who got maan!!! pari and geet made there way to the bar counter and ordered 2 diet cokes and sat down scanning the club, beside prem. pari poked geet and showed him prem. well he wasn't less handsome than maan so obviously many gals did try there hands on him but in vain. geet glanced at him and nodded her head. pari made a face and said,

pari: i'm geeting him to dance with me, bet???
geet: u r crazy, he's already taken. he's wearing white.
pari: oh plz, does that mean even u r taken???
geet: thats not the point...
pari: well that is the point for me...bet???
geet: no
pari: oh come on...it's just for fun...
geet: what do u want???
pari: u know what???
geet: no ways, i am not giving u my black gown ever, so get over it!!!
pari: alright alright...how about ur sundress???
geet: fine...it's abet then...
pari: bingo!!! keep a watch!!!

pari winked at geet and she gave her a "yeah right" look!!! pari chuckled and left her seat and occupied the seat next to prem. prem was having his drink and it seemed like he was half drunk. pari smiled thinking her work was half done.

pari: hey handsome...

prem looked at her and looked away. ok now pari felt she still had a lot of work to do.

pari: seems like ur gf is dancing with someone else...

prem was obviously looking at maan and heer dancing all the while and pari being pari hadn't let that slip her eyes. prem straightened at her comment and looked at her.

prem: what do u mean???
pari: oh come on, anybody can tell that from the look of ur face. do u want me to elaborate it???
prem: it's none of ur business...
pari: oh it is every part of my business u see...
prem: and how is that???
pari: because my boyfriend is the one dancing with ur girlfriend...
prem: WHAT???
pari: hell yeah...
prem: maan doesn't have a gf
pari: well then u r wrong, maan is my bf!!!
prem: he's my bestfriend and he wouldn't lie to me, ever.
pari: sometimes they have to...
prem: i dont see ur point...
pari: well he certainly is doing all this to make me jealous, so i thpught it's probably the same in ur case...
prem: but i am not jealous
pari: oh really???
prem: alright, i am jealous...happy???
pari: bingo, well then it's time for payback...
prem: what do u mean???
pari: u know exactly what i mean...
prem: i cant do that...no
pari: oh stop acting like a kid and get over it...i am pari and u r???
prem: ok...hi, i am prem!!!
pari: nice to meet you prem, well then let's rock the dance floor...

prem made a face and followed pari towards the floor. pari winked at geet, who nodded with disagreement. "there goes my sundress!!!", geet thought!!! and looked around, thats when she spotted, maan and heer together. WTH????

precap: keep guessing my sweethearts!!!

how was it??? well you know the rule, "u get the PM only if u like or comment", so do ur job and i'll do mine...DEAL????😆😆😆😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
yuppy i m second one ya huuu...
it too good...
awesome ...
fantastic...
funny...
but u dont do good for ending at waiting pnt not fare di...,...
ok...cont soon...
all the best for ur professional life...
Edited by knirwal - 14 years ago
Sabmeratu. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update
Poor maans stuck between his best friends
Oooh wonder how geet is gunna react
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...xcitd to read nxt part wht geet wil do?...do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww loved it
aaj geet ka bhoot maan mein kise guss gaya
n poor geet uska sundress gaya
n pari lied that maan is her bf
wowww n geet saw maan n heer
more drama to come i think so
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
Nazmaa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
haha wat a thing to bet with/...
well Geet theres goes your sundress lol :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum luved it
do continue soon

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