Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 2 ~ Pt 55 Pg134

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: 810Kankana
HOSHWALO KO KHABAR KAYA ,
BEKHUDII KAYA CHEEZ HAI ...
ISHKQ KIJIYE PHIR SAMAJHIYE
...ZINDEGI KAYA CHEEZZ HAI...!!
loved it dear...keep it up👏😛

Woww.. shayari haan!!

Grt..

thanks a lot dear 😊

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: kareena32
👏👏 AWESOME UPDATE MAHIMA LOVE ❤️ IT
THanks for pm atlast geet is well now maan has get his shona back me happy

mahima why you feel that we dont like your FF i realy like this ff of yours its a very nice story dear and i realy enjoy reading KASAK and always waiting for update dont feel sad i realy like it 😉

please cont soon and this time with a long and romantic part please 👍🏼

Thanku so so much..

Just keep giving me all ur sweet comments.. they really motivate me..

Thanks again..

& yaa I'll defo give a long part this time 😊

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: zohafarheen
hey mahi
thanx for pm sweet heart and ur update was cool
and dont think no one likes it we love ur story yaar and it makes as happy while reading so dont be conscious we love ur updates so keep posting sweets

Thanku so so so much..

it really motivates me 😊

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet
Jus read whole ff in one go.

Its very nice.

Add me to ur pmlist

Thanks a lot dear..

Added u.. 😊

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nahtani88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#435

Awesome Update

cont soon

Thanks 4 The PM

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Anjali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#436

Sory 4 late comment coz nowdays m too busy wid my school. Hope u understand it and i realy like ur ff. Writting a ff is one of the big deal n u have written so well... I always think that how can u guys write so creative n wonderful ff. Wished i could too write ff but m fine wid reader post. I realy know its too hard to write ff n i realy realy appricate it. Finally geet is concious. M too happy n realy exited to see the romance of maaneet...
Update soon

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Crystal Saya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#437

FINALLY GEET IS OK...I M SO HAPPY...I M WAITING FOR NEXT PART...

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Gurlygirl
Sory 4 late comment coz nowdays m too busy wid my school. Hope u understand it and i realy like ur ff. Writting a ff is one of the big deal n u have written so well... I always think that how can u guys write so creative n wonderful ff. Wished i could too write ff but m fine wid reader post. I realy know its too hard to write ff n i realy realy appricate it. Finally geet is concious. M too happy n realy exited to see the romance of maaneet...
Update soon

Its ok dear.. I understand.. m too in school..

& thanks a lot.. it really keeps me going 😊

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#439

Part 46

He kissed her tears away. r u mad or what. Ab isme tumhari kyaa galti hai huh. Chalo now don't cry. He kissed her forehead. Thodi der rest kar lo. Acha if u want mai kahin nahi jayunga but u plz rest..
She was nowhere listning to him. Guilt was eating her. Maan u will not leave me naa.
He cupped her face. Jaan how can I ever leave u. u know mai tumhe jaan kyun bula raha hun. bcoz when u were away from me, then I realized that u r my jaan. tum ho tho mai hun. I can't live without u jaan. Mai kahin nahi jaa raha
Pakka. She asked innocently making a bay face.
Pakka. chalo now rest. He made her lie properly. She held his hand & closed her eyes.

It was abt an hour now. She was still not asleep. She was not able to fall asleep. She was scared. She just kept her eyes closed & checked on him after every sec opening her one eye. And finally he saw it. Ohh tho madam abhi tak nahi soyi hain he wondered. She immidiately closed her eyes. He got up from there & was abt to leave when she stoppedhim.
Ohh tho aap natak kar rahe the naa. Bas mere sone ka intzaar kiya & now u r going.. umm. She made a cute angry face & sat on the bed crssing her hands over her chest. He smiled inwardly & then turned back to see her.
Nahi geet mai tho bas pani peene jaa raha tha. But tum abhi tak nahi soyin
Wo.. mai
Tho u were keeping a check on me haan?
Nahi nahi.. wo mai
Geet tumhari mai mai karne ki aadat kabhi nahi jayegi naa

Maan.. she made an angry face.

He inched forward & in a few moments he was almost on her. Maan plz
He nodded his head. Tum hi tho chahti ho naa ki mai tumhare paas rahun. He smirked & looked towards her lips. His hands slipped on her waist making her shiver in his touch. He kissed all over her face. He took in her lips. He kissed her passionately. It deepened taking away their breath. But they were nowhere to stop. Her lips started bleeding. Her hands wrapped around his neck holding his collar tightly. she moaned maan.

Her moan made him more aroused. He was nowhere to leave her. His toungue slipped inside her mouth. They were driven into a different world. She felt his hands around her pulling her towards him. He didn't knew what happ to him. He just couldn't stop. He never knew this side of his. He was not able to control himself. His hands slipped inside her top almost unhooking her bra. Her eyes which were closed just popped out. She was all red. They were getting closer & closer. She was shivering quivering with his each touch. He kissed her more feircely. Only god knew what he cud have done if the dr wud not have come.

They looked totally flushed and wet. Mr khurana aap abhi tak nahi gaye?
Wo.. dr actually
Mr khurana u will have to understand. Geet theek hai but not fully. she needs rest.
Dr mai tho jaa hi raha tha but geet didn't let me go. Aur phir usne sone ka natak kiya.
Haww.. maan. Nahi dr he's lying. Wo tho inhone mujhe sone nahi diya.
Acha maine tumhe sone nahi diya?
Ji haan bilkul
acha. vaise who was keeping a check on me mai ya tum.
Maan wo tho mai bas
mai bas kyaa geet?
Plz plz u both stop fighting. Kisis ki galti nahi thi bas.
Nahi inki galti thi.
Bilkul nahi tumhari galti thi.

Meanwhile dadimaa anni brij & arohi came there.
Dadimaa: Bete aap dono ladna band karenge.
Dusht danav geet murmered.
Kyaa kaha tumne geet
Nahi maan kuch bhi tho nahi
Dadimaa: Bete plz stop it. Geet aap ko hamse nahi milna kyaa?
Dadimaa ye aap kaisi baat kar rahi hain.
She came & hugged her. kaisi hain ab aap bete.
Dadimaa mai bilkul theek hun.

They broke from the hug. Geet bete aap janti hain do din se maan ne kuch khya peeya bhi nahi hai
She looked at him in shock. He looked away. Maan.. Her eyes became cloudy.
Geet wo mai
She started crying. dadimaa yeh sab meri galti thi. sab meri wajah se hua
He came & kheld her by her shoulders. Geet stop blaming urself. Its not ur fault. Mai kuch kha lunga. pakka
She hugged him. I'm sorry maan
His hands carresed her back trying to soothe her. Geet calm down. Its not ur fault. plz geet aise mat karo.
She was nowhere to stop. Once again guilt ate her. It was all bcoz of her she thought.

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Maan taking care of geet

OK GUYS I KNOW THIS WAS ALSO NOT VERY LONG. BUT MUJHE GHSP DEKHNA HAI. SO CAN'T GIVE A LONGER UPDATE. REALLY SORRY. & GUYS MAYBE I'LL NOT UPDATE TOM. WILL PM LATER

PRESS LIKE BUTTON & COMMENT

Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago

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Mina420

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Posted: 14 years ago

#440

wow, me first...
so sweet - Maan and Geet keeping check on each other...

I wish MAan's and Brij's focus would slowly turn towards HOW this happened.

Great job...plz continue soon

Edited by Mina420 - 14 years ago