Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 2 ~ Pt 55 Pg134

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

awesome
superb
do cont. soon
thank for d pm

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Mahwish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#392

Wow nice updates...maza aagya..i think nw one mord twist is coming bt anywayz keep it up😊

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: Moon002
Absolutly loved it.I hav Jst read the other three parts as well.Cudnt read them because I was busy so really sorry 4r late reply.

Its ok dear..

glad u commented 😃

Thanks a lot 😊

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: simi91
wow their love so strong she
i'll recover soon

love how geet respond his touch

poor maan forgot to eat or sleep

untill geet be okay that is true love

& unconditional love

both parts mindblowing

love it core

awesome job

muah

bless yu

waiting eagerly

ty 4 pm

Thanku so so much dear 😊

Luv u too.. 😛

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Loved the update! Thanks for the PM

thanks a lot dear & ur welcome 😊

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: sanul
love it...
awesome

sorry for late comment...

i just read 40-44...

they all r awesome...

plz cont soon...

thanx for update...

thanx for pm ...

Its ok dear..

thanku so so much..

& ur welcome😊

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan
sorry for delay dear
but a cute and lovely part dear
hope a kiss hear...

Its ok dear..

Thanks a lot..

Kiss.. hmm.. lets c 😆😆

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: Parrimuskan
Wow nice updates...maza aagya..i think nw one mord twist is coming bt anywayz keep it up😊

twist to hai.. but don't worry not so soon.. abhi twist me time hai.. so relax..

And thanks a lot dear 😊

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810Kankana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#399

Baby, i always appreciate ur FF...ur writing is superb, maine sabse pahla jo story padhna start kiya tha, that was urs. i just lov it...aur suggestion ke bare mein pucho toh filhaal toh mujhe kuch problems nazar nahi aa rahi, evrything is perfect . Bas Maaneet ko alag naa karna aur unke beech dher sara pyaar rakhna, thats all i want ...keep it up dear...u hav a long way to go for sure...bst of luck, & we r always wid u ...😃👏😛

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mahimak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#400

Part 45

He held her hand. Geet mai yahin hun tumhare paas. Plz aankhen kholo geet.. plz
He indicated the dr to go out for a while with his eyes. The moment the dr went out his lips were on hers demanding her to open her eyes. She cud feel him unconcsiously too. This was love.. their love which has made her recover. She fluttered her eyes open. Breathing heavily she said in a whisper tone maan. He immidiately left her lips. His gaze went to her eyes which were now open.. for him. He cupped her face. Geet.. his eyes beacme cloudy. And in a moment they started watering with the tears of happiness. How happy he was at that moment he couldn't explain. Maybe she didn't need an explanation. she knew it the moment his eyes beacme cloudy. Maan aap rote hue bilkul ache nahi lagte. He hugged her.

His silent tears became loud cries now. How much he had suffered. But when she opened her eyes, all his pain just vanished. All he wanted was his jaan. Seeing life in his jaan, he was overwhelmed. Jaan his heart cried.
Maan aap tho mujhe shona bulate the. she said in a complaining tone.
Kyun tumhe yeh nahi pasand? He asked while hugging her, his voice broken bcoz of continous crying.
Nahi
Acha. He came out from the hug & stared seducingly towards her. His gaze went to her lips. it didn't took long to him for taking her lips in. How much he was longing for it. How he wanted to be with her all those moments when she was in pain. She responed with the same passion filled in her kiss. Being away from him even while being unconcsious.. the thought also haunted her. She parted her lips to allow him more access. Their tongues palyed with each others.

But they had to break apart when they heard the voice of the dr coming in.
Mr khurana did she opened.. & just then he saw her. She looked totally fit & fine. He came & checked her. Mr khurana aapne tho miracle hi kar diya. I still don't believe my eyes.
They both smiled. Ok mr khurana now u let her rest for some time. Phir ap inse mil sakte hain.

He got up to go out. But her eyes showed it all. She didn't wanted him to go. After being away from him for so long she was scared she will lose him. What wud happ in those few hrs who knew. She was too scared to let him go. maan looked towards the dr. Dr just 5 mins.
Ok Mr khurana but just 5. he went out.

He moved closer to her & held her hand in his. She tried to sit but was not able to.
Geet when u r feeling weak tho kyun stress kar rahi ho khud ko
Nahi maan I'm ok
Acha.. abhi thodi der pehle tum kis condition me thi do u know. Do u know what I was feeling. Last day was like hell for me.
She cupped his face. Tears started to flow from her eyes. Maan I'm really sorry.
She was feeling guilty. Guilty for putting him in such a situation. Guilty for bringing tears in his eyes. How cud she.. how cud she let him cry like that. Sab meri galti hai. She was on the verge of breaking down.
He kissed her tears away. r u mad or what. Ab isme tumhari kyaa galti hai huh. Chalo now don't cry. He kissed her forehead. Thodi der rest kar lo. Acha if u want mai kahin nahi jayunga but u plz rest..

pakka naa u will not go??

Haan baba nahi jayunga

He took her hand in his. Chalo now close ur eyes

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