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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

even here there is a third person...who is he...??????continue soon n thnxxx...

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

nice promo...

i am sure maan will not let any1 stop her frm meeting her dad...

thnx for PM...

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savie_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

the person may be ...

geet's step mom aur step bro ..

i know maan will let her meet to her dad...

he will help her ..

and if MSK is dere no one can stop her from meeting his own dad ..

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preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

loved the updates...

so some air cleared that geet was engaged to vicky then y he married mukti...

waiting with maan to find out how he is going to know the mystery and take care of his barbie...

pl cont soon

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skdevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
nice promo...

i am sure maan will not let any1 stop her frm meeting her dad...

thnx for PM...

yes coz he is the great msk

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skdevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

so sorry guys for not updating from 1 week but i was very busy , and a heartiest thanks to all who commented and liked my ff and i am also taking past from now onwards as you all curious about the past , so this is the starting of the past , feel free to comment hate comments are also welcomed and enough of my bak- bak ? happyy readinggg

PART 7

Maan grabbed the coffee from geet's hand and walked her to the nearby couch. He watched her every gesture and notat geet is somewhat quite may be she was still remembering vikey's word.
He decided to leave it for now as he don't want her to sad over such things as that will not be good for her health.

Geet waited for maan to say something , at least question her for vikey's such type of behavior as he already indicated every word toward her but didn't get any clue about what was going in maan's mind

Both silently sipped their coffee's oblivious to the fact that each was thinking about the other .

Silence lingered in the room as maan watched geet in the concentration, her silence was killing him in a way may be because she was used to of her balbering more often and seeing her like this was a torture to his soul .

Remembering abut good old days brought a smile automatically to his face , oh how she used to laugh at every little thing and than he he tried to remember the last time he saw her laughing and enjoying with every one that may be the worst moment of his life but it was the day he saw her actually smiling from heart , & then he took the decision to go far away & that was a mistake ...

he still remembered the day of geets & vikeys marriage announcement

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CANADA

it was an unusual day he has to take a flight to take back to India & he was more than happy doing that , he was leaving to India in like 15 Min's he can't tell how happy he was.
After being away for like 4 months, now he will be able to see his barbie, touch her , kiss her n what not ..., remembering about he barbie just brought a smile at his face ...
after settling in his seet he was again haunted by her memories ... how much serprised every body will get after seing him home. He was missing everybody and specially his barbie , his princess ...

He so much wanted to scream in joy because today he is going to proposse her to be his forever , he will tell her he much he loved her & wanted her in his life that he can't wait for the flight to land .

he called his best friend cum accountant of kc to inform about his arrival and warn him to keep it secret , he dosed of in the flight remembering about his princess .
after lending in the Delhi he was in so much hurry to reach his home that he even forget to properly great his best friend and yelled to increase the pace of the car that was so much impossible in the traffic of the Delhi , that 1 hour journey even felt much longer then the whole flight from Canada to India .

After what seemed like a eternity to maan the cart pulled in the drive way of the khurrana mansion , maan not even waited for the car to stop and got down , adi just chuckled at the hurry made by his friend , never in his life he saw maan this much enthusiastic ...

ADI- slow down maan, she is not going anywhere

maan just gave adi a annoyed look and walked away

adi just shacked his head on such hurry made by maan and proceed to take his luggage

Maan walked inside the khurrana mension, he heard the sound of chirping and laughing coming from the main hall of the khurrana mansion, that was very unlikely the mansion but he shrugged his shoulder and walked inside the house . He finally saw vikey and geet siting and anni standing behind with a frown but what he heard next left him shocked and dejected ...

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PRESENT

He came out of his thoughts when he heard the sound of coffee mug placed in the table , he looked up to see geet watching him curiously & smiled faintly at her ...

MAAN- oh geet what happened

GEET-(smiling) no no nothing

maan stood up to go out but remembered something , he looked back and speak

MAAN- are you free now

GEET- nodded curiously

MAAN-as we have fight in evening so i was thinking that we should go see your dad in hospital

GEET- nodded with teary eyes

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NT watched as maan and geet made their way out of the house, she was already frustrated since morning . Her every plain backfired just because of maan and vikey , she so much wanted to trouble geet but nt getting any chance since morning but now she sure will create trouble as she where is her dear little step sister going , an evil plan formed in her mind and smirked evilly ...

NT(st)- so hubby darling taking wifey to hospital , let me help them and she switched her mobile and dialed a number ...
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Maan already knws that meeting mr. handa wont bve an easy task knowing ran handa and brig , they are not so easy to deal with , so he made few calls to his lawer in anycase if he needed a fair game becaue he can't afford to see single drop in his princess eyes. After conforming everything he walked geet t the hospital;
they inquired about mr. handa's ward upn going their

maan watched geet as stood fearfully in the hospital reception

Maan- (worriedly)- hey geet , what happen

Geet- nothing i am just nervous what if they don't let me meet dad

Maan -nobody can stop you and i am with you na , so don't worry...

and with that he walked geet up to the VIP ward

just than a sharp irritating voice stopped them

maan clenched his fist as he know who is the owner of that irritating voice, maan watched with anger fleshing in his eyes as they come face to face with mrs. rano handa, geet hole maan's hand tightly maan assured her by placing his hand top of it ...

RANO- did u hear me u can't meet him

MAAN- and who will stop us

RANO- who r u to say that, i am his wife

MAAN- and geet is his daughter

saying that maan grabbed geet's hand and proceeded toward the hospital ward , just than they heard yet another annoying vice ...

BRIG- didn't u heard what mum said or are u deaf like your wife

maan glared angrily at the annoying creature , if looks could kill he would have been ashes till now

MAAN_ didn't u header what i said

& pushed open the door to go inside and grabbed geets hand to walked her to the room , upon getting no response he looked back to see her standing still with clouding eyes and winching in the pain , he felt his blod boil just as he saw brig twisting her hand forcefully and his princess whimpering in the pain.. h he so much wanted to smack his head in the wall for man handling his barbie

MAAN(angry)- leave her hand

brig tightened his hold and geet sobbed loudly

MAAN(double angry)- i said leave her hand

BRIG- what if i don't?

and that was the last blow to maan's anger he gave a loud punch at brig's face breaking his nose & that was enough for geet to be relived from her hold , maan gathered geet in his arm and soothed her by rubbing her back

maan watched brig with fury building in him with just the very thought of pain he gave to geet

MAAN- always think thousand times from now on before touching geet . she is no more a pawn now & from now onwards you will deal with geet khurrana w/o maan singh khurrana & just a single touch and i'll make your life hell ...

just then he looked up to see his lawyer approaching him with police

ADVOCATE- oh mr. khurrana these are the legal papers concerning the meeting of mrs. geet khurrana with his father

MAAN- thank you mr. sahni

he grabbed the papers and holding geet walked to the VIP ward and gave a dangerous glare to brig reminding him of his position

that is a long part
plz do comment and press the like button if u liked it

love
simmy

Edited by skdevil - 14 years ago

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ritzy09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

nice one...still lot of confusions as to what actually happened...

update soon

just noticed...I am the first one...🥳🥳🥳🥳

Edited by ritzy09 - 14 years ago

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skdevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: ritzy09
nice one...still lot of confusions as to what actually happened...

update soon

just noticed...I am the first one...🥳

yes u r first one

the confusion will finish sn as i am takjng past frm the roots f the problem

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Tinker ;)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

I REALY LIKE THIS STORY😊. I AM SCARED OF GEET PAST I DON'T WANT ANYBODY DOING ANYTHING WRONG WITH HER LIKE RAPE I KNOW THAT I AM TALKING LIKE A FOOL BUT I REALY DON'T WANT THIS PLEASE.