Opposites Attract - Maaneet FF thread#5 part 64 - Page 67

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Posted: 14 years ago
please can we have some nice maneet moments...i want them to start opening up to each other more honestly about their feelings...they are dodging this for far tooo long
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Sanju

how are you feeling now, hope every thing is fine
you are going to update it today right
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hiii di...😊😊😊

Hw r u????
Awsum update as alwayz..👏...loved the "Sirrr" part...waiting for "Maan" to come from her mouth..😍
nd Sasha ki to band bajja di Geeto ne...Gud gng.....Nw waiting for the launch party...m sure Sasha wud do sum mess over there nd v will get awsum blossom Maneet moments...☺️😆😉
U take care🤗 nd update when ur health permits...waiting eagerly...love u ..❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjeevani09

the next part will be big... let see if i can chop it into two parts. actually i dnt want the party to hang. want to complete it in one go. i havent started writing. i will try to do as soon as possible.
by the way how was ur paper??
the baby says hi to maasi



Hi baby ,,love u
Maasi Ka intention Baby ko Takleef dena Bilkul nahee Tha ..i swear ...
Baby Ka mummy ithna achee likhee comment kiye bina nahee raaha .

Ab Sanju .. u dont need to sit and type long long..
just ..wind up the story like ..
we tell somebody a movie story abridged form ..then ..take your time ...and ..after months ..continue where u stopped ..or stop here ..end of season ..ok..now good time to stop ..waiting for party
and ..i really appreciate ur good will that u dont want us to wait in between party thank you
no hurry sach meim..
mera baby mujey bilkul computer meim sit karna nahee detha tha ..i was not able to breath when i sit in that posture ...and i walk and stand and chat with my parents in india. lol

and afetr my son born..still i am doing the same lol..because ..he dont like me sit in computer and do my things, whenever he sees me sitting he demands and sit my lap and we both play his cute little fish, sheep games
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Posted: 14 years ago
@annie
i understand that i can wrap up but that wud not satisfy me... im trying to give a proper ending to the story... as i know my baby wont let me sit or even think after delivery.
i will try to complete as soon as possible but in a logical way.
i will update in an hour. written one part but trying to finish the party seq.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loveeed the update...it was really a complete entertainment package this time...i couldn't stop smiling throughout...
loveddd the "siiir" bit...
cont sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊
i really appericiate the pain u take to update...hats off to your sincierity sanju...hugs..
take care of urself
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjeevani09

@annie
i understand that i can wrap up but that wud not satisfy me... im trying to give a proper ending to the story... as i know my baby wont let me sit or even think after delivery.
i will try to complete as soon as possible but in a logical way.
i will update in an hour. written one part but trying to finish the party seq.


its really nice of you to think about us and wrap this story up😊 your story has been wonderfully written and all of us have enjoyed reading it a lot.

actually I also wanted to request you to finish this before you got engaged with the arrival of your baby but didnt know how to say it thinking its your story and your choice 😲

i repeat incase i have not said recently, all your updates have been wonderful and very very romantic and sweet 😃

pls tell hi to your little baby 😆 i want to be called a maasi too 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
sanju i think annie is correct, you should wrap up this with soon with some gud note. try to move the story bit fast and close this.
i know we will miss ur FF, but we should think abt you also right
Take care of your self
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 63
Geet was busy supervising the decoration of the magnificient hall they had booked in the city's best hotel. The decoration had different shaped lamp shades in all possible colours. And they had the dress code of black and white. She wanted things to be perfect so checking on ur own was the best option. Things were moving at the right pace until the printed brochures were delivered to her. she had checked and rechecked it before they went for final printing 2 days ago. She was confident that the only mistake that was there on in a centre page wud have been corrected. She just handed over the lot to her assistant to be placed at the designated place.

She relaxed at the corner with her first bite of the day along with one of the brochures.

The first page had blunder' she dropped her glass'how cud she have missed this'.she cud never do such mistake''..yes pari had checked it too but she had read it and called the printer herself''' how can she make mistake in her husband's name''..Maan Singh Khurana was missing "singh" and "khurraana"'''.. if Maan saw this hell will break loose'.. and what will he think of her that after so much timwe to her marriage she spelled his name incorrectly. She checked the whole brochure again' there were several other silly spelling mistakes. She hit her head with the brochure. She called the printer in a state of panic who said pari had called from office and specified these changes with great emphasis. When the printer had asked her that these wud create spelling mistakes she had argued that who is more educated and client are always right. So he did these changes. Reprinting at there place wud take atleast 6 hrs now. Geet looked at the time, it was already 12. That means it will be 7 by the time they will be delivered.

No ways'' I have to find some other way. She marched to pari''

Pari pleaded inocence time and again. Her tears were genuine and geet believed her. she had known pari and worked with her she cudnt create such blunder.

This is someones prank to ruin this idea totally. One option is that we dnt give the brochure and candles but this means we dnt advertise our issue properly. Moreover we will be ,et down in front of JM and Maan. They will be disappointed by our efficiency. He has believed so much in me'. I cant let him down. I have to find some way to correct this.

She made hasty calls to all the printer names she cud get there. But none cud do it in less than 5 hrs. all suggested it is only sadar bazar where she can get it done in 2hrs.

Pari have u seen yash?

He went home. He will change and come up early as he wants to be on time so to check the last minute things.

Babaji. Meine socha uske sath meion sadar chali jaungi. I cud get this done hand to hand and come back in 3 hrs. I don't even know this place.

I will manage here, if u go and get it done. It is near chandni chowk. U can go by metro fastest way to reach. No jam hassels.

How will u change?

Oh reema will replace me in 3hrs then I will go home and come back. How will u manage?

I will come back deliver the package and then go home, change and bang. Dnt worry. We will manage. Bas tu yahan dekh le.

Geet pinky aa gayi hai. Tu use sath le ja. She knows all the routes.

~.~.~

Tasha ' Sasha''.. maam. Apka plan to flop ho raha hai.

S ' tasha mujhe bas ye batao geet kahan hai?

Maam vo printer k paas gayi hai. To get it reprinted. Humne kitni mehnat ki thi kal, printer k no dhoondne mein, use call karne mein. Abhi pari ko geet call aya tha ki geet ne print karwa li hai aur ab wapas aa rahi hai.

Hold on tasha. I wont loose to that behenji. It is 4.30. geet will come back by 5.30. what if we dnt give her time to change''. Behenji apne salwar kameez mein meeting attend karegi high class party' wo bhi chandani chowk k galiyon ke smell k sath.

Par maam kaise?

Just wait this stupid pari is leaving'.. we will use her again.

Really''..

Hhhmm'. Shut up tasha. She thinks she can be favourite of MK. Now she will know what it is to go against sasha. MK never likes such mistakes. Printing mistake and then dress' so she will be either late or in her stupid suit.

~.~.~

As soon as pari left, leaving everything according to geet's design, sasha came in action. She easily forced reema to go and check the food. Menu, drinks etc. sasha confused her and she called yash for detailing.

In the mean time sasha got the workers replace the lampshades in such order that it looked tacky. Within minuted the hall looked stupidly decorated.

U know tasha best part wud be if geet straight way goes to her home to change. When she will enter the hall she will have surprises.

Yeah maam great planning even if she escapes one plan she has to fall into the other.

Both women smiled wickedly at their idea.

~.~.~

As geet entered the hall, her whole world was collapsing. Her core planning group had left to change. All she had was juniors who were not involved in planning. She was the only one knowing the minor details.

Geet is this ur classy decoration? Bhut classy look hai. Tasha it is 5.30 and guest will come by 7. Tasha geet is looking so beautiful. Geet u will attend ur classy party in ur classy salwar kameez.

Sasha. What r u doing here at this time? The office staff have to come at 7. And by the way who invited u? ab uninvited aa hi gayi ho to party mein kha lena.

Geet. do u know whom u r talking to? Im sasha. Aur ye jo drama tumne organise kiya hai. Better be prepared. MK is going to fire u. this will be ur first and last event. Event manager'.. aur apni launch bhi organise nahi kar payi.

Sasha come at 7. Door is that way. I dnt want to explain my capabilities to u.

Pinky ' geet ye to mess hai. Mujhe lagta hai sab is sasha chudail ka kiya hai.

Haan yaar''.. usse baad mein deal karenge. Abhi to party''

Pinky ' geet ab kya karenge yaar? Itne kam time mein redecoration vo bhi tere bina, nahi ho sakta. And how will u change?

Pinky let me think for 2 min. she breathed in and took out her pad from her bag. She drew with pen frantically.

Fine here is the lay out for the decoration. This design can be done with minimum change in present scenario. Collect all the hands we have'.haan reliable ones only. Each one will have to work.

They started working. Things were getting to place but they were running out of time. She had just an hour left. Each one worked to save.

Yash and pari came in. geet told them what happened in their absence. they were great help. Irrespective of their formal dresses each one ran up and down.

Pari u check the music.

Pinky tu dekh kitchen mein koi garbar to nahi.

Yash tu bar fir se check kar le.

Adi sir can u monitor the brochure nd candles wala section.

Hey reema tum saare mere sath aao for decoration.

Plz recheck everything. I dnt want any one tampering with our preps.

We will do it.

Yash ' geet almost everything is done. Ur dress?

Dnt worry I have called daadi. She has send the driver with it 30 min ago.

Maan heard this as he entered the hall. He had come early to check up with geet.

Geet. its one hour to party and ur not dressed. Decoration still going on. Kya ho raha hai? He demanded. He had expected ready hall with geet in her prim and proper attire.

She looked at yash and then to maan.

I will go and change. Mera dress a raha hai. Decoration is done. Dnt worry. Believe in me I will do it. She was so nervous that her hands were trembling.

Maan looked at her and yash.

We will do it.

Maan got a call and excused.

Haan daadi

Maan aap kahan hai?

Kya hua daadi? Aapko fir fever ho gaya?

Nahi mein thik hu'par vo geet ki party'

Daadi dnt worry party mein dekh lunga. Aap rest karo.

Nahi maan geet problem mein hai. Ek to uske absence mein kisi ne decoration change kar diya. Vo use fir se kar rahi hai.

Par vo gayi kahan thi?

Maan vo problem nahi hai. Abhi problem ye hai ki geet ne mujhe uska dress yahan se bhejne ko kaha tha. Driver le bhi gaya par vo jam main hai. 1 hr lagega use pahuchane mein. Meine apko phone kiya tha ye puchne k liye ki aap kahan hai'agar aap on way hote to driver uska dress office mein de deta' shayad jaldi ho jaata. Mein geet kliye bhut worried hu. Usne bhut mehnat ki hai aak kliye. Ek to mein fever k karan aa nahi rahi upar se meri bachi itne problem mein hai.

Daadi aap worry mat kijiye. I will see what I can do.

so madam fir se trouble mein hai. ye problem le k chalti hai...
He looked at the watch it was 6.10. he rushed to the mall on the same street.

He entered a boutique. It was one stop for designer wear and all accessories for woman. He chose a beautiful white gown for geet.

Can u give me everything she will need along with this dress.

Sir what do u want? Accessories?

No actually there is a surprise party for my wife and the dress should be in a way that she needs nothing else'accessories, footwear'.ah makeup'yeah everything u girls wud need for a party. and plzzz can u be fast.

Ok sir. She ordered two other staff to get jewellery and makeup while she showed him all the things. Maan was fast. He made his choices in one go. He looked at the lovely high heeled sandal and he knew it wud fit in geet's feet. Jewellery was easiest.

Dnt show me these makeup things. Pack a few options' she uses natural shades.. not very dark. She is fair. So in this u have the freedom just pack 2-3 of each.

Are u sure sir? So many'..

Money doesn't matter but nothing should go amiss. she must not have a problem dressing up with this pack.

She gestured maan to follow her. maan stopped looking at the place where she was leading him''..

Ahh' u r confusing. He got a hitch when she led him to the lingerie section.

Sir u said nothing a miss. If u dnt get her proper inner garments' how will she wear an off shoulder dress? All ur prepartion will go in vain.

Maan looked at his watch. He cudnt go into the exercise of choosing another dress and then the accessories for it. And in white this was the best he liked in one go and it was geet's size too.

Look y dnt u do it. I have least idea.

Ok but size?

Ahh..

Sir she is ur wife. Her size.

Maan gave her a confused look. It was the first time he was caught in such a mess. He cannot ask anyone's help.

#y do women have so many complications''..we r much better#

Sir dnt worry I will pack this also in options according to the dress size.

# uuuff escape#

~.~.~

Now I have to find a way to give this to geet.

his driver followed him into the hotel lobby carrying the shopping bags. He saw pinky coming out munching a chocolate. He gestured the driver to keep the packets on the couch and leave.

Pinky.

Yes sir.

Kya kar rahi ho?

Kuch nahi she said hidding her hands behind her back.

Tum log ka mujhe kuch samajh nahi aata' ye geet kahan hai? Uske ghar se koi aaya to reception pe mujhe uske bags de gaya. Us larki ka saaman lo aur yahan se jao. He told her in one go showing fake anger.

Pinky gulped in. sorry sir' mistake ho gaya hoga sir' sorry' I will take these to geet.

she scurried inside with all the packs to geet. meanwhile maan texted geet.

go to the reception. I have booked a room for u, take the card from there and change in the room. Hurry u have 15minutes to 7.

Geet smiled reading the msg. she took the card and rushed to the room on the top floor of the hotel.

She gasped as she read the label to the room'."BRIDAL SUITE"

Inhe aur koi kamra nahi mila'. Babaji ye kya karte hain''

Actually no other suite was available so maan booked it in a hurry.

The room was fabulous' nothing what geet had seen till now.

Red roses were decorated everywhere. She moved into the partitioned bedroom. And went thru the bags. It had none of her things. She had bought a black dress for tonite.

Daadi ne ye kya bheja hai'..sab brand new hai' are isme to tag bhi hai. Chad geet baad mein sochna abhi ready ho ja varna raavan tujhe kha jaaega vo bhi bina cook kiye hue.

She wore the dress then realised her strap was showing. This was her first off shoulder dress'..

Uuff babaji ab mein kya karu' ab ye kahan se lau. Pata nahi ye dress kahan se ayi.. daadi''' ok kahi ye maan ne bheja kya''bag dekho'.bagal k mall ka hai.. lekin unhone ye bhi purchase kiya''' babaji'' geet soch mat ready ho ja'..

She rushed to the washroom with the lacy white strapless b**.

Daadi called geet.

Geet all the best. Pata nahi maan ne apke dress ka kya arrangement kiya hai? Sab thik hai.

Daadi everything is under control. Aur dress achi hai. Mein change karke hall ja rahi hu. Take care.

Wish I was there.

It is alright daadi. Waise aapka ashirwad mere sath hai naa''

Haan aur maan bhi.

Hhhmm. She smiled while her hand traced the dress. Bye daadi.

Geet took final look at the mirror. Her hair was pulled in a messy bun just above her shoulder which made her bare shoulder more exposed. She had planned this hair style with few strands escaping the bun as it wud have suited her previous dress. Geet moved a hand over her neck, the creamy skin exposed. This was the first time for her to wear a gown and that too off shoulder.

Geet ab to hairstyle change karne ka time nahi hai. Air aise kuch jyada nahi dikh raha hai. Geet log tujhe nahi dekhenge'' there will be more beautiful girls wearing more exposing dresses. Chal ab'.. inko bhi aise adhe kapre mile the...mera black dress kitna thik tha...

i planned to post the next part today only but my hand is paining now...will still try... actually i lost the whole update after i posted it. so this is a redo.

plzzz do comment as ur comments may motivate me to put the next part today itself...
PRECAP
she kept her hand on his chest...she cud feel his heart beat...she breathed in and lowered her lashes... maan tried to gather from her face what she wants...but was submerged in her glowing beauty
mujhe aapse kuch kahana hai...
Edited by sanjeevani09 - 14 years ago

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