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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

oh finally atleast Geet found her ladoo and Maan his mishty 😊



Yeah they know who they are.. lol :D



Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

finally the guys found them...geet is shot...
awesome
do contiue soon
thanks for pm



yup they found each other...
xx


Originally posted by: piya-

brilliant update dear loved it

sorry 4 late reply
love -Piya



Thanks x



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Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

finally the guys found them...geet is shot...
awesome
do contiue soon
thanks for pm



Yeah Poor Geet...
I Got A Bit Too Carried Away...

Originally posted by: princess_mimi

I have just started reading ur ff ... its nice



Aww Hope you like it...

Originally posted by: shdisha

awesome update can u plz update another part in day...plzzz



thankyouu... will update tomorrow

Originally posted by: chingaming

awesommeee =D


please continue soon

xoxo!



thanks...
Will do...

Originally posted by: rupzloveu

please continue soon waitinggg



Updating Tomorrow...

Originally posted by: PLKG90

BOTH PARTS ARE FABULOUS YAAR!!

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!



Thanks x
Will update Tomorrow...
xxx



Sorry For Making You Wait...
I Am Updating Tomorrow...
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Posted: 14 years ago
IMPORTANT NOTE: Same NOTE On IMBL - (It Must Be Love)

Well As Some Of You Know...
Ramadan Is Coming Up..
First Week Of August...
And As I Am Going To Be Fasting The Whole Month...
I Will Not Be Stopping My FF's Or Even Ending Them
Just Updates May Not Be Regular For A Month...
Maybe About Once Or Twice A Fortnight...
This Is For All Three FF's...
As This Will Be One Crazy Month...
Fasting And Reading Traveehya...
Going To Be Tiring...
But Its Going To Be Worth It...
Its The Best Feeling And It Helps You Think About Those Who Have Nothing To Eat...
Hope All You Don't Mind...
And I Am Sorry For The Inconvience...

Will Promise To Update At Least Once Or Twice During This Blessed Month... 😊😊😊

Thank Youu All
And Updates Are Coming Tomorrow For Both This And Rushing Memoriess
Maybe MPP... X

Loveyouu x

x Mwah x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

IMPORTANT NOTE: Same NOTE On IMBL - (It Must Be Love)

Well As Some Of You Know...
Ramadan Is Coming Up..
First Week Of August...
And As I Am Going To Be Fasting The Whole Month...
I Will Not Be Stopping My FF's Or Even Ending Them
Just Updates May Not Be Regular For A Month...
Maybe About Once Or Twice A Fortnight...
This Is For All Three FF's...
As This Will Be One Crazy Month...
Fasting And Reading Traveehya...
Going To Be Tiring...
But Its Going To Be Worth It...
Its The Best Feeling And It Helps You Think About Those Who Have Nothing To Eat...
Hope All You Don't Mind...
And I Am Sorry For The Inconvience...

Will Promise To Update At Least Once Or Twice During This Blessed Month... 😊😊😊

Thank Youu All
And Updates Are Coming Tomorrow For Both This And Rushing Memoriess
Maybe MPP... X

Loveyouu x

x Mwah x




Hey Nazmaa! :) Thank God you told me that... or else my inbox would over flow... I won't be able to go on IF as much in Ramadan either! Now I'll be more prepared and I'll let others know that I won't be starting any new FF... 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
no problem will b waiting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
its ok...will be waiting for u to update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirl144




Hey Nazmaa! :) Thank God you told me that... or else my inbox would over flow... I won't be able to go on IF as much in Ramadan either! Now I'll be more prepared and I'll let others know that I won't be starting any new FF... 😆



Haha Well its a good job i mentioned it now...
btw still waiting for an epilogue for the jeena ka ishaara... whens that comiing...
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Posted: 14 years ago


Chapter 17

Maan had lifted Geet in his arms... he held and carefully went to find Vicky... Vicky was near the car.. he waited for Maan... he was soo worried for Geet... his best friend... just then he saw Maan with Geet.. he ran up to him...

Vicky ' Geet!! He looked at her and quickly looked away with tears brimming in his eyes unable to take the way Geet looked.. her body full wit bruises.. he then looked at her again... thats when his eyes caught the blood...

Vicky ' bhai... what happened to her shoulder... he said ...

Maan who hadn't notice the blood pouring out of geets shoulder suddenly looked and saw blood dripping... he looked at Vicky in pain...

Maan- humme isse hospital leh kar jana hai,.. jaldi... he screamed...

Vicky went to the ca and opened it... Maan sat in the back with Geet... he took her duppatta off her slowly looking away and ripped it... he got the torn piece and put it on her shoulder and tied it together in order to stop the bleeding...

He looked at her and saw she was going paler by the minute...

Maan ' Vicky!!! Jaldi.. she's losin alot of blood her said...

Unable to control the tears he let them fall..

***

Meera And Pinky weckere taken back to the handa mansion,... Dev and Adi had driven them to the hospital first.. they were checked by the doctor's and were given medication to take.. the bruises and cuts were treated too also... Dev took them back to the mansion.. they walked in to see the whole house empty... the went to Radhe's room to see him sleeping on the bed along side Sameer.. Sameer and Radhe had been Going through alot as they were left at home not knowing where the girls were and how they were...

Pinky went to Rahul and stood next to him.. it was jjust then did Rahul and the rest of the notice that pinky was actually stood next to them... Rahul turned and hugged Pinky first.. Anjali went to Meera and hugged her too...

Rahul ' tum teek tho ho na...

Pinky ' haan veerji... main teek hoon..

Rahul ' Meera tum??

Meera ' main teek hoon she said...

Rahul took Pinky in his arms again and this was when both girls broke down... Pinky cried in his ams... and Meera cried in Anjali's... Anjali Sat Meera Down on the chair and gave her a drink... then Radhe And Sameer Woke up as they heard crying... Radhe got up and saw Pinky and Meera and they Both Hugged him...

Meera and Pinky were sobbing in Radhe's arms...

Rahul looked around, his eyes searching for Geet.. he then noticed vicky and Maan wernt back either/... looking back at pinky and meera he took a deep breath and asked...

Rahul 'P...Pinky Geet Kaha Hai?? He asked worried...

Radhe heard Geet's name and broke out of the hug... he looked around and noticed Geet was not there...

Radhe started to panic...

Radhe ' Pinky... Geet ... Meri Geet Kaha hai... his voice had a hint of pain, and fear in it...

Pinky And Meera Looked At Each Other...

Meera ' veerji aap betiya...

Pinky ' Please all of you sit...

Arjun ' kyun? Kyya hua Geet ko..

Pinky ' tum kaun ho?? She asked wondering who he was..

Meera- we havnt seen you before... or them for that matter ... she said pointing at the others...

Arjun ' i'm Arjun Geet and Maan's Friends... and That is Dev and Adi... And That is Arohi...

Meera ' Hi.. Kajol... tum kab aaye... she said excitedly...

Sameer was getting irritated now...

Pinky ' Meera vo sab baad main karna pehle hum baat kara... she said...

Meera ' oh... she said... Sh*t...

Pinky the told them everything that had happened... up till the point he had shot Geet... they purposely missed that out... both girls were giving each other a look... All were shocked to know that it was their own uncle who tried to kill them... how could someone stoop that low,...

Rahul ' bhai... hum jo Geet se chupana chahtha tha Mama Aur Papa ki bai mein vo sab bhar aagaya... usse sab pata chal gaya... he fell to the ground...

Radhe was in shock...

Sameer caught onto the that pinky and meera were giving each other/... he looked at Arjun and then signalled him to look at them... Arjun knew at that point they are hiding something...

Sameer got off the bed and went to pinky... he held her hands in his...

Sameer ' Dekh pinky ab humme yeh batha baad mein kya hua tha... he asked scared of the outcome...

Pinky ' vo uske baad hum sab usko galiya dene laga.. aur usko bardaasht nahi hua tho vo hum sab ko marni laga... she took a deep breath and stopped...

Then Radhe came up to her...

Radhe ' Pinky tu dar maat... humme batha... dekh main tumhaa bhai ho na... hmm he said...

Pinky just nodded..

Pinky ' phir Geet ne usko gali di...

Meera bohat zada galiya di usne...

Sameer ' kya kaha Geet ne...

Pinky ' usni yeh kaha Haan Lekin Ek Galti kiya veerji ne... Aap Ko zinda rak kar bohat bara galti kiya hai veerji nai... bohat bari galti... then she paused

Radhe ' phir...

Meera closed her eyes and tears came out... pinky got up and went to a picture of Geet... Meera couldn't tell him and ran to be said n out of the room sobbing...

Rahul then sensed whatever was going to he said was not good at all...

Rahul - Phir..

Pinky remained silent..

Radhe ' TELL ME!! He SHOUTED... Meri Geet Ko Kya hua ha... Tell me ... he said sobbing...

Pinky ' Usne... she was sobbing and went into Radhe's Arms... usne Geet ko...

Rahul ' kya Geet ko Kya??

Sameer ' Tell us... Geet ko kya hua hai...

Pinky ' Veerji ... she cried... HE shot her... she said and broke down..

Radhe fell to his knees and cried...

Sameer screamed... NAHIII!!!

Rahul ' just shook his head... no... aise nahi ho saktha...

Dev pulled out his phone and dialled Maan's number but he didnt answer... then he dialled Vicky's...

***

Maan had taken her into the hospital.. carrying her... he ran to the accident and emergency...

Maan ' I NEED A DOCTOR NOW!! HE SHOUTED to the receptionist...

Receptionist was taken back by this anger...

Receptionist ' dekiya... doctors sab busy hai...

Vicky pulled Maan away before he bit the receptionist head off...

Vicky ' dekhiya.. vo Maan singh Khurana hai... aur vo aapko nauki si nikal saktha hai... yeh hospital humara Daadi ki vaja se kara hai... he said calmly before raising his voice... NOW GET ME A FRICKING DOCTOR... OR HE WONT BE THE ONLY ONE WHO NEEDS THE DOCTOR... GET IT!!

The Receptionist panicked... she called the doctor who came down immediately...

Doctor ' yes how can ... but before he could inish the sentence he saw Geet...

Doctor- oh god ... nurse he shouted... wuickly stretcher leh aayeii now...

The nurse brought the stretcher and Maan slowly put Geet on it,..

Doctor - quick she needs to go to the emergency room... bohat koon beh chukka hai... isi jaldi treatment ki zaroot hai varna we could lose her... he looked at her shoulder and then at the bruises...

Maan ' nahi... doctor usse bacha lijiya... please... save her... please he said and broke down in his arms...

The doctor took her to the Emergency room and started operated...

Just then Vicky phone rang...

Vicky ' Hello... Dev bhai...

Dev ' where are you guys...

Vicky ' Sh*t... he said hitting his forehead slightly ... bhai... please come to the hospitalll... we found Geet... and she may need blood... please Radhe, Rahul or Sameer ko leh kar aajaye... now!!!

Precap '

Okay i know i was supposed add Radhe seeing Geet and Maan and Geet telling each other who they are but i will add that in the next update which i will update on Friday...

Precaps are the same as last week... xapart from the hospital one...lol ...

Also i have replied to all your comment for the last update... :)

please ignore the mistakes.. not editted it yet...


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Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazmaa



Haha Well its a good job i mentioned it now...
btw still waiting for an epilogue for the jeena ka ishaara... whens that comiing...


Hey Nazmaa! Loved your update! 😊 And pleeease make Geet better soon naa! im waiting lol!

And I started a new FF... I had to pen it down before i forgot it... 😆 I know I said that i wouldnt... but i was so tempted lol😳 But I wrote an epilogue already in the last part of JKI.. where Maan and Geet had twins.. 😊



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Posted: 14 years ago


OH yeah!! duhhh...
im soo confused these days...
well will wait for the new ff
and it better be a maaneet ff :)

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