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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
poor meera
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
finally you updated
was eagerly waiting for your update
thanks a lottt for updating
well it was an amazing update as usual
the way you are carying the story is too good
i really cant wait for next update where i get to see maaneet moments
waise apne shehar shimla mein hi unki meeting rakhi hai
toh i want some awesome moment of theirs...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lovely SS ..

sorry for late reply

continue it soon silky .. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful part
i hope dev & meera solve
their problem so maaneet can
be together without tension
cont soon
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh man.. i hope geet finds out soon.. maybe maaneet and deveera.. jaldi yar.. update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thanku all for ur encouragement on all previous 6 parts''!!!
this time dint got many pics linked to what i had in my update...m sorry for that




Part 7



Savitri devi tells dev about the girls' name and he is shocked'.meera''!!

Dev: meera?

Savitri: haan bte meera hi naam tha'waise ab hum apni friend ko call kar dete hai ki hum log kal nahi aa payenge, kisi or din ka program bana lenge'..ab maan hi nahi honge to hum akele kya karenge jakar.

Dev doesnot responds back'

Savitri(approaches him): kya baat hai bte kuch pareshan se lag rahe hai aap??

Dev: kuch nahi mom bas aise hi'main apko thode der mein milta hu

Savitri: thik hai bte hum Mrs. Sharma ko call kar dete hai

Savirti devi calls up and tells her friend to tell them that maan has gone out of station for an urgent meeting so they wont make up for tomorrow's meeting. On the other hand Dev is bit tensed after hearing meera's name. He calls up meera, but she is crying badly so he tells her to meet him at a coffee shop in the evening. Both of them agreed.

Geet reaches the office and is waiting for her maan sir. Meanwhile adi comes up and tells that air-tickets have not been confirmed due to a very bad weather in Shimla. Maan overhears this and gets more frustrated.

Maan(thinking): aaj to mera din hi kharab hai'pehle mom ne pata nahi meri kaunsi baat ka kya matlab nikal dia or ab ye tickets nahi mil rahi'.upar se project sign karna important hai

Geet: to ab kya hoga Adi sir?

Adi: sir ek kaam ho sakta hai'..aapke liye taxi book karwa deta hu'..ye project bhi company ke liye kafi important hai.

Maan: haan adi yahi thik hai''par jaldi karo'..we are already late or agar weather kharab hai to car se jaane mein time bhi kafi lagega.

Adi : fine sir bas main abhi saare arrangement ho jaenge

Finally everything is sorted out and maan and geet are all set to go. Adi wishes maan all the very best and they leave for shimla.

In the car, geet is thinking as to how she can help her sister. Maan sees geet tensed so asks her is she has any problem.

Maan: geet tum kuch pareshan lag rahi ho'sab thik to hai na???

Geet: nahi sir sab thik hai.

Maan: ek baat bolu geet'.pata nahi par aisa lag raha hai tum kuch or bol rahi ho or tumhari aankhen kuch or

Geet: nahi sir aisi baat nahi hai.

Maan: geet agar tum chaho to mujhe apne boss ke alawa apna dost bhi samaj sakhi ho'.shayad tumhara ye dost hi tumhare kaam aa jaye'..

Geet bit confused as she should share his problem with maan or not??

Maan: kya soch rahi ho geet kya tumhe apne iss dost pe vishwas nahi'.waise maan singh khurana itni jaldi kisi ko dost nahi banata'soch lo'!!

Geet: acha maan singh khurana ji'..agar aisi baat hai to muje ye dosti manzoor hai''.

Maan: to batao geet kya baat hai jiski vajah se tum itni pareshan lag rahi ho?

Geet: aisi koi baat nai sir

Maan: geet tumne abhi bola tha ki hum dost hai to phir apne dost se kaisi baat chupana'.

Geet(selfthought) kya pata sir hi meri koi help kar paye'.baat karke dekh leti hoon.

Maan: bolo geet

Geet: actually sir meri beeji ne meri di ka rishta karna chahti hai

Maan: to isme problem kya hai geet??

Geet: problem ye hai ki meri di kisi or ko pasand karti hai actually vo dono matlab di or vo ladka ek dusre ko pasand karte hai'par abhi dono ne apne ghar pe iss baare mein nahi bataya hai'..beeji ne to di ke liye rishta bhi dhoond rakha hai'or vo kal di ko dekhne aa rahe hai'.par main to ab waha nahi rahungi' di ki haalat mujse dekhi nai jaati'.samaj nahi aa raha kya hoga

Maan: ye to kafi mushkil ho gyi hai''ye saari mom's ek jaise hoti hai'meri mom bhi''..par chodo meri baat'.kuch sochte hai'

Geet: maine apni di ko promise kiya hai ki main unki help karungi

Maan: geet tum pareshan mat hona'hum dono milke kuch sochenge'.

Geet: thanku sir

Maan: geet tumhe shayad dosti ke rules nahi pata dosti mein no sorry no thanks'..!!

Geet gives a cute smile''!!

Geet: sir aapn jaante hai maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main apse abhi itni aaram se baat kar sakungi'.main jaisa sochti thi aap usse kafi alag hai'..aap bahut ache hai sir'

Maan(self thought)socha to maine bhi nahi tha geet par pata nahi jab bhi tum mere aas pass hoti ho muje kuch hone lagta hai'mera khud pe control nahi rehta'.

Maan: bas karo geet par ek baat hai lagta hai aaj to baton se hi kaam chalana padega

Geet: kyu sir aisa kyu keh rahe hai aap??

Maan: agar flight mein hote to shayad Shimla pahunch gaye hote par abhi to kafi safar hai or mujebhook bhi lagi hai

Geet: sir ye baat to hai bhookh to muje bhi lagi hai.

Maan: driver raaste mein koi acha se hotel ayega to rok dena

Driver: are sahib raat kafi ho gayi hai ab hotel to nahin par dhaba zaroor ayega or vo bhi kafi acha'.kaho to rok du

Geet interrupts ha bhaiya ji rok dena waise bhi dhabe ka khana kafi lajawab hota hai

Maan: dhaba or main,,,kabhi nahi???



Geet: please sir mere liye ek baar.

Maan could not say a no so agreed'

They stopped at a dhaba'..it was raining badly'.there were around 2-3 guys sitting and having their food. Maan could sense that there was something wrong so he asked geet not to have dinner there'.but geet denied'!!

Maan checks his wallet and says he need to get money out from ATM as credit card wont be accepted at dhaba'.the driver tells him that there is an ATM machine behind that Dhaba'..!! maan tells geet not to go out from the car till he comes back. Geet denied but finally agreed. Maan took a while coming back so geet thought to go out and order something till maan sir comes back. She was ordering food and those guys caught up geet. One of them started approaching her. Geet saw him approaching towards her and had tears in her eyes'..



she kept moving and the guy followed her back. Maan came back and found geet missing. He got worried and asked the driver. The driver told that she went to order food. The guy was just about to touch geet wher maan comes and beats him badly'.all of them ran away'..!!

Geet realized the reason why maan asked her to stay in the car'..she keep staring maan''.and finally hugged him'..!! Maan for a while couldn't understand what had happened to geet'.but even he culdn't control his feelings back'.so hugged her back'..!!!




Next will be Dev and meera's meeting...and maaneet in shimla...😉😉


Please comment on how did u find this part...ur comments encourage me a lot...Will be waiting...😳
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...they even became friends...i love it...continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice part...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊


thnxc for the pm...😊


update nxt one soon...😊😊

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