Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 2 ~ Pt 55 Pg134 - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update. Finaly maan knows the truth. Very curious for the damaka part but plz no seperation of maaneet. Update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

Don'r scare me yaar what is this dhamakaa i hope maaneet get married to each other soon.


U will have to wait for the dhamaka..
But marriage itni jaldi.. have patience dear..😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanul

it's awesome...

lovely...
i just read 37,38,39
they all r beautifully expressed
thanx for pm dear
& sorry for late comment .


Thanks a lot dear :-)
& its ok for late comment.. np 😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Finally read last two parts!quite long..kya baat hai kiddo maaneet kiss raised d temperature😳 aajkal ke bacche bi na babaji 😃 anyway finally back to delhi, hope u dont have a shocker for us in delhi like cvs had.. Bankruptucy followed by amnesia.. So cliched.. Huh


He he he.. thaku dii 😳😳
& shocker.. just wait for that..😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

ab aur kitne dhamake dene baaki hain ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii awesum upd dear
superb
amazing
do cont soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it mahima...

so now more of dhamak huh???

But kaisa dhamaka??? Maaneet marriage??? But I guess we will have to wait for it ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 40


Geet came close to him. She held his hand. Kyaa hua maan
Maan: Geet dadimaa ki tabiyat theek nahi hai. we will have to go
Geet: Kyaa hua dadimaa ko maan
Maan: Geet don't panic. Hum jaa rahje hain naa pata chal jayega. u don't worry. Tum apna saman pack karlo aur brij ko bhi bata do
Geet: Ji
She left from there to pack her bag & inform brij.

She had almost packed her bag & maan had went to arrange their tickets. He had called Adi & asked him to arrange the tickets but bcoz of that strike going on in HP even adi was not able to do anything. Maan asked him if their private jet cud come to pick them. That was the only opinion left. After some time Adi informed him that jet wud come to take them today evening.

On the other side daarji was standing in his room near the picture of his daugter Preet..geet's real mother, talking to her. Puttarji kitna mana kiya tha maine tujhe ki mat de janm is bachi ko par tu nahi mani. Meri hi galti thi tujhe itna lkad kiya tha na uska hi natija tha ye. Dekh ab kya kiya is ladki ne. pehle tujhe maar dala aur ab tere bhai ko. Par ab mai chup nahi beth sakta. Mai apne vansh ko khatm hote nahi dekh sakta. Ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.

He called Pammi(Geet's thaiji). he had a plan in his mind which he cud execute well with her help. She knoked the door.
Pammi: Daarji aapne bulaya mujhe
Daarji: Haan puttarji andar aajayo aur darwaja band kardo
Pammi did as he said. Ki hoya daarji.
Daarji: Pammi tu to janti hi hai ki is manhus ki wajah se kya kya ho gaya hai. ab mai apne vansh ko aur khatre me nahi dal sakta. Maine kuch socha hai
Pammi: Daarji mai samjhi nahi. kya socha hai apne?
Daarji: Puttarji ab ham hath pe hath dhar kar nahi beth sakte. Ab kuch karna hi padega. Maine socha tha us manhus bachi ka saya hamare parivar par nahi padega. Par tune dekha na itni dur shehar me thi wo aur tab bhi yeh sab ho gaya. Ab mai aur kuch hote hue nahi dekh sakta.
Pammi: Daarji apne socha kyaa hai?
He told her his plan. At first she found it really wrong. But then what all had happ & daarji's perspective didn't seemed wrong to her so she agreed.
She took a deep sigh & said. Theek hai daarji mai kardungi.

It was almost noon. She had had her lunch.She was finished with her packing & had also informed brij & he found this correct bcoz if she will stay here long someday she will get to know whats all happ. So this seemed the best to him for now.

She was stnading in the balcony now enjoying the weather. It was still very pleasant. She didn't knew why but she was feeling happy. Happy to leave this place? Nahi nahi how cud that be. why wud I be happy in going away from here. But maybe this is only correct. This situtation was becoming worse for her. It had been 2 days since she had came back to her home & no one except brij had talked to her. She was really worried that why were others behaving so weird with her.

Suddenly a hand from behind closed her eyes. kaun hai
Pehchano. She heard a bubbly voice very familiar to her.
She held her hands & turned behind. She held her ears. Acha to ab tu mujhe tang kaegi huh
Sorry di sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry
Just then maan came. Geet tum to har kisi se sorry bulva leti ho. Pehle mujhe phasaya ab ise
She opened her mouth wide. Acha tho maine apko phasaya hai.
He nodded his head. Before she cud get him he ran from there. But after a while she got him. pakad liya. She took a long breath. She was breathing heavily bcoz of running too much.
Geet r u ok?
Raji came from behind. Di agar lunch karte hi aise race lagaogi to aur kyaa hoga?
So u r her sister? Maan asked.
Yaa I'm her sister. Raji. Hi jiju. She put forward her hand
Hi.. to tum bhi janti ho
Mujhe tho janna hi padega naa
they both lalughed & shaked their hands

Geet was still breathing heavily. She was not feeling well. she suddenly rushed towards the washroom. He ran behind her. She started puking. He patted her back as he always do. geet did u ate mushrooms?
She nodded her head for a no still puking. Finally after she was finished he hugged her. geet tum theek tho ho naa. Her little little things used to make him so much concerned. She cud never stop herself from falling for him all over again. Maan mai bilkul theek hun. I think maine breakfast kare bina direct lunch kar liya na bas isiliye.
He asked her to rest for a while. She said no. Maan mai bilkul theek hun aur vaise bhi delhi bhi jana hai na. Apka jet ane hi wala hoga.
Par geet
Maan plz
Fine as u wish.
She hugged him again. Raji was standing there & watching all this. Ahem ahem. They broke apart. Didi jiju ap log na romance bad me karna first tell me di ap wapas ja rahe ho
Geet came & cupped her face. Raji maan ki dadimaa ki tabiyat kharab hai. we will have to go aur phir yahan... she paused. she didn't wanted to tell her all that. & she thought taht raji didn't even knew abt papaji's death yet. So she changed her words. I mean whan meri job bhi hai naa
Raji: Ok di.. as u wish
She hugged him I'll miss u di.
I'll miss u too

PREACP

Geet not well.. something serious


OK SO FIRST A FALL I WANT TO MAKE IT CLEAR TO ALL OF U THAT DADIMAA IS JUST A LITTLE ILL SHE WILL BE OK. SOMETHING SERIOUS WUD BE WITH GEET NOT DADIMAA. & IT IS POSSIBLE THAT THEY DON'T GO BACK TO DELHI.


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Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...

i hate daarji and thaiji... i think they have mixed something in her food.. hope not poison... grrr
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Posted: 14 years ago
kahin unhone ne to hi khane mai kuch mila diya ho ..
like poison ...

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