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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thanks for your awesome response everyone!😳😳

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

Hey my dear readers🤗..

Here's the next update .. I know that was quick but i was so bored that's why i already typed it .. Oh well, a surprise is waiting for all Mayur fans😉 .. Anyways, have a happy reading peoples .. 😳

Chapter#14

All four are shocked hearing what the police said. "Par Mayank ne toh unn logo ka kaam karna chod diya hain.", Anurag defended Mayank. Nupur supported him and said, "Aur issi liye toh uss par jaanleva attack hua. "Aur waise bhi, tu pehele uss Sanjay Joshi ko pakadh naa jo iss sab ka boss hain.", Taani joined too.

"Dekhiye, aap logo ko cooperate karna hoga. Mayank bhale hi unn logo ka saath chod chuka hain par phir bhi woh ek criminal hain. Pehele uss ne kahi crimes kiye hain. Iss ke liye humhe uss ko arrest karna padhega. Aur raha sawaal Sanjay Joshi ka toh usse hum dhund rahe hain. Lekin abhi bhi woh mila nahin hain.", the police said politely.

Nupur interrupted like a Jhaasi Ki Raani and said, "Aap aise hi Mayank ko arrest nahin kar sakte. Woh abhi abhi hospital se aaya hain. Aap aise.." Mayank came to Nupur and stopped her saying, "Rehene de Nupur. Koi faayda nahin hain."

"Par bhai..", Taani told Mayank worriedly. Mayank looked at Taani, touched her cheeks affectionately and said with a slight smile, "Aapna khayaal rakhna." Then he went to Anurag and said in a low tone, "Anurag, Taani ka khayaal rakhna."

Anurag said with tears in his eyes, "Main tumko jaldi jail se chudwaayunga. Yeh mera waada raha."

Mayank smiled at Anurag's assurance and said, "Mujhe tujhpar pura bharosa hain. Apna khayaal rakhna. Bye." Saying that, he went with the police. Nupur stood there numb with tears in her eyes and Taani broke down in Anurag's arms. Anurag thought determinedly, "Mayank ko jail se kisi bhi tarah nikaalna hi hoga."

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A couple of hours passed. Mayank sat quietly in jail and remembered how Nupur cutely fed him just before his arrest. He also remembered how they all were teasing Taani while having lunch. Thinking that brought tears in his eyes as it was impossible for him to live happily without them.

While Mayank was in thoughts of all these, a constable came and opening the lock of the jail, he told him, "Chalo tumhari zamaanat ho gayi hain." A huge smile curved on Mayank's face hearing that. He came out and saw Anurag standing there. He smiled broadly at Anurag and went to him. Hugging Anurag with brotherly affection, Mayank said smilingly, "Shukria dost!" Anurag said hitting Mayank playfully on his head, "Phir se shukria kaha toh jail vapaas bhej dunga."

Mayank laughed and said, "Ohho! Main bar bar bhul jaata hoon." "Koi baat nahin!", Anurag said. The police interrupted and said, "Mayank, tumko yaha sign karna padhega." Mayank signed on where the police told. The police informed Mayank, "Kal court ki sulwaai hain. Tumhe waha upasthith rahena hoga." Mayank nodded and then left to home with Anurag.

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Nupur and Taani were wandering around in the hall. Their eyes were stuck on the doorway. The doorbell rang. Both jumped in joy and ran to open the door. Opening the door, they saw only Anurag standing in front.

"Bhai kaha hain, Anu?", Taani asked worriedly. Nupur touched Anurag's arm and said in a single breath, "Onu Da, aap Mayank ko lene gaye the naa. Kaha hain woh? Aap ke saath kyun nahin hain? Bataaiye naa!" Anurag stood there lowering his eyes with frowned expressions.

"Anu, kyun humhe itna daraa raha hain? Bataa naa, bhai kaha hain?", Taani asked impatiently. "Main yaha hoon.", someone said excitedly and then came in front. Yes! He was Mayank. Anurag smiled broadly. Taani and Nupur were overwhelmed with joy and happiness seeing the smiley Mayank standing in front of them. They suddenly ran to him and hugged him together. Mayank smiled and put one arm around Nupur's shoulders and the other on Taani's. Anurag and Taani giggled at Nupur hugging Mayank without even thinking that her own brother was right in front of her. Seeing Anurag and Taani giggling, Nupur realized what she did and she instantly moved back hesitantly. She looked at Mayank who had an ocean-sized smile curved on his face. And the reason, probably she knew it.

After Taani broke the hug, she asked Mayank concernedly like a typical sister, "Tu theek toh hain naa bhai? Tujhe waha koi pareshaani toh nahin hui naa? Unn logo ne acchi tarah se behave kiya naa? Tujhe koi chot toh nahin aayi?", she said in a single breath. Mayank smiled at his sister's concern and said smilingly, "Taani, thoda break mar. Main bilkul theek hoon. Mujhe koi pareshaani nahin hui. Unn logo ne theek tarah se hi behave kiya. Mujhe koi chot nahin aayi. Bas? Aab theek hain?" Taani and Nupur smiled at Mayank's answer.

"But ek problem hain! Kal ki court case.", Anurag said tensely. Taani and Nupur said shockingly in chorus, "Court case?!?!" Mayank said, "Haan! Mujhe bail toh mil gayi hain par mere upar case abhi bhi hain. Aur main iss baat se inkaar nahin kar sakta ke main criminal nahin hoon. Maine bohot illegal kaam kiye hain past mein. Toh uske liye toh mujhe sazaa milegi hi."

The other three frowned at what Mayank said. Seeing them like that, Mayank said, "Dekho tum log aise udaas mat ho. Tum log agar aise rahoge toh mujhe kaise yeh sab tolerate karne ki himmat milega? I really need you people's support!"

"Hum humesha aap ke saath hain.", Nupur assured Mayank holding his hands in hers. "Himmat nahin haarenge.", Anurag and Taani said in chorus with a smile. Mayank smiled broadly having his friends' support. Then all had a group hug.

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Nupur sat beside her window and stared at the sky. Tears flowed from her eyes continuously. Suddenly she felt someone wiping off her tears. She immediately turned back and saw Mayank standing there and smiling at her. "Arey aap!", Nupur said and stood up wiping off her tears.

"Tu ro kyun rahi thi?", Mayank asked raising his brows, though he knew the reason, but he wanted to hear it from Nupur. Nupur hesitantly said, "Main? Main kaha ro rahi thi? Oh shayad aakh mein kuch chala gaya hoga." Mayank smiled at Nupur's nervousness and took a step closer to her and said, "Jhoot mat bol!"

Nupur felt nervous and stepped back and said, "Nahin! Main jhoot nahin bol rahi hoon. Sach mein, aakh mein kuch chala gaya tha." Mayank smiled, took one more step close to her and said, "Lekin tera chehra toh kuch aur ki kehe raha hain." Nupur stepped back and bumped against the wall. "Mera chehra? Kya kehe raha hain?", Nupur asked nervously.

Mayank stepped close to Nupur which made Nupur's heartbeats in the fastest mode. "Tera chehra yeh kehe raha hain ke tu mujhe aisi haalat mein nahin dekh sakti.", Mayank said waiting for Nupur's next reaction. Nupur gulped down a lump of saliva inside her throat due to her nervousness. Mayank loved how he was effecting on Nupur.

"Tujhe ghabraahat kyun ho rahi hain?", Mayank asked with a mischievous smile, already knew the reason. "Mayank, main woh..", Lowering her eyes, Nupur was about to say something but Mayank quickly covered her lips with his palm and said lovingly, "I love you Nupur!"

Nupur looked up and her eyes met Mayank's eyes which went on to a romantic eye-lock. Nupur's eyes got teary and much to Mayank's surprise, she suddenly pulled Mayank into a tight warm hug leaving Mayank totally astonished.

"Mayank, yeh kya ho raha hain humari life mein? Humhe do pal ki khushi kyun naseeb nahin ho rahi? Kal shayad main aap ko phir se kho du, par main aap ko khona nahin chahti, Mayank. Log sach hi kehete hain, zindagi mein kisi ki importance uske jaane ke baad hi pata lagti hain. Pata hain Mayank, jab aap hospital mein the, aur uske baad police aap ko pakadh ke le gayi, inn sab mein kab mujhe ehsaas hua ke main aapse pyaar karti hoon, pata hi nahin chala.", Nupur said her heart out with tears in her eyes.

Mayank hugged her tightly. After a while, when they broke the hug, Mayank slowly brought his face close to Nupur. They closed their eyes and Mayank kissed on Nupur's tears very gently making Nupur heavily breath. After he moved back, he said lovingly cupping Nupur's face in his hands, "Tere aakho mein aasu acche nahin lagte Nupur. Aur yeh sab kuch jo hua woh shayad destiny ka koi khel tha, bas issi liye ke tujhe tere pyaar ka ehsaas ho jaaye. And by the way, Nupur, tune mujhe khoya kaha hain. Main toh humesha tere dil mein rahunga. Aur waise bhi, choro ko kabhi bhi umarqaid ya phaasi ki sazaa nahin hoti."

As Mayank said that, Nupur instantly covered Mayank's lips with her palm and pleaded, "Aisi baatein mat kije please. Aap ko kuch nahin hoga." Saying that, she hugged Mayank again. Mayank just smiled and hugged her back with all love and affection.

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Taani was crying her heart out in Anurag's arms. "Pata nahin kal kya hoga Anu. Aaj ki raat bohot lambi hone waali hain. Kal shayad bhai hum sab se durr chala jayega. Main uske bina nahin rahe sakti Anu.", she said while crying. Anurag held Taani by her arms to make her look at him. He said cupping her face in his hands, "Mayank tujhse durr nahin jayega Taani. Tu fikar mat kar. Main hoon naa." Saying that, he wiped off Taani's tears.

Sniffingly Taani said, "Main bhai se bohot pyaar karti hoon Anu. Uske upar ek kharoch bhi mujhse tolerate nahin hota." Anurag assured Taani saying, "Mayank ko koi kharoch nahin aayegi. Usse kuch bhi nahin hoga. Mujhpar bharosa hain naa?" "Khud se bhi jyada!", Taani replied. Anurag smiled a little and said, "Toh phir theek hain, tension karna chod aur so jaa. Bohot raat ho gayi hain."

"Neend nahin aayegi Anu! Tu mere paas rehe jaa naa!", Taani said innocently. Anurag smiled and said, "Accha theek hain!" Saying that, he made Taani lie down and he sat beside her. "Aakhe bandh kar!", Anurag ordered cutely. Taani asked innocently, "Tu jaayega toh nahin?" Anurag smiled at Taani's innocence and shook his head. Satisfied with what Anurag said, Taani closed her eyes and Anurag started passing his hands through her silky hairs to make her sleep.

After a long while, Anurag sensed Taani sleeping very peacefully with his hands in hers. Anurag tried to get his hand out but Taani held it more tightly and slept. Anurag gave up and laid down beside Taani. He smiled at her beauty while sleeping. Kissing her softly on her lips, he cuddled up to her, buried his head in her neck and slept.

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Mayank and Nupur sat by the window with Nupur's head resting on Mayank's chest and Mayank's hands around Nupur's waist. They had their eyes closed. They felt the beauty of the full-moon night and the cool breeze of air with sweet smiles on their faces. Mayank slowly opened his eyes only to see Nupur so innocently enjoying the nature. Seeing her like that, Mayank smiled and kissed on her forehead which made Nupur open her eyes.

She looked up and saw Mayank gazing at her and beautifully smiled. Suddenly her smile vanished as she thought what the next day could bring in their lives. Mayank understood what Nupur was thinking. He said, "Dekh Nupur! Kal jo bhi hoga, dekha jaayega par uske liye hum apna aaj kyun barbaad kare. Aaj khushi se jee lete hain ek dusre ke saath. Kya pata, phir mauka mile ya naa mile."

"Mayank, aap phir se aisi baatein kar rahe hain?", Nupur asked annoyingly. Mayank said, "Mujhe malum hain ke meri baat tujhe buri lagi hain par main jo kehe raha hoon uske chances bohot jyada hain. Kal mujhe kuch saalo ki sazaa ho sakti hain. Par uske liye hum aaj dukhi ho, yeh kaisi baat hui. Aaj humne aapne pyaar ka izhaar kiya hain toh uss pyaar ko jee lete hain, sab kuch bhulaake. Please Nupur!"

For Mayank's sake, Nupur smiled. Mayank slowly lean down and kissed gently on Nupur's cheek making her cheeks blush and her heartbeats fast. Nupur smiled at Mayank's touch and pulled him again in a warm, tight and loving hug in a way as if she never wanted him to go away. They closed their eyes again and felt the warmth of each other in the cold, chilly night.

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Promo:
Mayank was standing in the criminal box in the court..
Nupur,Taani and Anurag were sitting in front of him and showed him thumbs up sign..
The prosecution lawyer started placing his facts..
Nupur folded her hands and prayed to God closing her eyes, "Kaali Maa, please mere Mayank ko mere paas vaapas le aana. Unhe kuch nahin hona chahiye. Please."
Opening her eyes, she looked at Mayank who just smiled at her giving the reassurance to have faith.
A third person speaker says, "Abhi abhi shuru hua tha Mayank aur Nupur ka rishta. Kya woh aise hi khatam ho jaayega? Kya yehi likha hain destiny ne? Kya Taani apne bhai ko kho degi? Kya Taani aur Anurag ke jeevan mein khushiya rehene ke baad bhi woh khush nahin rehe paayenge? Kya Mayank durr ho jaayega apne pyaar, dost aur behen se?"

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Phew! For the first time .. updated such a long part😆 .. hope you guys aren't disappointed with me and had fun reading the update! 😳
I felt emotional reading some parts .. what about you people? 😉
Waiting for your comments/criticize! Please press like if you liked it! =D

Friends .. a very important thing .. I'm getting so confused regarding the PM list .. Please press the Like Tab of the first post on the first page to be in the PM list .. Please do it if you want to get PMs .. Next time, I'll PM only those who liked the first post on the first page .. Sorry if being rude ..😳

Love..
Bidzy <3

P.S. - Sorry if I forgot to PM anyone ..😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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aswathy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

so finally mayank and nupur confessed...loved it soo much..it was so simple nd subtle...hope mayank will be safe...

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: achoose
so finally mayank and nupur confessed...loved it soo much..it was so simple nd subtle...hope mayank will be safe...

They say naa .. beauty lies in simplicity .. I just followed this rule .. Glad you loved it so much .. Thanks a ton for your response .. Stay tuned ..😳

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-Ripal-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

😆 u forgot 2 pm me...bt luckily i found ur chapter

its was lovely as usual...u r fab writer...d whole ch was vryy relaistic..it feels i m also in d storry 😆

poor mayank...luved mayr confession

taanu r soo cute...luved d way u described dem its awsum blossum

vryy scaryy promoo

update soon

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daniella

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

lovely update...

mayur scenes were awesome...

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: ripal_taanu
😆 u forgot 2 pm me...bt luckily i found ur chapter
its was lovely as usual...u r fab writer...d whole ch was vryy relaistic..it feels i m also in d storry 😆
poor mayank...luved mayr confession
taanu r soo cute...luved d way u described dem its awsum blossum
vryy scaryy promoo
update soon

I'm so sorry Ripal! Really sorry!
Anyways glad that you liked the chapter! Aww thank you so much!😳
Finally I could write something realistic in this FF!😆
I'm truly overwhelmed with joy that you loved mayur confession n taanu's scene..😃
promo is scary, ikr..😕
Will update soon!😳

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: daniella05
lovely update...
mayur scenes were awesome...
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

Thanks Daniella! Glad you liked it!😳

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RoohPay

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#289

res!

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i m here to edit finally. sigh.

nautanki🤗🤗🤗

as usual awesome update!😃

mayu was taken to police station.😔 and finally anurag ne zamanat karva di.gud ha!😊

they r like brothers. i loved their bond.😃

awww...mayu was back! nupsi hugged him! how sweet!😃

so ...confession was damn cutely romantic!😍

nupur hugged him 2-3 tyms! how adorable!😃😳

i really loved their moments.😳

precap...*sigh* cont soon.

payal_

P.S.- i m waiting for "namkaran"🤣

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Shobhana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#290

Wowww...

Bidz... An amzing chapter. seriosly you gave all the description I wanted... I am happy that Mayank's out. but plll make it forever naa... You know what I mean...

I loved the way Mayank proposed Nupur... It was very simple yet tooo romantic... And i loved each and every single dialogue of this chap...

And I love Taani's innocence... And the way ANurag takes care of her is sooo loving I cant express it in words... I to love this update long and full on romance...

Thnax for the PM.. And next time update ASAP