MN-AT * It's all Destiny - Ch 19, Pg 59 THE END

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#251

awesome update Bidz

like anurag...he's a true frind...bt did he knw abt mayank's profession??

like mayur scene.

mayank's so sweet.

its grt to see nupur...she's so confused abt her feelings.

i hope, she understand her feeling soon.

love Abhijeet sir's entry...i love him.

bt he's from CID...nt from police.

precap sound interesting.

i hope, they didnt come there to arrest mayank!!!

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
awesome update Bidz
like anurag...he's a true frind...bt did he knw abt mayank's profession??
like mayur scene.
mayank's so sweet.
its grt to see nupur...she's so confused abt her feelings.
i hope, she understand her feeling soon.
love Abhijeet sir's entry...i love him.
bt he's from CID...nt from police.
precap sound interesting.
i hope, they didnt come there to arrest mayank!!!
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

Thanks! All ur confusions,questions n nupur's confusion will see their end soon! Oh so u r a fan of abhijeet sir too? Haha..thats nice :)) yeah i know he's frm cid but didnt giv much importance to it as it was just a cameo role..lol what made u think that the police went there to arrest mayank? Well just wait n read ;) haha!

@everyone: thank u a lot guys :)

@jiya: unres soon n stop rofling! :P

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#253

That was awesome part dear loved the flash back of anurag n mayur moments were so sweet thnx for the pm

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RoohPay

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Posted: 14 years ago

#254

edited my comment on page 37...hv a look...😛

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Nahiyan (Nahi)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#255

An amazinggg update Bidz!!!

Loved all the emotions and the love going on in that part!!!

Hope Mayur get together soon.

xxx

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#256

Greetings to all my amazing buddies, 🤗

Thank you so much for your awesome comments on my previous update. I'm truly glad that you liked the chapter.😳

Thanks for the likes - supriyamnfan, salma009, KaJen_IK_DMG, sharmeeli, gopi06, valiyah27, SujaLuvsMayur, .SilentPrincess, daniella05, kirti123, pearl10, anahita.taanu, arjun-forever, Bhawna_arti, mijanur, --jiya--, love.mayurarti, SamiraARTiMAYUR, -Faria-, annie07, --Ruchi--, zaryaabJuhi1b8, achoose,

Here's the 13th chapter of "It's all Destiny"..

Have a happy reading..😳😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#257

can't wait to read update soon

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#258

Chapter 13

Mayank, Taani, Anurag and Nupur returned home from the hospital next morning. They were relaxed and happy as the problem in their lives was over. They smilingly bid bye to each other and went to their rooms. Taani helped Mayank in walking toward his room as he was still weak and his face looked pale, while Nupur and Anurag went to their respective rooms to freshen up.

*After 1 hour*

All four were sitting in the dinning room and eating lunch. Mayank and Taani were sitting beside each other, where as, Anurag and Nupur were sitting in front of them.

"Finally, sab kuch theek ho gaya.", said Nupur and smiled.

"Haan! Sab problems khatam ho gayi.", said Taani and smiled broadly.

Mayank looked at Anurag and Nupur and said showing gratefulness on his face, "Mujhe bachaane ke liye bohot bohot shukriaa."

"Humari dosti mein thank you aur sorry kabse hone lagi? Main aapse kaha tha naa ke jab hum apne dost ke liye kuch karte hain toh uske liye sorry ya thank you jaise shabd istemaal nahin karna chahiye. Phir bhi aap!", said Nupur with fake anger.

Anurag supported Nupur and said, "Haan bhai Mayank! Yeh toh galat baat hui. Thank you bolkar tumne humare dosti ho chota kar diya."

"Accha baba! I'm sorry.", Mayank said with guilt.

Nupur continued saying with fake anger, "Aur sorry bhi nahin."

"Toh phir main kya bolu?", Mayank asked childishly.

"KUCH BHI NAHI!", Taani shouted making the rest three shut their mouth.

"Kya yaar tum sab, kis topic ko lekar baith gaye. Chup chap khaana khaaw naa. Bohot bhukh lagi hain. Mujhe shanti se khaane do, disturb mat karo.", said Taani childishly.

The rest three burst into laughter. Taani looked at them innocently. "Kyun has rahe ho tum log?", she said very cutely.

"Bhukkhad kahi ki!", Anurag said to Taani teasingly.

"Bilkul sahi kaha tune Anurag.", Mayank supported Anurag.

"Kya tum log bhi naa! Bechaari Taani ki taang iss tarah se toh mat khicho.", Nupur said dramatically and she too laughed.

Taani stared at Nupur and Mayank angrily. Then she stared at Anurag in a way as if she was going to eat him right then. She said, "Anurag ka baccha, main iska badlaa tujhse lekar rahungi."

"Main intezaar karunga.", Anurag said with attitude and gave a hi-five with Mayank and Nupur.

Taani said angrily, "Tum log khaana khaw. Mujhe bhukh nahin hain." Saying that, she stormed out of there.

"Arey yeh toh sach mein bura maan gayi.", Nupur said worriedly.

"Main dekhkar aata hoon.", Mayank said and was about to stand up.

Anurag spoke up in between, "Mayank, tum kaafi weak ho. Tum khaana khaw, main usse lekar aata hoon. Nupur, Mayank ka dhyaan rakhna." Saying that, he went to Taani's room.

Nupur slightly smiled at Mayank and started to eat. Mayank extended his hand to touch his food. Nupur saw that his hands were shivering and was concerned. She instantly stood up and sat beside Mayank.

"Aap ko kamzori ho rahi hain. Main khila deti hoon.", Nupur said. Mayank smilingly nodded like a cute kid.

Nupur teared a piece of paratha, dipped it in the daal and brought it near Mayank's mouth. Mayank smilingly brought his mouth nearer and ate it. They went on like this when accidently Mayank bit Nupur's finger.

"Aaoouch!", Nupur screamed in pain. Mayank realized what he did and quickly grabbed Nupur's finger and began to blow air through his mouth. Nupur lovingly stared at Mayank and smiled at the fact how Mayank was always concerned for her.

"I'm sorry Nupur! Maine jaan buch kar nahin kia.", Mayank said worriedly. Nupur smiled and said still gazing at Mayank, "Koi baat nahin!"

Mayank was still looking at Nupur's finger and said, "Dard ho raha hain?" Nupur smiled and shook her head. She was still gazing at Mayank who looked even cuter.

Mayank looked up to face Nupur and was amazed to see her gazing at him. He too smiled and started gazing at her which went on to a romantic eye-lock. Mayank, who was so lost into Nupur, grabbed Nupur's hand, slowly brought it near his lips and kissed it. Nupur closed her eyes and blushed.

Mayank loved the effect he had on Nupur. He smiled broadly. Nupur opened her eyes slowly, stood up, shyly smiled and ran to her room. Mayank passed his hand through his silky hairs and said with a broad smile on his face, "Oye hoye!"

(While MN were having a cute moment at the dinning table, Anurag was busy in manaao-ing Taani)

"Taani! Taani!", Anurag screamed searching for Taani in her room. "Kaha gayi yeh?", he said to himself worriedly. Just then, he saw Taani standing at the balcony facing towards the buildings. Anurag smiled and went to her.

Taani stood at the balcony angrily with her elbows leaning on the railing. "Samajhta kya hain khudko? Ek bar "I love you" kya bol diya, sochne laga ke woh mujhse kuch bhi kehe sakta hain? Huh! Main bhi iss Anurag Chatterjee ko mazaa chakhakar hi rahungi."

Suddenly she felt two strong arms around her waist. She blushingly smiled and closed her eyes. "Anu!", she whispered. Anurag put his index finger on Taani's lips and whispered lovingly in Taani's ears, "Ssshh! Kuch mat bol. Sirf iss pal ko mehsus kar. Kitna romantic environment hain, haina? Thandi hawaa, hum dono balcony mein, ek dusre ke itne karib."

Anurag could feel Taani's fastest heartbeats. "Abhi bhi naraaz hain mujhse?", Anurag asked Taani in a soft voice putting his chin on Taani's left shoulder. Taani shook her head. She brought her hands up to her waist near Anurag's hands and held them tight.

Both felt the cool breeze of wind for a while in each others' arms. The moment was too romantic and magical and both were lost in it. They were in a different world where only them and their immense and pure love were present.

"I love you!", Anurag sweetly whispered in Taani's ears and kissed her earlobe. Taani shivered as Anurag did so. Anurag smiled seeing his effect on Taani. Taani blushingly smiled with their eyes still closed and said, "I love you too!"

Anurag nuzzled his nose into Taani's hairs and kissed on her neck very gently. Taani shivered and held Anurag's hands even tighter. This was truly the best moment in her life.

Anurag moved back and made Taani turned to look at him. Taani's eyes were still closed as she wanted to feel the moment to the fullest. Yet she was cutely smiling. Anurag held Taani's waist and pulled her close to him in a way to never let her go away from him even for a second. Taani blushed. Her breaths were getting heavy after getting so close to Anurag. Closing his eyes, Anurag came close to her and brought his face close to hers. There was an inch distance from his lips to hers. The feel of each others' hot breath on their faces made their heartbeats in the fastest mode.

"ONU DA! TAANI!", Nupur shouted from inside the house in an extreme worried tone. Anurag and Taani jerked out of their dream world nervously and moved back instantly. "Nupur aise chilla kyun rahi hain? Kahi koi problem toh nahin hain?", Taani said worriedly. "Chal dekhte hain.", said Anurag and both ran inside.

Taani and Anurag came to the drawing room running. "Kya hua Nupur? Tu pareshaan dikh rahi hain?", Anurag asked Nupur tensely. Nupur gestured Anurag to look at front. Taani and Anurag looked in front and was shocked. "Police?!?!", Taani said worriedly.

"Inspector, aap yaha achanak?", Anurag asked confusingly. The inspector said, "Dekhiye, aap ne jis dono gunde ko pakadhwaya tha unn dono ne kaha ke Mr. Sanjay Joshi ke illegal business mein Mayank bhi shaameel tha. Iss liye hum unhe arrest karne aaye hain." Anurag, Taani and Nupur were shocked. Mayank, who was standing beside the doorway of the drawing room, was super shocked. Nupur and Taani's eyes were teary.

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Nupur was crying her heart out in the bathroom and said, "Mayank, main aap ko aise haalat mein nahin dekh sakti."
Taani was broken down in Anurag's arms.
"Mayank ki kisi bhi haalat mein jail se chudwaana hi hoga, chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.", Anurag thought with a determined look.

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#259

Hey friends 🤗

Okay so I hope that the update was good.😳😳

Don't forget to tell me how you liked MaYur cute scene and TaAnu romance.☺️

Did you like the twist by the way?😉

Waiting for your DETAILED comment and please Like if you liked the update! Thanks!😳😳

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Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#260

I was going to sleep n thought to check i f u updating r not but guess i was lucky u did before i go to bed 😉 thnx 4 that
back to the update was so sweet

both couple moments were superb

nups feeding mayu n gezing was cute

Tanu moments were romantic wish nups didn't intrept them

about the twist hope everything goes well soon

waiting d next thanks

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