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Posted: 14 years ago
last two updates were Brilliant

nice attitude ...Interesting.

cont. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved geet who said him everything. precap seems to b very good
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing update. jst loving geet so much. waiting for the nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet is really in his nerves
precap me kutch galat na ho
if yes then also they r going to be married
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!excellent story and execution!so unique!i'm jst luving the brave geet here!she does have some guts to woo for.really adorable and maan is asusual hot!!luving it.thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I would call this Geet as Thiki Mirchi...

Man!!! what a wonder girl...

how easily she handles him... and how easily she makes him do things against his wish...lolz...

I'm just loving her...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi All,
Thank you all for your support.. please keep liking and commenting ...
THX again,
Anu
Part 9
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When Geet reached home she did not feel so good about what happened today... everything was Ok in her favour but she felt bad...

Geet(ST):"I don't know why I don't feel so good about what happened today... everything became a little messy... may be I made it so. I just wanted to meet Maan but never thought ot would be such a big deal... his employees, if his employee would have given me the small information everything would have been OK... but they were right too... they did't know who I am to Maan"

Geet(ST):"you know na how big personality he is, yes he is your fiancee but he is Maan singh Khurana, how could they let anyone to meet me... aur uper se khud ko dekha bhi ha tune... aise kapde pehen ker jayegee to woh tumhe 3rd grade employee hee na samjhenge... no one can imagine that Maan knows you by any chance... jo bhi aaj tamasha hua, I was responsible somewhere... i don't know if I brought him embarassment too..."

Geet(ST):"I wanted to talk to Maan personally but yeh jo publically hua ajj... no should not have happened... I should just say a simple sorry to him..hmmm... but how... he will not give me chance to talk face to face at home... ek simple letter me sorry likh detee hoon... aur haan I have to do something to make him feel it's not a deal for me...

kya yeh deal paper Maan ko de doon...

tab main Dadima ko nahi jantee thee per aabb jantee hoon...

yeh rishtoon ke beech deal theek nahi hai"

Geet:"baas ek sorry and this Deal paper... he will understand I am really sorry.."

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Maan at his office

Maan(ST):"yeh Geet ne to aajj had hee ker dee... anyways it doesn't matter to me waht people say or think but Geet went a way ahead today... better she doesn't come infront of me... pata nahi main kya ker baithoon isbar... see her guts, she was teasing me... nazdikiya chahiye use hamare rishte me... uska darwaza to tumne khud hee band kiya hai... you made a deal marraige not me..."

Maan finishes his work early and leaves for home at 7:00 pm...

He is completely disturbed by Geet today... he is just trying to control his anger.. praying

that better he don't see her for atleast 2-3 days till his anger comes down

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in KM

Geet:"Dadima... kya main Maan ke kamre me jaa saktee hoon... ek message chorna tha... he comes late aur tabtak main soo bhi jatee hoon..."

Dadima:"arre beta... you don't need permission, it's going to be your room too... soon"

Geet is hesitating to enter Maan's room.."abhi tou woh honge bhi nahi... I will just keep it and will be all done"

She opens the door and enters... its quite in there.. she see's a big sectional sofa set and a beutifull office setup..."it doesn't look like a personal room" she steps ahead and see's that there is a glass door and then realises that there is a whole division made of glass but she could not see other side... it's fully covered with a heavy curtain... completely seperated...

she goes ahead and slowly opens the glass door.. sneaks in.. nobody is there..."wow what a beautiful room" instantly comes to her mind.. everything is in complete style and lavish... it's quite... she goes ahead and places the sorry letter and a deal paper on the table at the center of petite sofa set...

Then her eyes goes on the balcony and the beautiful view its giving... no one is in there so she just goes ahead to check the balcony... she is lost at the beautiful sight it's giving


Maan enters his room... exhuasted, he opens his shirt.. he is now in his formal trouser and his black vest..which is beautifully exposing the toned muscel of his arm and shoulder and nicely shapes over his well toned abdomen...

he goes ahead to hang his shirt when he see's someone in balcony.. he goes ahead and it's Geet!!!!!! his anger surfaces with full force...

he throws his shirt on the sofa goes ahead and instantly catches her by her wrist when Geet is all lost in the view outside... before Geet could understand he drags her all thru his big room and throws her on the glass wall... puts both her hand together to her back and hold them tightly with one hand and places his other hand on the glass wall ...

she is surrounded by him and his hand...

Geet:"Maan woh main..."

Maan(shouts):"shut up!!".. his eyes red with anger and his face shaking

Maan:"ek dum chup.. aaj office me tamasha kerke chain nahi aya tumhe... now you are here in my bedroom... you are going way ahead Geet..."

She opens her mouth to speak and he closes it with his other hand on wall... Geet gets scared with his look... his face and eyes red in anger and his close proximity... his toned body which she can see for the 1st time.. she can smell him.. she kind of feels him and gets scared by her weakness... in his room so close to him... very 1st time a different sensation for him...

Maan:"tou abb tumhe mere bedroom tak aa gayee...nazdikiya chahiye na tumhe hamare rishte me... aaj main tumhe bata hoon nazdikiyan kaisee hootee hai"

With this he brings his face near to Geet.. she is scared... her eyes are scared.. he is enjoying seeing her scared from him for 1st time.. he releases her lip by removing his hand.. her pink lips shaking from fear... voice doesn't come out of her mouth.. she tries to release her hands from him but he is physically too strong for her...

Temptation and anger... Maan places his lips on hers.. hard... he forcibly opens it and takes her lower lips between both of his and presses it hard.. he tastes it with his toung..

Geet is trying to resist.. then he takes both of hers within his.. presses them slightly with his teeth... he rubs them with his toung... Geet gives in... she parts her lips... and then there is long passonate and angry Kiss... their toung tasting each other's saliva... every part of there mouth within...

they seperate... but Maan is not satisfied with his anger... he removes her dupatta..."Maan please leave me.. don't do this..".. Geet's plead arouses him more... he places his hand on the open part between her neck and chest and slowly moves within her kurti towards the upper parts of her curve...

sudden energy comes to Geet and she hits him with her knees on his belly...his hands suddenly on his belly and Geet throws him far from both her hand

Geet:"chiih... itne kamzor honge aapp main kabhi soch bhi nahi saktee... ek ladki se jitne ka yeh tareeka hai aapke pass... chiih"

She picks her dupatta and leaves... Maan straighten up... his hands now shaking... he is shaking "what was I about to do???? yeh kya ho gaya tha mujhe???"

He sits on the bed near which he was thrown... completely embarrased by his act now.."woh meri hone wali biwi hai aur main... chi"

He keeps his both hands on his head..."woh tou usne mujhe rook diya... main kya kerne jaa raha tha... kabhi maaf nahi ker pata main khud ko..."

his puts his head up and his eyes goes on the paper on the table... he goes ahead... 1st read the single paper(sorry letter) and then the staple pages(Deal paper)..

he sits down in shock..."I don't even deserve her" comes out from his mouth..

next to be continued

Precap: Maan:"Dadima mujhe Geet ke baare me janna hai..."

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Posted: 14 years ago

great update Anu...I wonder if Daadi will tell about her past or not...but she should clarify this deal thing to him...

btw i am the first one today...yeah...🥳

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part loved it
& thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...please please please update soon...cannot wait to see what will the great MSK do...

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