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preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

interesting ff...

thanks for the spoiler pm i got to read the rest of the parts...

pl keep me in ur pm list...

the story is interesting...

pl cont soon

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skdevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: preethia
interesting ff...
thanks for the spoiler pm i got to read the rest of the parts...
pl keep me in ur pm list...
the story is interesting...
pl cont soon

thanks 4 the appreciation it means a lot
& i'll b updating tonite

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skdevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

NOTE

we r on the way to the story after those dreedfull two months & plz hv patience the story will take near about 7-8 parts to unfold , n plz press the like button if u liked it , that will help me take the story on its way ...

PART 4

GEET opened her eyes when she felt something totally change in the walls surrounding her .
she blinked her eyes to reassure if she was not in a dream... but it was genuinely not a dream . she tried thinking how come she is in a different room... how come she is in somebody else room...
than the tube light of mind went on ...no ...no ...its not actually somebody else room , its maan room , but how cum she ...(placed a hand at forehead )... than it dawned upon her that they r married now ,
she stretched her palm & saw conformation of her marriage their is still dried sin-door at her forehead as a memory from previous night

Just then she heard the sound of click indicating at the opening of the washroom door & she heard maan saying

MAAN - good morning , did u slept well 😊

GEET -(looking down) oh yes i did

MAAN-(while combing hair) i'll wait for u in main hall downstairs

GEET- nodded & went ahead for her morning routine

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geet got ready in a light pink sari & went downstairs ...

meanwhile whole khurrana family was sitting in the dining area including DADDI MAA , Awantika (maan's step mom), Dev ,NT , Vikey, ANNI & mukti (geet sis) ...

(u all may b wondering how come mukti is hear than she is vikeys wife )

...

Geet tried searching maan around her but he was not their , it was such a fear full condition , she suddenly felt at the loss of the warmth , she neared the table just than daadi maa looked up...

D.maa - geet beta come hear i was waiting for u (sensing her nervousness she again asked )
bete what happen ?

GEET- maan , daddi maa where is maan ?

DAADI MAA- oh he just went out to attend a imp. business call ... he must b coming any minute

NT- (sensing toward vikey) oh' somebody is missing her husband badly.

ANNI -(sternly) why ? u don't miss ur husband ... (mocking) oh ' waise how can u miss someone who follow u like puppy 😡

NT glared angrily from anni to geet

daadima while sensing some tension in the surrounding , spoke up

D.maa- geet bete its ur first day as eldest daughter in law of the house u hv to prepare sweets for all of us , come lets go & cook something ...

Awantika- (interrupting ) no need to play the happy family .

fresh tear started to weel up in her eyes , but before she can shed them , anni spoke up

ANNI- waise u r right mom , v don't need to play a happy family b'coz v can't b haapy until ur favorites don't learn to behave themselves ...

after a wait of half an hr., the whole khurrana family was seated free from all the other rituals& later maan joined them all in familly room

ANNI-(st)- how come no body is thinking for my bro's honeymoon ...😉

ANNI -geet bhabhi where hv u planned to go for ur honeymoon

at the mansion of honeymoon all heads shoot up at anni, while nt smirked evilly while watching shocked expression of geet

vikey glared angryley at anni

NT(evily)- why don't v send both newely wed pairs, i mean maan veer g OOPS JIJA JI - geet
nd vikey mukti to the Paris , its romantic ... what say dev darling

DEV - offcorse darling i hv booked 4 tikets of evening flight ...

& that was the last blow to vikeys anger

vikey got up to leave just than he felt a hold at his hand & that was the enough for the realization & he felt himself saying ...

VIKEY - yes ' why not sure NT bhabhi g

at the approval from the vikeys side maan looked up to see geet face , he felt her breaking from inside , how much ever he wanted to go on a proper honeymoon with her but he can't make her show her vulnerable side to all ...

MAAN- sorry , to u all but v can't go on honeymoon coz i'hv to go London for some business issue & me &geet r going there for 15 days , hope u all won't mind changing ur planes

saying this maan headed upstairs but stopped to see perfect silence ...

MAAN-geet won't u help me in our packing ...

geet nodded while going upstairs ...

phew i m done , that was the longest update ...guys plz... plz ... comment n press the like button , as that will help me to take this story to next part soon ... feel free to give ur oppinion

with love
simmy

Edited by skdevil - 14 years ago

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

res
yay...yay me 1st...
me 1st

abd longest update u say??😲
how cum??😕

i want even longer one baby!!!😃

n e ways
awesum update👏
luvd annie standing up against NT
and den maaneet going to london😉
yay...
plz continue soon

Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago