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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#771

wow marvee.. that was just awesome...

loved eacha nd evry line...

yes hot bad boys are much much better than the other guys!!!

please continue soon!!

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Marvee Khan

@marvee-khan

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#772

Untold Emotions

Part 19

I WILL NO LONGER BE WRITING ON INDIA FORUMS, PLEASE REFER TO MY BLOG TO READ MY STORIES.

https://marveesfictions.wordpress.com/

Precap: Something hot and steamy, I promise😛

Thread 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44302507

Part 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44313501

Edited by marvee-khan - 13 years ago

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#773

wohooo me first...me first...

u kw wht by reading each line...i culd hear my dak dak so loudly...oh it was an awsm update..dreamy😍..passionate ☺️nd wht nt😍..just awsm👍🏼👏...finally she confessed...nd she s completely maan ki geet nw...eagerly waiting for the next part... do continue soon😉...

Edited by eiya22 - 14 years ago

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#774

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳

i am falling short of words, i have reserved this post to write something but now i couldn't even breathe properly

sry i can't comment on this part first let me breathe properly☺️

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#775

Ooof marvee you should have given us a warning if you wer gunna write something steamy
hawwt update☺️
Me blushing lyk mad wile reading this ☺️☺️
finally geet confessed her feelings for maan
Wow luvd the swimming lesson,,that bird just had to ruin the moment😳😳
can't wait for the next update x
Cont soon Xx...