MN-AT * It's all Destiny - Ch 19, Pg 59 THE END

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ruchi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

nice update...👏

feeling bad for both nupur and taani as they were helpless

but like that they are confident 😊

promo is cool...for Mayur

but ye taani ka kya chakkar hai boss ke sath ph. pe🤔

hope everything will be fine

waiting for next update...do cont soon😊

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Thanks everyone for the awesome response!🤗 Anurag is in coma but don't worry guys..kya pata kab koi miracle ho jaaye?! Just wait and watch..oops I mean read!😉 Ritesh will always be ghatiya, be it in the serial or in any FF!😡 Keep praying for Taani!😛 Hahah!😆 Will continue soon!😳 Love ya all!❤️

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

wonderful update Bidz.. Poor Nupur had to sell her mother jewellery to get some money... And Taani's boss is so cheap... its disgusting...

Mayank is okay, but anurag slipped in coma...! I think he'll help Taani when she goes to her boss at night.. since he knows the placen and time...

Continue soon...

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

awesome update.

very emotional.

awww

nupur sold her mother's jwelry.

tani's boss was so cheap...i hate him.

waitiing for next update.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Thanks guys! :)

@Laiba: you didn't comment on my new MaYur FF yet?? :(

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jiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

res!! will update by the weekend!!

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Hi friends..🤗

Thank you sooo much for the amazing response!😳

Glad you all liked it!😃

Will update really soon!😊

Lots of love for you all!❤️

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sharmeeli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Interesting update dear!👏 I'm having the feeling that Onu is going to rescue Taani😳😍 Plzzz update ASAP dear😳 and thanks for the PM😳

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Chapter 11

Taani and Nupur stood there shocked. Anurag's doctor said, "Dekhiye, aap log ummeed mat chodiye. Mr Chatterjee coma mein zarur hai par agar bhagwaan ne chaha toh woh jaldi hi theek ho sakte hai. Aap log sirf bhagwaan par bharosa rakhiye. Aur haan, woh sab sun sakte hai, dekh sakte hai lekin bol nahin sakte aur chal phir nahin sakte. Issi liye aap dono ko unke saamne ek dum normal rehena hai taaki woh jald se jald coma se bahar aa gaye."

Taani and Nupur nodded in a yes. Mayank's doctor said, "Mr Sharma ko 1-2 ghante mein hosh aa jayega. Woh aab bilkul theek hai."

Nupur: Kya hum unn dono ko dekh sakte hai?

Anurag's doctor: Unn dono ko general ward mein shift karne ke baad aap unse mil sakte hai.

Taani: Theek hai.

Anurag and Mayank were lying unconscious. Their beds were side by side. Nupur and Taani were sitting in the middle and staring at both of them. It was really tough to see their dear ones like that. Tears streamed from their eyes.

Taani: Nupur! Tumne kal raat se kuch nahin khaaya hai. Ghar jaake kuch khaalo.

Nupur: Nahin! Main inn dono ko aise chod kar nahin jaa sakti.

Taani: Nupur! Please samjha karo. Tum bohot kamzor dikh rahi ho. Aur waise bhi, bhai aur Anurag ko yeh bilkul accha nahin lagega ke unke vajaah se tum kamzor padh jaao.

Nupur: Par Taani, tum bhi kamzor lag rahi ho.

Taani: Itni argument kyun kar rahi ho? Jaisa keh rahi hoon waisa karo. Tum ek bar ghar jaakar aao phir main chali jaayungi. Abhi mujhe yehi rahene do.

Nupur: Accha theek hai! Main jaakar aati hoon. Tum please inn dono ka khayaal rakhna.

Taani: Tum tension mat lo. Main yaha hoon naa. Don't worry.

Nupur was convinced. She gave an one-side-hug to Taani and left.

After Nupur left, Taani sighed and thought in mind, "Accha hua ki Nupur chali gayi. At least, aab jaane se pehele main bhai aur Anurag se kuch baat kar paayungi."

Taani sat in the middle of Mayank's and Anurag's beds. Her eyes were moist. She looked at both of them. They were the two people whom she loved the most. She turned to Mayank and said, "Bhai, mujhe maaf kardena. Main jaanti hoon ke aaj raat ke baad tu mera chehra bhi dekhna nahin chahega. Par main jo bhi karne jaa rahi hoon, sirf tere aur Anurag ke liye kar rahi hoon. Ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena. Main waada karta hoon ke aaj ke baad main apni chehra nahin dikhaayungi. I'm sorry for one last time."

Tears rolled down from her eyes. She affectionately ran her hand through Mayank's silky hairs. She touched his forehead sweetly and kissed it.

"Chal aab nautanki bandh kar aur ghar chal."

Mayank's words sounded echo to her ears. She smiled thinking of the way Mayank used to say that to her. Her smile suddenly vanished when she remembered of her present scenerio. She wiped her tears off and turned to Anurag.

Smiling softly at Anurag, she sat near Anurag. She touched his forehead and brought her face very close to his. His eyes were open but weren't blinking. But she saw that he could see her and feel her. She said very softly, "Main jaanti hoon ke tu sab dekh sakta hai aur sun bhi sakta hai. Iss liye aaj main tujhse bohot saari baatein karne waali hoon. Kyuki tu toh mujhpar chillaa nahin sakta aur yaha se ut bhi nahin sakta." Saying that, she painfully laughed. Tears rolled down her eyes and a drop of tear fell on Anurag's cheek. Anurag's fingers slowly moved as he felt Taani's tear on his cheek. But Taani didn't notice that. She kept on saying, "Anurag.. Main tujhse kehena chahti hoon ke tere nafrat ke baad bhi main tujhse pyaar karna nahin chod paayi. Yes Anurag! I love you. I love you so much! Aaj mujhe ehsaas hua ke mere life mein teri importance kya hai. Kuch bhi kar sakti hoon tere liye. Aur aaj tere khaatir hi main tujhse durr jaa rahi hoon. Bohot durr! Itni durr ke mera saaya bhi teri zindagi mein nahin padhe."

Saying that, she kissed on his forehead. "Tujhe aakhri bar chu liya, yehi mere liye kaafi hai. Aur kuch nahin chahiye mujhe.", she said lovingly and stood up. Just then, her phone buzzed. She saw "Ritesh Sir" flashing on her phone screen. She stared at it angrily and picked it up.

Taani: Haan bol.
Ritesh: Raat ho gayi hai. Yaad hai naa kitne baje aana hai?
Taani: Mujhe yaad hai. Bar bar kehene ki zarurat nahin hai. Aa rahi hoon.
Ritesh: I hope ke tum jaanti ho ke tumhe kya karna hai.
Taani: Haan haan jaanti hoon mujhe kya karna hai. Bataaya naa ke main aa rahi hoon. Apna ghar ke address bol.
Ritesh: Likho!

Taani took a pen and paper and said, "Haan bol!"

Ritesh: 109, Andheri West.
Taani: 109, Andheri West. Haan theek hai, likh liya. 10mins mein pohoch rahi hoon.
Ritesh: Good!

Taani cut off the phone. She looked at Anurag and Mayank for one last time and left from there with the piece of paper. Anurag's fingers started moving. He took heavy breaths and suddenly he spoke out, "Taani, ruk jaa!" Because of less strength, he could do nothing but closed his eyes.

Nupur came back to the hospital. "Taani, Taani!", she searched for Taani everywhere but didn't get her. Just then she heard Anurag whispering something. She shockingly turned to Anurag who was trying to say something. She went close to him and said, "Dada! Dada!" Anurag said in a whispering tone, "Taani ko bachaana hoga. 109, Andheri West!" Saying that, he became unconscious again.

Nupur worriedly thought, "Dada kya karna chahte the? Taani ko bachaana hoga, iska kya matlab hua? Aur woh address! Mujhe waaha jaana hoga."

Saying that, she left from there.

Taani pressed the doorbell of Ritesh's house. She was numb, emotionless just like a living dead. Her world was over. For a last time, she closed her eyes and remembered the days which she spend with her dear ones. She shed tears and her eyes were red as if she kept crying. Ritesh opened the door and welcomed her with his evil smile. Taani entered inside in a way as if she was completely dead from inside. Ritesh closed the door.

Nupur was sitting in a taxi. She was continuously telling the driver to drive fast. Her expressions reflected that she was worried, tensed and scared of loosing Taani. She reached her destination. She worriedly came out of the taxi.

Taani sat on the bed emotionless. Ritesh was coming close to her, just then the doorbell rang. He annoyingly told himself, "Abhi kaun aaya hai?!" He went near the door and opened it. Nupur was standing in front. "Tum kaun ho?", he asked Nupur irritately. Nupur said nothing. She pushed Ritesh aside and went inside. She was shocked to see Taani there.

"Taani, tum yaha?", said Nupur. Hearing Nupur's voice, Taani looked up with her moist eyes. She was stunned to see Nupur there. She ran to Nupur and hugged her.

Taani: Nupur, tu yaha kyun aayi? Tujhe yaha nahin aana chahiye tha.

Nupur: Tum yaha kya kar rahi hai Taani?

Taani lowered her eyes and said, "Mujhe kuch kaam hai. Tu jaa yaha se."

Ritesh came near Nupur and Taani and said to Nupur, "Excuse me! Can you please leave from here?"

Nupur stared at Ritesh furiously and said, "Don't you dare say anything! DON'T. YOU. DARE!"

Ritesh became furious at Nupur's attitude.

"Chali jaa Nupur!", said Taani emotionally.

Ritesh grabbed Nupur's hand and pulled her toward the doorway. Taani stood her crying. Nupur kept calling Taani's name. Ritesh threw Nupur out of his house and was about to close the door. Just then someone from outside pressed the door with his left hand to prevent Ritesh from closing it. Ritesh annoyingly opened the door and there was Anurag! It was easily understood that he was weak. Bandages were around his forehead and his right arm. He pushed Ritesh aside and went inside. Taani was shocked to see Anurag. She smiled seeing Anurag fit and fine. Anurag came near Taani and told her in his manly voice, "Chal mere saath!" Saying that, he grabbed Taani's wrist and pulled her toward the exit. Taani kept staring at Anurag with teary eyes.

Ritesh shouted, "HEY WAIT!" Anurag turned back and stared at Ritesh angrily. He told Ritesh, "Kuch karne ka sochna bhi mat. SOCHNA. BHI. MAT.!" Ritesh shouted again, "Tu hota kaun hai usse aise le jaane waala?" Anurag left Taani's hand and walked to Ritesh angrily and said, "Main uska hone waala pati hoon. Theek hai naa? Aab tu chup reh." Taani was shocked as Anurag said that. Anurag came back to Taani and left out of the house with her.

Nupur sat inside a taxi and looked at Anurag and Taani.

Anurag: Nupur, tu jaa aur Mayank ka dhyaan rakh. Main aur Taani pohoch jaayenge.

Nupur: Par dada! Aap aise haalat mein..!

Anurag: Main theek hoon. Tu jaa!

There was a strange anger in Anurag's voice. Nupur just nodded in a yes and left for the hospital.

Anurag and Taani were walking on the streets. There was a silence all the way. Anurag's expression could easily reflect that he was damn angry. Taani noticed that.

Taani: Anurag..

Anurag turned to Taani like a storm and pulled her close to him. He shouted angrily, "TU AISA KAISE KAR SAKTI HAI TAANI?" As he shouted, he began to cough. Taani concernedly said, "Dekh teri tabiyat theek nahin hai. Chal hospital chalte hai." Anurag stared more angrily at Taani. It was an angry yet heavenly stare. Taani was lost in that heavenly stare. Both shared an eye-lock when after a lot of struggling, Anurag spoke out emphasizing on each word, "TUNE. AISA. KYUN. KIYA? HOW. DARE. YOU. DID. THIS!" Taani finally broke down in Anurag's arms and said, "Kyuki main tujhe aur bhai ko aise nahin dekh sakti thi."

Anurag's anger vanished instantly when he saw Taani broken in his arms. He said softly, "Par tujhe yeh nahin karna chahiye tha. Agar main waha par theek time pe nahin pohochta toh aaj anarth ho jaata, Taani. Aur jaanti hai, uske baad mera kya hota? Main toh jeete jee marr jaata." Taani moved back & looked at Anurag with a shocking expression.

Anurag cupped Taani's face in his hands and said cutely looking at Taani's eyes with all love and affection, "By the way, tune yeh notice kiya ki main tujhe "tu" keheke bula raha hoon?" Taani nodded positively with moist eyes. Anurag kept on saying to Taani, "Jo mere dil ke sabse karib hote hai, main usse hi "tu" keheke bulaata hoon."

Taani looked at Anurag with stunned expressions. Anurag said further and his eyes were moist, "Tujh par sirf mera haq hai. Tujhe chune ka haq sirf mera hai." Saying that, he kissed on Taani's forehead. "Aur tujhe pyaar karne ka haq bhi sirf mera hai.", said Anurag with tears in his eyes. Taani was shocked now. Anurag brought his face close to Taani's and said while tears streamed from his eyes, "Jab tune mujhse kaha ke tu mujhse pyaar karti hai, tab main tadap raha tha yeh bolne ke liye ke main bhi tujhse bohot pyaar karta hoon. Tujhse dosti nibhaate nibhaate kab tujhse pyaar karne laga, ehsaas hi nahin hua. Aur jab ehsaas hua tab express nahin kiya kyunki main chahta tha ke pehele main apne peyero par khara ho jaayu usske baad tujhe apni dil ki baat bol dunga. Par achanak se yeh sab ho gaya ke mujhe kuch samajh mein nahin aaya. Jab maine tujhe bar mein dekha, tab mujhe gussa aaya. Par iss baat par nahin ke tu bar mein dance karti hai, balki iss baat par ki tune apni life ki itni badi baat mujhse chupaayi. Agar tu yeh baat mujhse keheti toh phir bhi mera pyaar tere liye kam nahin hota, Taani! Anyways, aab main sirf yehi chahta hoon ke puraane saare baatein bhulkar hum ek nayi zindagi shuru kare. Sirf tu, main aur humara pyaar." Taani was super shocked. Her eyes were teary. Anurag quickly hugged Taani tightly with a smile. After a while of shock, Taani hugged him back closing her moist eyes. Both were lost into each other with all love, care and affection.

Precap:
Nupur taking care of Mayank and their cute moments..😳
Anurag Taani romance..❤️

Hope you all liked the TaAnulicious update! So from the next update, the story will focus on MN love track! Do drop in your valuable response soon!😃 Love ya all!🤗

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago