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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: maansee

hey ...

sounding cool... ...
can i get the pm...
would like to go thru with the story ...





send u buddy request ,

u will get pm 4 next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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note


plz see the introduction column.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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uh Oo...i guess there's some sort of mystery...i mean y was geet afraid crying n all that...continue soon n thnx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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uh Oo...i guess there's some sort of mystery...i mean y was geet afraid crying n all that...continue soon n thnx.


yeh , but let c what mystry in stor for the day ,,,,😉 😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Thanks gays 4 ur likes & comments ... they r very encouraging



PART 3



Morning was still yet to begin, geet suddenly woke up when she felt the loss of warmth around her. she hurridely scanned the whole room for the traces of maan , when she coud'nt find him their she walked up to the washroom.
After knocking she called

GEET - maan r u there ?

after getting no response , she pushed door to open to see it empty .Feer start engulfing her just at the thought of maan going away , though she need time to settle in this marrige but can't aford to loose him .



With all the negative thoughts gripping her soul, she dragged herself barefooted to outside. Though her instincts were telling something is terribly wrong but she was consolling herself saying this couden't be heppening ,. he promised her he will not leave her ...


All her hopes were shattered when she approached the main hall. Their was he standing with a angry face making her breath stuck just with thought what to come next...
she extended her hand to touch him, but that was caught midway leaving her all hopes shattered...

MAAN- don't u dare touch me

GEET- maan hw can u say that remember its me , ur geet , ur barbie

MAAN - exectly , how can i forget u , its u masked in a faced of innosence

tears threatening to faal from her eyes from her eyes

GEET- this can't b happening to me ? why me ?

MAAN- (while going out) coz u hv destroyed everything between us , u r a bad omen

GEET- maan plz listen to me ,maan plz , maan
she cried bitterly



Thats when she woke up by a loud voice of thouder, she frenttically search maan around her, after founding herself safe in his hold she watched his face 4 the peace of soul, she snuggeld up more closer to him in her sleep, with the fresh trail of tears that begin to fall from her eyes...



MAANopen his eres to watch his 1 day old bried sleeping next to him, with some dried marks of tears . He wonder just what have caused her for this reaction .than he suddenly remember his first enbcountet with her , she was such a cry baby ...


FLASHBACK

meanwhile geet was taken to the khurrana mansion on the sp. insistence of mr. handa. daddi ma called khurranas family doctor for some bandages. when daddi go out with doctor maan & anni both sneaked inside to watch the lil creature, . geet froned in the pain nd tryed opening her eyes when she felt 4 eyes staring at her . . maenwhile anni smiled when she notice her frowned and she cld out

ANNI - how r u barbie

GEET- frowned nd looked down




anni started her trail of Q which was making her little brain all confused , suddenly she got startled by the loud noises from outside , though she was hungry too , but was more fear full from what happening since morning all this leads to the big fat tears in her eyes , she started sobbing silently , which shook both the kids ...


while running outside both maan nd anni search 4 dadimaa



Daddima come inside & startled 2 see the site before her , geet was sleeping peacefully with her left thumb in her mouth, though fresh trail of tears was still visible but daddi heaved a sigh after watching her all fine ,,,,,,,,,,,

MAAN- (curiously) why was our barbie weeping

DADDI- (smiling) she must b hungry

maan wonder how can somebody weep when they r hungry

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MAAN come out of his thoughts when he felt her waist squeezing , he lood down to see geet was getting disturbed frm sunlight, he slowely freed himself from her caged heands nd went npull the curtain, later on after checking she was all fine , he went up to hv a shower ...





plz guyes let me knw hw was it , i hv tried to make it a bit longer ,

plz press the like button if u liked it a bit





simmy


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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
great part dear continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Great part..
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

great part dear continue soon




thanks
probably will try to update tommarow
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
wow...beautiful update dear!!!
wonder wht happened in the past!
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome
loved it
thanks for pm continue

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