new FF-DAWN(MG) part12- page 79 / 29 jun - Page 4

Originally posted by: mysticangel

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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

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Originally posted by: pickachu

Loveee the part!

Maan is sweet!

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Originally posted by: apeksha_gupta

great start! already too many possibilities are cooking up in my head 😆

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PART 2 :-



Upon entering the room maan find geet standing in front of window staring outside, he observed her silently for few time, after a while he cleared his throat to get her attentoin. After getting no reply ne tapped her shoulder .

after what seemed liked an etternity maan come face to face with geet . He tried reading her face but that was expressionless as usual , maan looked in her eyes to see what she thinking at that very moment but their too was a very confused expression.

Maan looked at her face , his gaze lasted quarter second more than necessary. though it was a optimal time for looking at her flushed face before it get counted like a stare. Maan finally giving her a warm smile spoke-------

MAAN- U must b tired go get change.



GEET - nodded while looking down

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After seem like half an hr geet come out of washroom nd saw maan engrossed in his files.
she go nd sit at the rocking chair that is placed at the corner of the room . she closed her eyes while resting her head on the chair nd again the same memories started haunting her again.


How the 20 years of laughing, dancing, exceitment . dreaming all wiped away in just mere two months of time . geet looked toward the unending horrizon of sky and tear trickled down her eyes... the pain is geeting unbearable for her,,,,,,,,,,,



& thats when she felt warm fingerswiping away the trail of tears from her cheeks & without second thought she hugged maan ppouring all the pain of inside. maan sloly rub her back to calm her down. when her cries subsided she looked up on her face & asked


GEET- u'll leave never me na like everybody else.

MAAN- never . but why r u cring.

GEET- i m the cause of this mess .

MAAN- no u r not.

GEET- but .

MAAN- dare u say a single word against my barbie .


a faint smile form on geets face hearing him defending his barbie////////////////////

GEET- but u don't know anything .

MAAN- i don't want to, coz i believe ur eyes nd they speaks volume, u can't hurt ur father in any way , nd i trust u ...



and thats when the pool of tear come in her eyes , without listening a word maan scooped her up in his arms & take her to the bed & craddled her to the sleep , after don't know how many days geet slipped into a peaceful sleep...

Most of the time crap happen in our life nd sometime miracles too. maan thougths went to the vulnurable geet that he had seen 4 days ago, had it not been 2 vickey and mukti maan woud'nt hv been able to save her...




PRECAPE-- NIGHTMARE




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Originally posted by: shah10

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