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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: preethia
god even for this situation MSk came up with an idea...
bechara adi ko itna pareshan kar raha hain...
one day he is going to feel to have been his friend...
uske pyar ke liya patha nahin adi ko aur kya kya karna padega...
loved the dialogues adi makes on maan...
cant wait to c how they r gonna get closer...
pl cont soon

ahhaa I know Adi should've kept his mouth shut lol

now he has to suffer 😆

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: DrashtiDhamiNo1
LOL at your update
it was hilarious

i love how maan repeatedly told adi to put more anger

and attitude in everything related to the way he acted

poor adi i can picture him doing that anger glare badly

maans employees must think that he got some kinda creepy druggie guy

off the street in his place while he's busy "observing their natural habitat"

that line made me rofl 🤣

the end bit was damn funny too... i dont blame dadi

i too along with her would have a mini heart attack if i saw THE MSK posing for pics

infront of adi

looking forward to the next part

i wonder how geet will react as to seeing adi

cant wait

cont soon please

thanks for the pm!! :D

hahah thanx for ur lovely commment lol

I know..when I was writing the update..I did looked like he was on crack with his angry glare face lol..hehhee

Poor Adi...dost ke liye kya kya kar raha hai lol

I couldn't think of a better word than natural habitat

as I had mentioned before I was watching discovery channel and I pictured Maan as the lion

obvsorving his pray

bechara kya se kya bana diya...insaan se janwar

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: sarita21992
I missed maaneets turtle speed meeting here. Bt aadi, u won my heart today. N was d training intended to become a boss or a jerk villain..lol msk needed to get a life n m sure geet will be doing a wonderful job in this regard:-D

haha I know...and I knew someone would mention that lol

but I will try to put maaneet moments in my next update lol

Msk has no life without Geet 😳

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: Mina420
OMG, I almost fell over laughing while readign this update. This story is so unique and funny. Poor Adi, dost ke liye kya kya karraha hain.

I wonder what will happen once Geet actually comes to KC and Adi pretends to be the MD. I am sure it is goign to be fun, especially when Adi gets the chance to scold Maan and he can't do anything. But then, he will have Geet to console him...

Amazing update, plz keep it up and update the next part soon...

OHHH, now that Adi will work in KC, will he meet Pinky? Please tell me...

haha hopefully you didnt' hurt yourself when you were about to fell over...No Maan would've come out of no where and saved you like in Geet 😆😆

hahah well can't really say anything but I do like ur predictions about future track😆

lets see what happens

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: zahra15

"Agar yeh hassi thi, toh main 23 saal se kya kar raha tha?"

this cracked me up...in fact the whole part did...lol...maan teaching someone how to be him...it was just awesome...the way he was explaining things to adi...i loved it...n the last bit with dadima...lol...

"Hey bhagwan, yeh kya ho raha hai? Kya Maan modeling karne ki soch raha hai? Then what will happen to KC?"

dadima...u should be happy...ur pota is making full arrangemnts to bring u a sweet bahu...infact u should worry more about KC in the SERIAL...as it is on the verge on closing...hih...i loved this part soo muchhh...continue soon n thnx for the pm...

First of all thanx so much for your lovely image

"ribbit" "ribbit" I LOVE froggys lol

Thanks so mcuh glad you liked it lol

Omg don't even remind me of the serial...I am still deciding if I should watch this week's episodes or not...i can't stand it when they are sad😭

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111priyan

@111priyan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#336

Just came across ur ss nd must say u have written it so beautifully

it is such a nyc story

nd omg ur maan is so very swettt. never thought dat 1 can project maan in such a way. he is just so chweet

its a wonderful story

it has a lot of freshness in it coz of all d ff i hv read maan was either a bad guy, tough 1 mean or nythng but not dis much cute. i simply luv ur maan, he is completely adorable i dnt have d words 2 express dis wonderful character looks lyk m goin gaga over him😳. ok nw i shall talk sumthng else

well u r plot is so very different. Both maan nd geet r so in luv nd none of dem is confessing.

actually both r acting dumb 😆but i luv it

nd its so cute dat he evryday kisses her hand but didnt hv d courage 2 ask her out

its lyk 2 most innocent people on earth fall in luv nd evrythng turns out 2 b luvy dovy. dey r so content 2 even have a glimpse of each other

nd maan is literally acting lyk a luv sick puppy

i luvd d scene when maan pinches adi 2 get off his seat so dat geet can seat nxt 2 him

nd even adi is so sweet

so nyc of him 2 help maan in each nd everythng. d way he helped maan 2 practice everythng was so cute but he is so stuck btw d lovers. even snail wud progressed faster than maan😆

nywayz u r a very gud writer

u have built an excellent plot which has so much of freshness, luv, innocence nd humour

kuddos 2 u 4 thinking so differently👏

absolutely luv dis ss

such a simple nd sweet story

plz update soon

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: 111priyan
Just came across ur ss nd must say u have written it so beautifully

it is such a nyc story
nd omg ur maan is so very swettt. never thought dat 1 can project maan in such a way. he is just so chweet
its a wonderful story
it has a lot of freshness in it coz of all d ff i hv read maan was either a bad guy, tough 1 mean or nythng but not dis much cute. i simply luv ur maan, he is completely adorable i dnt have d words 2 express dis wonderful character looks lyk m goin gaga over him😳. ok nw i shall talk sumthng else

well u r plot is so very different. Both maan nd geet r so in luv nd none of dem is confessing.
actually both r acting dumb 😆but i luv it
nd its so cute dat he evryday kisses her hand but didnt hv d courage 2 ask her out
its lyk 2 most innocent people on earth fall in luv nd evrythng turns out 2 b luvy dovy. dey r so content 2 even have a glimpse of each other
nd maan is literally acting lyk a luv sick puppy
i luvd d scene when maan pinches adi 2 get off his seat so dat geet can seat nxt 2 him

nd even adi is so sweet
so nyc of him 2 help maan in each nd everythng. d way he helped maan 2 practice everythng was so cute but he is so stuck btw d lovers. even snail wud progressed faster than maan😆

nywayz u r a very gud writer
u have built an excellent plot which has so much of freshness, luv, innocence nd humour
kuddos 2 u 4 thinking so differently👏

absolutely luv dis ss
such a simple nd sweet story

plz update soon

wow this has to be longest comment I recieved in this ss so far lmao

THANKS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗

At the end of the day that is my goal to make you guys laugh

I LOVE experimenting with my Maan...you know it gets boring seeing the same avtar of Maan and frankly speaking I can't do serious Maan like in the show. It gets hard for me to write like in Fear&Hope...I love commedy...and I am not a serious person (only when I need to be 😆) so I love writing something that is very funny..so that you guys can laugh along with myself...I find myself falling for him everyday with his sweetness...don't ask and I know it sounds weird but I am CRAZY FOR HIM!!!!!!!!!!!! like over obsessed like all of us 😆😆😆 like beyond repair 😆😆😆 anyway that let me stop talking about him before I start day dreaming about him😆😆

If you read my other fan fics I don't have any villians...I hate it and I get stuck..and I know how much of stressful life we all have...so I stick with what I know best...humor...😆😆😆 it cheers me up and I get to spread smiles around on IF...(well anyone who reads my ss/ff's 😆😆😆)

I hope you enjoy the rest of this ss...and I really hope I will be able to end this (soon) but seeing your guys comments idk if I have the guts to even end it 😆😆😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#338

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗THANK YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DIDN'T THINK i WILL GET THESE MANY GOOD RESPONSES😆😆😆😆😆😆

Enjoy this part...(read note at the end)

Part VIII

The next day, Maan waited for Geet at the bus stop. He was very nervous about his plan and had no faith on Adi if he could actually execute it perfectly. "he will mess it up. I know it. I hope he practiced all night, if there is one wrong move than I will kill him." He sees Geet coming toward him. He stands up and waits for her to come closer.

Maan: Hey..I got good news for you

Geet: yeah ("please let be good news")

Maan: I got you an interview at KC

Geet (gets happy and hugs him): thank you so much. I hope that khudus didn't say anything

Maan: khudus?

Geet: yeah your boss. I didn't want you to loose your job.

Maan: ohh yeah umm of course he didn't say anything.

Geet: Thank god..so what time is the interview tomorrow?

Maan: Actually, the interview is today at 3

Geet (screams): What! Oh, my god...I am nervous now..I am not prepared

Maan: Nothing will happen. You will do fine. trust me...(the bus came) you just go to your work and leave early. Call me when you get to KC.

Geet (nodes) Ok..thanks

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Maan: Adi don't mess this up.

Adi: Ok but your employees what will they say?

Maan: Don't worry about them. I have told them everything. (he receives a call from Geet...) Ok she is here and remember act like me...I hope you practiced all night long

"Salle maine itni practice ki ha ki aab toh mujhe apna naam bhi jaad nahi hai..bus ek hi naam yaad hai Maan Singh Khurana...I lost my own identity..."

Adi: ok yeah I practiced...send her in

Maan (leaves..."I know this plan would fail...he is not putting enough attitude...I hope Geet buys it..." he goes outside and meets Geet): Hey...he is waiting for you..lets go (Geet holds Maan's hand when he was about to walk..Maan turns around to look at her) what happened

Geet: How do I look? I mean professional enough? I heard a lot of things from this khudus and I want to make sure I don't get him mad and be fired before I even start the job

Maan: nothing will happen...and besides am going to be in the interview with you

Geet: why?

Maan ("so I can make sure he doesn't mess up") umm because I am the head of Accounting Department..that's why...

Geet: ohh ok..if you are there then I don't mind

Maan (whispers) Just don't forget your end of the bargain now (Geet looks at him confused) the date (Geet blushes and goes inside with Maan following in the back...everyone gives Maan a weird look seeing him talking to another person which he usually never does...Maan gives all of them a deadly glare and immediately everyone starts working and as soon as Geet turns around Maan looks at her sweetly and smiles...) umm lets go in..wait actually let me go in first to see if he isn't doing something (Maan knocks on the door and waits for Adi to say "come in", Maan knocks again this time little bit harder and said "sir"...Geet looks at him confused..) umm I think he is having coffee..

Geet ("that khudus..I don't know how he became MD of KC..he doesn't even value the importance of time...who drinks coffee right now knowing you have an interview set up...what does he think of himself...") I guess we should wait then

Maan (" I am going to kill Adi...if he can't even perform right now and say simple come in what is going to happen later...ohh I knew I should've hired someone else for this..") No, I will go in and let him know that you are here...("that salla") (Maan goes inside and sees Adi lying down...he goes toward Adi and makes him fall on the floor..Adi gets up shocked)

Adi: What happened? (looking around)

Maan: You were suppose to do your job that's what happened. Geet is outside waiting and you are here sleeping

Adi: I wasn't sleeping..I was remembering my lines while closing my eyes..its a method I have that always works

Maan: whatever...I hope you know your lines now..go and sit on that chair..I will knock on the door again and make sure you say "come in" with an attitude and please for god's sake I hope you know how to sit...

Adi: I got it...go ("seriously, after this I need to teach him some manners")

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Meanwhile, outside Pinky came toward Geet and hugged her...

Geet: Pinky how are you

Pinky: I can't believe you are going to be working here...

Geet: I dont' know yet...I still have to go for an interview with the MD

Pinky: haye I hope you are able to concentrate on your questions

Geet (confused): What do you mean?

Pinky: He is such a DD...when you look into his eyes..you will drown yourself in never ending chocolate sea that is so yummy and delicious. A sea where you wish never to come out of and just keep swimming and swimming. Once you look at him you may never take your eyes off (Geet pulls Pinky out of her day dream)

Geet: Pinky what does DD stand for?

Pinky: Dhak Dhak...he makes every girl's heart beat faster just by his presence (Maan comes out of cabin and walks toward Geet...) Anyway, you will know what I am talking about...good luck on your interview...all this chocolate stuff is making me hungry..bye (Maan comes and stands next to Geet)

Maan: Geet let's go..he is ready (Geet follows him again..Maan knocks on the door...after few seconds..they hear a squeaky voice that said "come in" both look at each other..Geet tried hard not to laugh...Maan tried to control his anger and not kill him in front of her...both enter the office...Geet looked at Adi with confusion...Adi looks at Maan seeing the look on her face and Maan looked toward Geet)

"He is the MD? I feel like I have seen him somewhere...but where?" (she looks at him) He does not look like he is DD...I think Pinky needs to get her eyes checked..he looks more like a bandar...(she imagines him dancing like monkey on the streets while Geet is singing "Bade kaam ka bandar from Aankahe movie...)

Maan: umm Geet he is the MD.

Geet (comes out of her thoughts and goes to Adi and shakes his hand): Nice to meet you sir

Adi (shakes her hand): hmm have a seat...(Geet sits down and just when Maan was about to sit..) You (to Maan) you may stand. (Maan looks at him with anger...Adi clears his throat..."He wanted me to act like him..I am...Payback...") So Ms.Geet..I have looked at your resume...its quiet impressive...

Geet: Thank you sir...I actually worked

Adi (raises his hand): speak only when I tell you to speak...(Maan closes his fist in anger...Geet looks at him shocked and then puts up a pleading face to Maan) are you able to handle stressful situations? KC is very reputable place and I the MD (stresses MD word on purpose for Maan) expect a lot out of my employees. There are no room for errors.

Geet: yes sir...I have done full research on KC and I know what is at stake here. I can assure you that I will do my job consistently and will give you no room for complaints. (Geet looks at his eyes..."kaunsa chocolate samunder ki baat kar rahi thi Pinky? Iski aankhon mein toh kuch bhi nahi hai...Maan's eyes are way better than this khudus...Maan's eyes are so dreamy..")

Adi (looks down and sits like Maan...he was running his finger over his chin..leaning all the way back...Geet looked at him and wanted to laugh..Maan signals Adi to hurry up) Ms. Geet by judging from your resume, I think you will be a great candidate for my company. Maan give her the appointment letter...

Maan: Ji sir...(he said through his gritted teeth...Geet gets up and shakes Adi's hand...both come outside...the minute they are outside Geet started to laugh) what's so funny?

Geet: I can't believe that he is DD...I have to talk to Pinky..

Maan: DD?

Geet: yeah she said that everyone call the MD DD..which means Dhak Dhak...but he looks more like chusa hua aam (she laughs..Maan smiles hearing his nickname...) magar yeh itna khudus nahi lagta jinta Pinky ne mujhe bataya tha

Maan: hmm ("yeh Pinky ki toh main...what was the need for her to say all those things about me...and that Adi..I will get him...")

Geet: anyway let's go..I have to get my appointment letter...and go home (Maan holds her hand...)

Maan: what happened to our date?

Geet: woh umm i can't tonight...

Maan (with each word he pulls her closer): toh phir kab?

Geet: umm pata nahi...Arjun suspected something...so he is being over protective (by now she was almost against his chest)

Maan (whispers): Tell him..you are the oldest and can do whatever you want...(he wraps his arm around her waist with the hand he was holding her hand with) and if he still has problems..I will deal with him (he pulls her closer to him all the way...Geet closes her eyes feeling their closeness) do you understand?

Geet: hmmm (the only word that was able to come out of her mouth...)

Maan: Good (he lightly kisses her on her ear and leaves her..since Pinky was coming...)

Precap: ?? (thats cuz idk what am gonna write next..sorry)

Note: sorry guys but won't be able to update next till late next week🤢

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libra25

@libra25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#339

awesome part..
will wait for the update

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#340

Awesome update::
Lol geet thought he was the MD and she thought adi lukd lyk a bandar😆😆
Haha loved adi'z acting,,ordering maan around an talking in a squeaky voice🤣
Oof luvd how maan huskily talked into her ear,,so romantic😍😍
can't wait for ther date...😊
cont soon Xx...

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