new FF-DAWN(MG) part12- page 79 / 29 jun - Page 2

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awesome concept and prologue.
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PART 1:-



The whole mension was decorated itself like a new bride. maan was all the while waiting 4 wedding 2 start. though he had taken promise from her but he was still scared.
Ever since he was back from his trip her silence is killing him to the core , the geet he had left was not like that, she just love 2 annoye him . even he was shaken from whole set of events that it was hard 4 him to excpt this...


His thoughts were broken by the soft sound approaching towards him, he looked up to see geet approaching towards him.though she was looking beautiful as usual but he felt piercing pain in his heart to see her so expressionless, her eyes dictating her inner strom.

this is the same pain which he felt when he first saw her.

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HE WAS AS USUAL BUSY IN SCOLDING DEV 4 DISTURBING ANNY WHEN HE HEARD THE SHOUTING & YELLING COMMING FROM THERE NEAR BY HAVELI "HANDA HAVELI". GOING OUT HE HEARD A HEATED ARRGUMENT BETWEEN MRS.& MR. HANDA WHICH HE COUDEN'T UNDERSTAND MUCH DUE TO HIS BEARLY 8 YEARS OF AGE , BUT HE NOTICED A SMALL LITTLE GIRL STANDING IN PINK DRESS & NOTICED TEAR IN HER EYES. HE WAS STILL LOKING TOWARD HER WHEN HE FELT ANNY SAYING SHE IS A BARBIE.HE WAS SO ENGROSSED IN HIS THOUGHTS WHEN LITTLE BARBIE WAS PUSHED FROM THE STAIRS BY HIS AUNTY ...BUT HE WAS LATE SHE HIT THE GROUND ...AND THAN HE HEAR ANNY SAYING BARBIE IS HURT...


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He came out of his thought when he heard priest chanting holy words 4 there wedding, with the every woe that he was taking he felt at a ease , he promised himself to keep her safe.

He know this decision will be hard 4 her but he will go to any extent to protect her . he will find out what happened in these ttwo months that broke her apart ...but he will heel her by love and care because SHE WILL ALWAYS B HIS BARBIE NO MATTER WHAT....


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beautiful start!!!
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wanna read wht actually has happened in their lives!!!

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part.
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well story will unfold soon