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zaara2212

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Posted: 15 years ago

#631

loved it 😊
why is Geet jealous 😲

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JayaR

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Posted: 15 years ago

#632

arre mujhe nahi pata tha...Dusht Dhanav pyaare wale bhi hote hai...lolz...

aawww their fight was so cute...and Daadi...I Love Her so much...

good going Mahima...but updates toh kum hote jaa rahe hai...
previously u used to update twice and now only once, why so???

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RAFXNFCSAEC6UHCW

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Posted: 15 years ago

#633

awesome update. ohhh geet pretended to distract maan.😆

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mahimak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: JayaR
arre mujhe nahi pata tha...Dusht Dhanav pyaare wale bhi hote hai...lolz...

aawww their fight was so cute...and Daadi...I Love Her so much...

good going Mahima...but updates toh kum hote jaa rahe hai...
previously u used to update twice and now only once, why so???

Actually my school is starting naa.. so can't update more.. but I'll try my best to do so..

Lets c.. if I get time.. then I'll defo do..😃

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ritusoni2233

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Posted: 15 years ago

#635

niceee

cant wait 4 next part

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#636

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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mahimak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#637

Part 28

They reached home.. when dadimaa saw Maan at home this early.. she got scared.. Kahin wo bachi phir se to nahi.. she wondered..
but then she saw Geet coming behind Maan.. she looked fine..
Dadimaa: Thank god.. Get bete.. aap theek hai.. hum to darr gaye the..
Geet: Namaste dadimaa.. ji mai theek hun.. par aapko kyun laga ki mai..
Dadimaa: Wo bete.. Maan har baar aapko godh me uthakar layenge to hame yahi lagega naa
Maan frowned at her.. Plz dadimaa
Dadimaa: maan bete.. abb to hume mauka mila hai.. kisi se aap ki shikayaten karne kaa.. to abb iss mauke ko jane nahi denge.. waise Maan.. aap Geet ko hamari official wali bahu kab bana rahe hain??
They both were numb by that word.. bahu.. it sent shivers down their spine.. their thoughts were going wild.. he controlled himself & said looking towards geet: Ji.. dadimaa.. wo bhi jaldi ho jayega..
Dadimaa: Theek hai bete.. aap kehte hain to hum maan lete hain.. waise aap dono.. itni jaldi.. kuch hua kyaa..
Geet thought: Aelo.. itni mushkil to inka mood theek kiya tha.. ho gaya kaam..
Before Maan cud say anything.. Geet said: Nahi dadimaa.. wo mujhe bhook lag rahi thi.. thodi se tabiyat bhi kharab lag rahi thi.. isiliye.. hum log yahan aa gaye..
Dadimaa: Theek hai bete.. hum ne bhi abhi lunch nahi kiya.. aapke sath hi karlenge.. aap dono ek kaam kariye.. muh hath dho aayiye.. phir hum log lunch kar lenge.. Geet bete.. aap bhi Maan ke sath jayiye..
Geet: Ji dadimaa..

They both went to his room.. Maan locked the door..
Geet: maan.. ye aap kyaa.. before she cud complete.. his one hand held her from waist & he kept his index finger on her lips..

Maan: Chup bilkul chup
Geet was shivering from his touch..
Maan: Geet..
Geet: Hmm
Maan: Geet..plz aaj bol do.. ki tum bhi mere liye wahi feel karti ho ya nahi.. jo mai tumhare liye feel karta hun.. bolo naa Geet
Geet: maan.. wo.. wo.. mai
Maan: Geet.. bas haan ya na keh do.. kam se kam mujhe pata to chale naa
Geet: Haan..
That word echoed in his ears.. it was the word he wanted to hear.. now he knows.. she is his.. just his
Maan: Geet.. I luv u..
He just hugged her.. like always.. protectively.. not letting her go anywhere..
They broke out from the hug after sometime.. He looked naughtily towards her..
Maan: Geet.. to abb jab tumne.. haan keh di hai.. to..
He inched closer to her with his every word.. n she inched backward..
He pinned her against the wall.. she was struggling to get out.. he held her both hands.. & pinned them against the wall..

Geet: maan.. plz let me go
He nodded his head for a no..
Geet: Plz maan..
He put his hand on her mouth.. not letting her complete..
Then he slowly removed his hand.. he inched closer to her.. she knew.. he will do it today.. there is no escape.. she just closed her eyes tightly.. he inched more closer.. his warm breath touching her lips.. he lips softly brushed hers.. but then he heard dadimaa calling..
They broke apart.. he looked naughtily towards her..
Maan: Geet.. abhi chod raha hun.. par.. mai wo kar ke hi rahunga.. jo mujhe karna tha

They both went downstairs.. Geet saw a girl hugged dadimaa.. ye kaun hai.. she wondered
She saw Maan.. n ran towards her.. n hugged him tioghtly.
Geet was fuming with anger.. inko kaise hug kar liya.. she thought.. she wanted to kill her there & then.. she tried to control herself..
They broke out of the hug..
Maan: Annie tum to 2 din baad aane wali thi naa..
Anni: Haan.. vaise to mai do din baad hi aane wali thi.. but I was missing u.. to mai aa gayi..
Bhai.. maine aapko bahut miss kiya..
Geet took a deep breath.. Oh.. to ye maan ki behen hai.. aur mai.. najane kyaa kyaa soch rahi thi..Babaji.. aap bhi naa.. pehle nahi bata sakte the.. she thought..
Anvesha just saw Geet
Anni: Bhai.. ye kaun hai..
Dadimaa: Anni bete.. humne aapko bataya to tha naa.. ye wahin hain.. Geet
Anni put her hand on Maan's shoulder n said: Ohh.. to this is Geet..
She said in his ears: wah bhai.. manna padega aapko.. aapki choice to badi achi hai..
He smiled inwardly..

Anni went near Geet.. & shaked her hand with Geet..
Anni: Hi Geet.. mai Anni: aapke maan ki behen..
Geet: Hi Anni.. mai Geet..
Anni: Wo to mujhe pata hai that u r Geet.. but jaise I told u ki mai aapke maan ki behen vaise u will alos have to tell me.. aap bhai ki kaun ho..
She blushed..
Dadimaa: Anni bete.. aate hi tang karna shuru kar diya.. this is not done.. aapko pata hai.. inhone lunch tak nahi kiya hai.. chaliye.. abb hum sab lunch karte hain.. theek hai..
they all went towards the dining table n settled there..

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Anni becoming Geet's friend..

I hope this one was long for u..

Do like n comm..

waiting for ur sweet n long comments

Part 29

Edited by mahimak - 15 years ago