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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the possessive maan.
Loved the way Geet proudly declare that its only Maan's right on her body.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Excelent update yaar.keep it up.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi guys i am waiting for updat do think we will get one
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Posted: 14 years ago

my god I can imagine maan's anger when she hugged rohan. He was like a lion ready to pounce.

You can feel his anger but he did not say anything to geet. I loved how geet came and apologised to maan for what she said.

Me love the sazaa maan gives to geet, such passion. I love maan's possessiveness how geet tells him that only he has the right to touch her.

Uff adi why did you have to come now. Loool geet calling him haddi is funny. Loool loved how maan tells geet to come everyday so he can give her punishment or shall I say pleasure.

Loool loved geet's answer when she told maan that if rohan is not coming who is she supposed to hug. She has accepted maan as her husband and the love of her life. Looking forward to her telling maan that she loves him.

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update...⭐️
liked d punishment given by maan...😉 luvd d way where geet s not hiding her luv...
precap sounds intresting...
continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG.MAIN TO MARGAYI FIDA HOGAYI TERI UPDATE PAR. Oh it was So ROMANTIC!
Too hot to handle.. Gayal krdiya yaar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
okiez i just read ur entire ff
its pretty much different nd gripping
god i read all d chapters in a go nd its damn interesting
hw can sum1 luv lyk dat widout ny expectn alwayz putting geet b4 everythng its jst so impossible to luv sum1 lyk dat nywayz luvd ur ff
update soon
u r a pretty gud writer
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg god awesome part...the precap is ahem ahem..cant wait...wink wink😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Untold Emotions

Part 16



I WILL NO LONGER BE WRITING ON INDIA FORUMS, PLEASE REFER TO MY BLOG TO READ MY STORIES.

https://marveesfictions.wordpress.com/

Part 17:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44121454

Hello all my awesome readers😃. Hope you enjoyed this update too, I tried to make it as long and steamy as time would permit😳. Once again, thank you all so much for your wonderful wonderful comments, they continue to make my day everyday👏. You are all awesome, so continue to comment and like.

Cheers, Love you all loads,

❤️-Marvee

Edited by marvee-khan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first🥳
will comment after reading
nice part but little bit confused about the precape it seems that someone is trying to take geet away from maan plz dont do anything to geet
Edited by abinash079 - 14 years ago

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