~maitri~ MAANEET FF THREAD 6 - Page 62

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing updates.. luved them.. liked the way maan took care of amy... cant wait to c maan n amy team up against geet... rahul n Nt are sweet...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
~part 53~

Maan left them alone to discuss while he carried amy to the car. Amy smiled all the while clinging on to Maan. He did smile, a smile that was so new to him. It was more of happiness..happiness to see amy smile..fine.. happy with him..


Maan made him sit in the car. He tried to buckle the seat belt, he found difficult. Amy gave a teasing smile. .. uff yeh bhi nahi hota aap se
Maan just didn't mind anything as of now from him. He just wanted to see him happy. Now he realized why he was so pampered compared to rany. It all made sense no body saying anything to his naughitness, they all were just trying to keep him happy. So did he now. Especially learning about his health condition & wat he did to him in last 2days Maan would do anything to see this smile on.


It was taking a while for Geet to come. Maan wondered wat was wrong. He didn't want to leave amy alone, he tried to sit calmly. Geet came back almost after an hr. Her eyes were teary & anyone could make out she had cried. Genie could blindly read that, in fact it hurt him more. She quietly came & sat beside amy, avoiding any conversation. He looked at her couple of times through the rare view mirror. She looked lost & worried. She kept kissing amy every now & then. Maan heart could read the fear in her..scaring the hell out of him. The way she was crying inside he knew there was something seriously wrong.


He didn't want to ask about it infront of amy. When they reached home Geet very protectively carried amy into the house. She fed him & put him to sleep. She was breaking down from inside every passing minute. She went in the washroom & locked herself. She simply stood under the shower & kept crying under the running water. She didn't know wat she was supposed to do. How was she supposed to help her little baby. She couldn't bare to see anything happen to him. He was her life, her everything. She couldn't even think wat rahul was fearing. She didn't come out of the shower for an hr.

Maan paced restlessly outside the her room & finally barged in.. screaming dodo!! dodo!! she was no where in the room.. he could hear her cry in the washroom. He remembered her doing this once in college when she got her Second semester result & she had flunked in subject.
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Their second sem results were out. He had topped as usual & she saw result & vanished from there. He was so lost in his celebration he didn't care to know wat happened to her. Latter he came to know from others that she failed. He was cool .. he knew he could work with her & make her clear the back log it was just one paper. He came back home after his little celebration only to hear ballu barking continuously at the washroom door. He panicked & called out for her.
Nakul almost cried - subha se washroom main roo rahi hain
Maan got really scared & broke open the door just to see her sitting under the shower cuddled up in the corner.. crying.. hiding her face.
He lifted her holding her arms.. yelling yel kya kar rahi ho
her body was hot.. she was definitely sitting like that for more than 6 hrs.. he cursed himself to have left alone.
He carried her to the room .. nakul rushed with the towel. Maan wiped her.. & shouted at her wat r u doing dodo
she shouted back.. tumhe kya hain.. u passed na
she waked him couple of times.. u don't teach me anything.. tumne jaan bhoj ke mujhe nahi padaya
why will I do that
because u like to see me cry
dodo
dehka.. u r still hurting me
he closed he his eyes ..exhaled sharply.. dodo sorry yaar.. its just one subject
u didn't fail, so it is easy for u to say that
.
Tum fail huwin yah main.. ek hi baat hain na
ek kaisen hain
.. she asked curisouly
we r one na
how r we one.. u r u & main main hoon..aur main fail hogayee
.. she started to cry..
nahi dodo .. dehk .. hum saat college jathen hain...
umm..
she nodded making a baby face
saat rahthen hain
umm..
saat padthen hain
umm..
hum best friends hain
umm
she turned her lips down ' & dipped her head
he hugged her ' lovingly.. bear hug...tho hum ek huwen na
umm..
then. said .nahi..
he gave up.. still wiping her hair & opening her plats.. that was all drenched.

U passed & I failed.. & u traitor.. not only did u pass u came first
how does that make me a traitor
traitor...traitor...traitor...u two timed me..
he looked at her in shock.. two- timed.. he knew she had no clue wat that word meant, he let her vent out.
U two-timer... khud tho aachen se padha.. mujhe.. aache se nahi padaya
how on the earth was that two-timing he wondered, but then that was her logic he couldn't do much abt it. Challo dress change karo dodo.. dehko fever ho raha hain
nahi karna mujhe change
..
tum change karo nahi tho main change kardonga
like she cared .. instead she dared him. U can't
he hit his head.. why did he even say that.. she showed her thumb.. & teased him.. tum nahi kar sakten .
Iska bas challen tho muj se hi change karva degi.. he walked across the room to the wardrobe & got a change for her & threw it on her face... abhi change karo.
Nahi..
she sat on the bed making a baby face.. her nose was all red & her eyes was swollen.. she definitely was catching a cold.
Plz..dodo zid mat karo dehko kitna fever badraha hain.

Merko tumse baat nahi karni.. u r a traitor..
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he still remembered she was hospitalized next day with high fever though he had managed to get her change. But sitting under the water for so long & crying was bad.

He rushed in the washroom fearing wat she would have done to herself.. that was just exams & this was her child.. her baby. He took the towel & immediately wrapped her & carried her to the room. She kept crying.. genie.. mera baby. Why my baby.. ?? uski kya galti hain?
He wiped her & wrapped her in a warm blanket. He knew there was no point asking to change she won't.. not with this frame of mind. Her hand went around his waist & her head fell on his chest..soaking his soul with her tears & pain.. genie mera baby ko teehk kardo plz.. genie. His hands held her close protectively promising something he didn't know if he could keep it.
Rahul said we don't have much time. Blood transfusion is just a temporary solution. He slowly stroked her back & kissed her head.

Later in the day Maan had gone out with amy. Geet wondered were the two devils of her life gone.

On the way back
amy - dodo gussa tho nahi karegi
Maan was definitely scared he knew she will hit the roof.. but he tried to pretend to be cool - don't worry dodo ko main sambal longa. ..wondering all the while.. mujhe kaun sambalega uske baad
amy - mujhe nahi lagtha..
Maan gulped harder.. yah ladka mujhe itna kyun dara raha hain
amy - mujhe aisen ghar nahi jana..dodo paka gussa kargi
thats when the car turned into the portico & Geet was pacing restlessly waiting for them. Amy immediately dipped down hiding his face.
Geet - where did u both go?
She stood their plunking her hand on her waist & an angry look on her face.
Maan smiled weakly.
Geet curiously looked inside the car.. genie ..amy kanha hain.
Maan cooly pointed peechen
Geet looked again.. kanha ?
Maan looked down.. amy was hiding .. shaking his head.. nahi..mama gussa karengi
Geet - kya ho raha hain
Maan cleared his throat as amy slowly raised..
Geet screamed out loud... wat did u do.. yah kuya kiya tumne.. kis se puch ke kiya tumne
amy made a baby face & pointed at Maan.

Genie.. khud tho mona sardar ho.. meri bache kho bhi!!.. ummh.. she sighed in anger
dodo lekin
amy was giggling at genie's plight. He was as scared of dodo as he was.
Lekin kya.. ghar ka bada beta hain na yeh.. Maan looked blankly at her.. umm!! she asked...
all he could do was nod.. but logically ..according to his logic he was second.. but now dodo was angry so he has to say yes to every thing.. so he did.
Papaji ko main kya kahoon ghi, tumne tho kisi ke feelings a kadar nahi hain.
Maan - dehko na dodo ..amy kitna cute lag raha hain
she looked at him from corner of her eyes & turned away.
Amy made a puppy face & stood in front of her.
She frowned & turned her face.
Maan - dodo.. plz..
amy pulled her down.. dodo plz..
Geet - tu tho mujhe se baat hi maat kar
amy immediately changed the plate around - dodo main ne mana bhi kiya tha..
Maan looked at him in shock
amy - sachi..muchi
Geet lifted him & kissed him.. mujhe pata hain mera bacha..
Maan - nahi..main ne..
Geet gave a angry look to Maan. He couldn't say much.


Geet fed amy .. while Maan had to face his dodo's anger. Amy was so much enjoying this.
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-BLOG maitri part 53-

Precap
Maan working on getting medical aid for amy.
-PREV PART 52 NEXT PART 54-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
will PM later
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first me first me first ... for the first time i am first... 😆😆😆😆😆
muski i love u... u actually used my demand that amy shud take advantage of maan and get his hair cut... 😆😆😆... but moi is sad that amy is so unwell... 😭😭😭
anyway i am waiting for future updates... 😛😃
Edited by deniac - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

such a lovely kid suffering like this😭

finally Maan got Any's hair cut! and amy kat liya with dodo😆
That was cute!
Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg im so angry wit u
i didnt even kno dat u updated
i loved da upate
do continue
it was sad
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

such a lovely kid suffering like this😭

finally Maan got Any's hair cut! and amy kat liya with dodo😆
That was cute!

u just cracked me with that line

u r too good..
ummah




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

omg im so angry wit u

i didnt even kno dat u updated
i loved da upate
do continue
it was sad

sorry yaar..

I was suposed to Pm today



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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Awww poor geet cryed in the bathroom cuz ov her results
Haha maan was hanging out wiv Amy but both got scared of her anger,,poor maan had to suffer it all alone wile Amy gets the attention
Hope Amy gets cured
Cont soon Xx.,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
ho dear.. kitna cute lag raha hai hamara amy...

loved Maan and Amy...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful update as always.
Geet was broken and shattered.
Cant imagine any mom going through this pain.
How hopeless she would have felt when Rahul told her that transfusion was temporary
and there was not much of a hope.
Nobody can even fathom the pain she has been going through.
God that atleast Maan is by her side now when she is facing the toughest of times.
Locking up in washroom from the past was so sweet.
She failed and blamed Maan for it calling him two timer 😆.
Maan's explanation of they both being one was beautiful.
Wish he would have realized the truth then itself.
Geet cried her heart out to Maan and asked him to make everything right as always.
Hope he can do that.
Finally Amy had a hair cut.
He was looking so cute.
Maan and Amy getting super scared of Geet and amy hiding was superb.
Amy cornered maan and put all the blame on him .😆
BTW when Geet said Bada beta I felt that she was implying Amy
And she was also talking about her being answerable to papaji.
Why would she be answerable regarding Maan??
May be i am over thinking.
😃
And Maan stopped thinking or saying anything since his Dodo was angry.
Precap sounds interesting.
Waiting for the next one.


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