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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#301

part 23
nice part...
as of now Geet is happy and is reliving her moments with Maan...
oh i hate that woman Maya...
she again tried to harm Maan...
hope Dev confronts his cruel evil mother...
feel very sorry for Geet...
cont soon...

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Sakshi

@SakshiGarg

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#302

firstly sorry 4 late reply... my lappi was not working😡

cuming to the updates... maanddy ve i ever told u dat u r a wonderful writer... gosh u write sooo welll... though u always make me cry😭... ur pattern of stories is sooo painful... bt stil i cant resist reading them😛

in this FF of urs...i hate dat maya monster😡... dafa karo iss🤬 ko yahan se... or else i m gonna kill her... even dev is betr than her... atleast he values maan's love 4 them... i wonder how cum maan cudnt see her devil face😡

poor geet... i literally m crying 4 dat poor soul... thro'out this accident part she is the one who has undergone most of the pain... she is trying to be happy still knowing may be next mooment she wont be wid him... she lost their baby stil cant share it wid him😭

4 maan i wud only say... maandy plzzz dont do this to my maan... havent he already suffered a lot in his life... y him again... no pzzz... 😭

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
Maddy oh dear God... So I went to Inbox, clicked unread messages and picked the option of delete all... So I was thinking it'll wipe out the unread messages... Dang! It emptied all my emails.
There were so many that I wud have kept forever :(

That is really sad ! 😭 Ask them to forward once again ! What else ? 😛

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
No I don't read sad endings. I read a walk to remember... Cried for months and litreray got depressed for atleast two months. Wh''' I was little I saw a movie that was airing late at night . it was a story of a mentally handicapped kid who lived with his mom. mom was sick and died for almost a week , she was on the bed and the kid kept on cleaning her face, comb her hair, till the body started to decay ... The boy was a painter so he kept on making his moms paintings everyday and through them u cud c how the body is changing everyday... Cut the story short , I was 6 or 7 then... Still the visuals r so fresh in my eyes, And the pain hasn't lessened for a day. So no ... No sad
endings. If I know a person who is in trouble , I'll do anything in my power to ease their pain. Whn they fail, I feel like, I've failed. Though this habbit has landed me in my troubles , still I'll glady jump on the nxt opportunity to help sum1.
I was very interested in social work. I luv kids n old ppl :)
so I took many courses for socialwork. But then came along reality and I cudnt take it. My teachers didn't want me to quit, they thought it wud b beneficial for the profession to have a weired person like me on the block ... But my hands wud b tied and the so called socialwork in reality doesn't really work for ppl's benefit. So if a raped girl, who has lost the case against her foster parents... No matter how much she cries, has to go back in the same hell house... Ok maddy so yes, the answer to ur question was yes, I luv to read but only happy endings. It's nvr just a fiction to me.

Okay ! So I got it that if I want to see happy, I always have to make Happy Shappy OS ! 😃

BTW, you really seem so nice, helping and caring person ! WOW ! I am not like this, like you said !

And, yes...Reality is much more painful than fiction ! I know this, I can't tell you all the thing but I know that for me, REALITY SUCKs ! 😡 I have seen so much in this short age that I started ignoring reality ! I can't say everything to you, but all I can say is that, somehow I gathered courage to see and accept reality to some extent ! And, where I can not take it, I conveniently ignore it, with a fake smile on my face ! That is what I been doing till now ! And, i think i will do the same ! 😛

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: shanzy
sometimes i feel u like a devil distracting men n enjoying...same is the case wid u my dear u also enjoy are tears...hena😡😡
hah u know i was listening enrique's somebody's me n i felt maan upcoming condition apt on the song...oh larki i cant see him in pain...why dont u understaaand😭
and geet...as i told u earlier this geet is my fav...her condition was really heart wrenching...first she lost her baby n now was on the verge of leaving him n living life of endless pains😭😭
i loved geet n dadi convo ... she is a wonderful lady indeed, seems to be smone related to maan n that maya...uuuggghhh😡
uff maya say yad aya...samera bhi a gae...samera k to nam say hi mujy nafrat hy😡...i guess before leaving him geet will ask sam to cm to him...😕...as in first part u showed😕
time takes revenge very well...same ll be case wid maya...she l defo lose dev cz dev seems to be negligent of his moms evil deeds...he seems to be nice yet aqal ka andha...😆

Shan ! Since last few updates I have been noticing that you are so angry about something ! Well, what is that ? Just Maya ? or something else, too ?

Relax, my next update, you will love ! 😃 It's purely Maaneet ! And, don't worry there is no more pain in this FF for now !

And, one sad thing it's coming to end ! I have already written Epilogue for public demand ! 😃

After that, I will be vanishing away in the air ! 😆 I have got one OS ! Let's see how it works ! Coz, its sad ! I know many of you will not even read, but I need to post it for my mental peace ! 😊

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: simi91
what heart wenching
poor geet didnt get proper grieve for

baby

love dadi & geet conv she so kindness & mature

smart lady

dev no clue what his mother doing with

his brother

maya & dadi two different women one angel

& the other one devil ,cruel lady

i hope when maan find out what she did

he send her to tumbulk2

waiting eagerly next

ur amazing writer

keep it sweety

muah

bless yu

Thank you so much ! 🤗🤗🤗

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr
Update!!!! :D

xoxo
Aanya

You want update now ? 😲

Okay ! Let me try ! 😃

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: SakshiGarg
firstly sorry 4 late reply... my lappi was not working😡
cuming to the updates... maanddy ve i ever told u dat u r a wonderful writer... gosh u write sooo welll... though u always make me cry😭... ur pattern of stories is sooo painful... bt stil i cant resist reading them😛

in this FF of urs...i hate dat maya monster😡... dafa karo iss🤬 ko yahan se... or else i m gonna kill her... even dev is betr than her... atleast he values maan's love 4 them... i wonder how cum maan cudnt see her devil face😡
poor geet... i literally m crying 4 dat poor soul... thro'out this accident part she is the one who has undergone most of the pain... she is trying to be happy still knowing may be next mooment she wont be wid him... she lost their baby stil cant share it wid him😭
4 maan i wud only say... maandy plzzz dont do this to my maan... havent he already suffered a lot in his life... y him again... no pzzz... 😭

Oh...Sakshi ! Don't be sad ! Sad part is over, well, almost over ! 😛 And, Thank you so much loving my work like this, even if made you cry, you read it !

Thank you so much dear ! It matters to me the most ! 🤗

And, I assure you, this FF will end with a happy note only ! No worries ! 😃

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#309

Okay ! This was originally never in my plan ! I added this part on demand from my lovely demanding friends ! 😆 Just kidding ! 😉

This one is for Dimpzz ( Navpreet ), Shan, Princess and Reva !

I had to re-write everything just to add this romantic parts, and guys, after all this, dare you don't like it ! 😡 ( 🤣 ) BTW, the song, it's my one of the Most Fav song ! I just love it ! And, actually I imagined it and wrote is exactly like I used to think about Maaneet !

So,

My happy - Shappy Moments sucker friends !

I hope guys, you will like it ! You better like it ! 😉 😆

And, for those who are getting despo for truth coming out ! Next part is for you, There is blow up in next one ! 😃 Smile ! 😆

Something Called Love

Twenty Four

She was sleeping and she felt someone staring at her, she opened her eyes and she knew as usual who it was. She got up to ask what was up then. And she got answer herself, she found herself on his terrace. It was evening and cloudy, sun was playing hide and seek with dark clouds, waiting for sunset he was standing near the trails. She saw the small round table near her bed and white flowers, a bottle of champagne and two chairs. She blinked her eyes several times if she was dreaming or not. With gentle cool wind kissing her smooth silky white skin, she shivered. And he came closer and sat by her.

'How is it?' he whispered in her ear.

'What is this? Who allowed you to do this? You are not fine maan.' She snapped back.

'Shh…just look at the sky and feel the atmosphere, forget everything.'

'Why did you do this?'

'Well, number one it was cool atmosphere, I loved it. Second, before you get sick nursing me and serving me, I had to do, because honestly telling you; you are much sick and boring. I mean, hospital nurses are sexier than you. So, you need change ma'am.'

'What? What did you just said? I'm not sexy, am I?' she asked in anger and hit him hard with small fists against his broad chest.

'I was joking.'

'You better be and now that you have said it, I think I should just show you how sexy I can be and I am.'

'Whoa…'

And she got up and removed the jacket she wore and opened first two buttons of her white shirt and leaned over him, touch his face seductively.

'How is it?' she asked in seductive tone.

'Nice try.' He said and got up from there.

'That was my insult' she turned around and snapped.

'Oh! But I just got up to get drink.' He smiled.

'Very funny.'

'Okay. Wear the jacket, you are shivering.'

'No.'

'Okay. Your wish.' He said and brought the bottle of champagne and opened it and served her.

'It's beautiful.'

'Champagne?' she asked while drinking.

'No you fool, look there…the sunset. The clouds are so dark and sun is so, so…? Orange? Red? No…Big…Round…something something…'

'You can never do that, maan' she laughed innocently.

'I read it somewhere in some poetry book or something.'

'Poetry or even beautiful lines are not your business.' She laughed again.

He rolled his eyes, 'Okay, whatever'

As she was gulping down the drink and trembling a little because of cool wind, she felt his warm touch on her back and then she was in the same quilt - with him. She pulled it over and covered him under it, and they both were in each other's arms. She felt better and warmer in his arms; she leaned over and rested on his broad chest. He was running fingers in her long silky hair, and tickling on her neck.

'Stop that!' she laughed, it was musical. He loved her smile.

They sat there for a while and witnessed the lovely sunset together, while playing and teasing each other, hand and hands.

As soon as the sun was set, it was dark and gloomy; she scared a little and held his arm much tighter, after flying phobia, darkness was something which she was scared from childhood. She was always scared and frightened from darkness anywhere. He sensed it that she was scared from darkness and he clutched her hand protectively and switched on the light and she gasped for air. He decorated the whole terrace with white and yellow sparkling rice lights.

'Mr. Khurana, you bring me to whole new another world! Should I take it seriously?' she managed to say this.

'Well, first of all, Maan…and yes. It is another world, I call it Maan Land. Do you mind?'

'Maan…it's beautiful'

'You see if I ever agreed to watch your stupid movies, you would never got chance to experience this.'

'Did you do this yourself?'

'Any doubt ma'am? Well, honestly and truthfully, I had to consult some electricians and few florists; apart from that I just got champagne from order and food…'

'…shut up. I loved that.' she said and kissed his pointed nose.

'Well that explains everything. Thanks.' He said and kissed her forehead.

He pulled her closer in the quilt and she hid herself in his chest as it was much cold but she felt warm in his embrace.

'I have to go. I need to check whether my fridge and beer bottles, my plants, my TV, my lovely purple bed are alive or not. Or they died in my absence.'

'You are not going anywhere.' He said firmly.

'I have to.'

'It's an order, Miss Handa.'

'Okay. Mr. Khurana provided that you will ask my ghost to be there and check whether my lovelies are dead without me or not?'

'You are not going.'

'Just for once, to check what is up with my stupid oven.'

'You are not going.'

'Fine.' She snapped and hit him with her elbow.

'That was nice move.' He said while staring at the stars that were also playing hide and seek with dark invisible clouds.

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They sat there for while and fought and loved each other. After a while, he served her food and they fed each other and again slept there. It was midnight when under the moonlight, they were found talking and laughing about everything in the world, their childhood, their school days, their choice and their life and after a while, she found herself lost in his embrace and heard him saying, 'Mine.'

And, she memorized something she read somewhere in magazine.

When two people can laugh together at the same time, that relationship could last forever.

She did not say anything; he slept after a while, in middle of the night, silent and still night when everybody was sleeping, when nobody could see her and hear her. She got up silently without disturbing him, she looked at his face, shining in the dim and dull moonlight and purely divine and angelic. She stared at him for a while and it became blurred as her eyes were in tears, tears of pain and separation. She carefully and gently brushed her lips against his 'M' shaped lips and whispered, 'Yours.'

And then she took his hand and hid herself in his arms tightly, she hugged him tight as if was for the last time, as indeed, it was her last night with him, as her fifteen days were over and she decided to tell him the truth tomorrow, he was recovered and fit then, she already got reminder from maya gujral so she decided to disclose everything to him and accept whatever punishment he choose for her and leave him forever. She could not afford to sleep that night, as she did not wanted to miss even a second with him, she held him tight and shed tears silently for the rest of the night.