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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part...

maaneet in the same room...for 3 days...nice...

continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome dear. thnx 4 updating. again all d best 4 exam
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!!!! very nice update
Thanks for this pretty update...story is going to be preety interesting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update::
Love how geet was getting annoyed wiv da air hostess flirting wiv maan
Awww both of them got lost in each other wen they freshened up
Love that food dialogue of geets,,reminded me ov olden days of geet
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
good luck with ur exam
lovely part
love it
xxx
thnaks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey apoorva!!
its awesome..keep up the good work..such a good story line..would love to read more and more.
and all the best for your exams..!!
thnx for pm buddy 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
precap is interesting

lovely update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome..
jst read all the parts...loved it...update soon...
plz do pm me..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Here is part 14...please comment and like the post!! Sorry for the mistakes as it was a little rushed! 😭

Part 14

(At the hotel room)

Maan: Geet jaldi karo...hum late ho rahe hain...

Geet: Aa rahi hun sir...bas ek minute!

Both leave their room to walk to the conference room in their hotel where their conference is to be held.


Maan: Geet yeh conference humari company ke liye bahot important hai...yeh Laxmi industries humare liye bahot zaroori hai...I want this deal to be finalized today...You know I think Mr. Mittal will be present as well.

Geet: Mr. Mittal you mean Aditya Mittal?

Maan: Yes why?

Geet: Nahi bas yunhi..(Oh no woh toh mujhe pechan lega...aur maan. No..geet tu kyu itni pareshan ho rahi hai? I mean if he finds out the truth it won't be the end of the world will it? Wait I will just text him everything so that he will not get shocked when he sees that I am working with maan)

Geet texts everything to Aditya. She gets a reply saying ok, suddenly the door of the conference room opens. Mr.Chopra walks in with Aditya.

Mr Chopra: Hello! (He shakes hands with him and Geet) Mr Khurana...this is Aditya Mittal. Aur yeh Mr Maan Singh Khurana aur yeh...

Aditya: Geet Handa..(Gives out a hand to her)

Mr. Chopra: You know her..

Aditya: Very well

Maan is just looking at the two and is trying to work out what is going on.

Geet: Hello Sir...

Aditya: Tum mujhe sir bularahi ho...suraj kya pashim se nikla hai?

Geet: Aap bhi na...bhalayi naam ki toh cheez hi nayi rahi...

Aditya: Hmm..

Geet: Waise bhabhiji kaisi hai?

Maan: Bhabhiji?

Aditya: You must be Mr. Khurana...actually my wife and Geet used to be childhood friends and so technically she is my saali...Hmm and she is fine and she misses you a lot.

Geet: Hmm...jeejaji...per mere sweet se jeejaji apni saali ko bhul gaye!

Aditya: Ab tum hi gayab ho gayi toh main kya karu?

Geet: Ok I will let you off the hook this once.

Aditya: Mr.Khurana...consider this deal finalised...afterall I can do that for my saali right?

Geet: Wait...aap ko file tho padleni chayiye na...

Aditya: I trust you...I don't think that you will try to scam me...

Geet: Haha..thankyou for the trust.

Aditya: So will look forward to working with you Mr. Khurana. I have to attend another meeting but I hope you enjoy your stay here and I will keep in touch with you.

Maan: Yes and thankyou...I look forward to working with your company.

With this Aditya and Mr.Chopra leave.

Maan: Geet...you made it so simple...why didn't you tell me ki you know Aditya?

Geet: Actually sir...I wanted to keep it professional and not give you false hope if he didn't sign the deal so thats why...

Maan: oh okay..chalo hum bahar jata hain...

Geet: Kahan sir?

Maan: Ab tho pura din no meetings tho vahar jate hain? Mumbai ghum te hain!

Maan and Geet walk outside...

Geet: Sir chalo...hum Juhu beach chalte hain?

Maan: Nahi...tume koi aura chi jagah nahi milli kya?

Geet: Chalo sir...(She drags Maan out and they sit in the car and Geet tells the driver) Bhaiya hame Juhu beach jahna hai...

Maan: Geet...hum beach jake kya karenge?

Geet: Hum toh beach jake...juggling karenge

Maan: GEET

Geet: Sir...itna acha mausam hai aur aap ko undder rehna hai...

Maan: Maine aisa toh nahi kaha...


Geet: Phir (They reach their to their destination) Chalo sir (She drags him out of the car) Dekho sir...paani puri wala...chalo paani puri kahte hain..

Maan: Tumme road side waali paani puri khani hai...hum ek achi hotel main jayenge aur tum phir waha kahlena..

Geet: Sir aap kitna boring hain...road side waali paani puri khane main maza hi kuch aur hain...

Maan: Geet tum bimar ho jayegi

Geet: Kuch nahi hoga! Bhaiya 2 plate gol gaape dena...(He prepares it and gives it to them) Wah kya gol gappe banaye hain bhaiya...maza aygaya! Yeh lijye sir...(She offers him the plate)

Maan: Muhje nahi kahana...

Geet: Muhje pata tha..ki aap nahi kahsakte (She brings the plate back and is about to put the paani puri in her mouth when maan snatches it and puts it his mouth. Geet is left shocked...)

Maan: (He smirks then feels the chilly in his mouth and starts to scream) Ahhh...

Geet: Paani hai bhaiya (He gives her water and she helps maan drink the water) Sir aap theek tho hai na? (Maan is just staring at her innocence and comes out of trance)

Maan: Hmm...ab tumara gol gappe wala shauk pura hogaya ho tho ab hum chale?

Geet: Hmm...chalo sir...

Maan: Geet...sir nahi...sirf Maan..

Geet: Per aap tho mere boss ho na tho...main kaise?

Maan: Per tum meri friend pehle thi na? Tho maan!

Geet: Friend?

Maan: Hmm...Friend! Will you be my friend Geet? (He holds out his hand to her)

Geet: Hmm...(She shakes his hand)

Precap: Masti with her new friend

Part 15

Edited by -maankimishty- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update::
Love adi and geets bonding
Awww maaneet are so cute eating gol gappes,,,poor maan had a bit too much chilli
Luv the precap
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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