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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
n waiting 4 next part
update soon👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update... Can u please pm me for the next update?????
Edited by Maaneet4eve - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part dear 😊 thank for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

so geet is realizing but not admitting...

the kasak that is present in really amazing...

continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

the scene superb

its geet turn feel restless
oh dear me hooked with ur
FF so amazing
fabulous part
love it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
so both feeling and maan knows wat feeling it is but geet still not sure...
lets c if arjun-arohi play cupid bw thm...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 11

Arohi thought.. why not to seek arjun.. she immediately called arjun.. n asked him to meet her at their fav spot..

They met at their fav spot.. Arohi looked everywhere consciously.. to confirm no one was there..
Arohi: Arjun.. mujhe tumse ek bht imp baat karni hai.. actually puchni hai..

Arjun: Haan..arohi..pucho naa..

Arohi: Arjun.. tum inn dino maan se mile kyaa??

Arjun: Nahii.. but tum kyun yeh..

Arohi: Wo isiliye.. kyunki.. jabse Geet ki tabiyat kharab chal rahi hai.. he is being so worried for her.. n aaj to wen he dropped her home.. he asked me her fav chocolate..

Arjun: Abb.. to ainvai puch liya hoga..

Arohi: Arjun.. I think ki wo dono ek dusre ko pasand karne lag gaye hain.. but they need someone who will make them realize..

Arjun: Tum kya kehna chahti ho..

Arohi: Arjun.. tum kal Maan se milna.. aur us se iss bare me baat karna..plz

Arjun: Ok.. chalo abb der ho rahi hai.. mai tumhe ghar drop kar dun..

He dropped her home.. n left from there..

GEET'S ROOM

Geet was still not asleep.. she was just thinking abt him.. Maan.. her mind.. her heart.. her soal was inchanting his name..She was really missing him.. longing for him.. she wanted him.. right then and there..But she thought she couldn't do anything so she fell asleep.. thinking abt him..

MAAN'S ROOM

There Maan was upto something else only.. He knew.. he liked her.. or loved her.. he chuckled by the thought.. n now he will make her realize that.. he had a plan in his mind.. that will defo work he thought.. He fell asleep thinking abt her..

NEXT DAY KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS

Maan reached office before time today.. he was really happy.. He got arjun's call .. He asked him to met him at the nearby coffee shop..that's wat he wanted.. not to come in front of Geet.. so that she miss him.. long for him.. he told arjun that he wud b there in 15 mins..

COFFEE SHOP

He met him.. but then wanted to run from there when Arjun started asking all those questions.. He just said one thing..

Maan: Mujhe nahi pata ki yeh kya hai.. yeh jo kasak hai mere dil me.. yeh jo ehsaas hai.. yeh mujhe uske ghayalon se dur nahi hone deta.. I just know that I want her.. I like her.. I love her.. he chuckled saying those words.. n I know she also likes me.. but abb bas usko yeh realize karvana hai.. Tum dekhna when must hav not found mee in office.. she will have gone mad!!

Ajun: Maan.. tu kabse in sab cheezon me mahir hogaya!!

They chatted for somethime more n then Maan left for KM..

KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS

As Maan said.. Geet was going mad.. not seeing him.. she so much wanted to see him.. hear him..touch him.. feel him.. but why she thought..

She didn't knew.. she just knew one thing.. she had to see him.. that's it..

She thought that may be he is at home today.. mai ghar jayungi.. yaa I will go.. just once.. bas ek baar unhe dekhne ke liye..

KHURANAMANSION

Geet sneaked in the home.. n asked abt Maan by saying that she needs his sign on some file.. She reached there.. where he was.. her eyes widened.. she forgot everything.. she just kept gaping at him.. practicing his Tai Chi.. his every move was so perfect.. his perfectly carved masculine body.. his scent.. his.. his everything.. she was going mad.. she went closer.. closer n closer..

Maan saw him.. n smirked.. which she defo didn'nt saw.. He held her by her shoulder.. his touch.. Oh god.. it sent shivers down her spine.. she felt as if she will die there and then..

Maan: geet.. tum yahan kya kar rahi ho..

Geet: Wo.. wo.. mai.. wo

Maan: Geet.. abb bolo bhi..kya kar rahi ho yahan

Geet: Woi mai.. aapse.. wo

Maan dragged her from there.. to take her to his room.. All the while.. she kept looking at him.. she could not see anything else.. hear anything else.. If she could see anything.. feel anything.. it was him.. Maan.. Suddenly a smile appeared on her face.. she was so happy.. finally.. finally she saw him!!

MAAN'S ROOM

Maan made her sit on his bed.. n went to change..

Geet was feeling so cozy there.. that scent.. the scent that always sooths her.. Maan's scent she thought.. She had come before to this room.. but now.. its diff.. its very diff.. she thought..

Maan came back wearing his tracks and black vest..

Maan: Geet.. abb bolo.. yahan kya kar rahi ho..

Geet said it all in one go: mai aapse milne aayi thi..

She realized wat she said.. n turned her back to him.. now she realized wat she used to feel.. that kasak.. that ehsaas.. she realized it all.. But now she got scared.. that if he also feel the same.. She quickly shooted her prayer to babaji.. Babaji.. plz sab kuch theek karna..


Sorry.. no precap today..

You will hav to wait for the next update..😉



Part 12

Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
finally maan made her to realize...
but now she realized when will they confess or she will run away...
still v hv to know her past and her family prob...
without the precap its hard to think wat happens next...

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