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AMMI6

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Posted: 15 years ago

#451

awesome one amira⭐️ , lovelyyy superb👏👏👏

really loved the Prem and❤️ Heer scenes , nice selection of pic and scenes great jobbb

even Arjun and Arohi was perfect one loved it 😃

keep up the great work 👍🏼and update next part sooon😉

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#452

Awesome part ...n ur selection of pics ia also lovely ...cont soon n thnx for the pm ...

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Alina Rehman

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Posted: 15 years ago

#453

loved it

thanx

i love premeer

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harshitideewani

@harshitideewani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#454

thanks amira for a wonderfull Update 👏

great scene selection and pictuter correcly matched Heer ❤️ Prem scenes loved ittt sooo much, even Arjun 😉Arohi was lovely one mindblowinggg 👍🏼Keep up the awesome job,

Desperately waitinggg for next update

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saira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#455

beautiful update, loved the visuals. finally together. hope arjun and arohi soon find the feeling of love.

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#456

Ohmygosh.

Smaashiiing Upd ❤️

Love the way you putted the pictures and the instruments, anot to forget the video. =) Loved it.

Keeep dazliing. Upd sooon

Hina *HUG*

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Kajal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#457

Nice update cont.soon

Thanks for the PM

❤️ Prachi

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Amira.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#458

Part23 (Saath rehne ki dua)

Prem Heer jaa kar teji ka adhirwaad lete hain

Teji: tum dono hamesha khush raho!! maine jabse tum dono ko saath mein dekha hai to mujhe tum dono ek dosre ke liye bane laghe.. main sab ke liye khana lagha deti houn..

Teji khana lagha ne jaati hai.. Prem aur Preet ek dosre ko hug karte hain

Preet: congratz bhai!!

Prem: agar tu na ho tha to mujhe meri Heer kabhi na millti

Preet: oh com'on bhai... mera itna bhi haq nahi banta?... by the way main aab to Heer ko bhabhi bhula sakhta houn na?

Prem smiles: zaroor!!

Meher: congrats jeeju, di..!! aap dono ki ek neyi zindagi shuru huwi hai to isski ek pyari si nishaani bhi to honi chahiye na

Heer: tera matlab kiya hai?

Meher: rukhiye di

Meher camera le kar atii hai... Prem aur Heer dono yeh dekh kar muskurahte hai aur Meher unki ek pyari si photo kench thii hai... Prem and Heer had a beautifull eye lock...

Teji ki awaaz ati hai " agar tum bachchon ka yeh sab ho gaya hai to khana kha lo "

~ ~ ~

Arjun&Arohi party mein jaate hain... Arjun is buzzy with bussiness mans. Arohi chal rahi hoti hai to usse ek kamre se awaaz ati hai

voice of boy: aaj tumhari engagement hai aur kuch din tak tum shaadi bhi kar lo gi phir hum dono hamesha ke liye alag ho jayein ge

voice of girl(very tensed): nahii.. aisa nahi ho sakhta!! I can't leave without you!! chalo hum bhag chalte hain

voice of boy: aise kaise bagh sakhte hain?

achanak unn dono ko feel hota hai ke koi bahir kaade ho kar unnki batein sunn raha hai

girl: kaun hai parde ke piche?

Arohi andher ati hai aur kehti hai: maine tum dono ki baatein sunn li hain

girl: please tum Papa ko mat batana!! nahi to hamari kahani ka the end ho jaye ga

Arohi remembers about sid and she thinks " Sid ne bhi yehi galti ki thi aur aaj woh iss halat mein hai lekin aaj waisa kuch nahi hoga "

boy: aap bhi ek ladki ho to please aap hi inne samajhayein ke bagh kar shaadi karna sehi nahi hai

Arohi uss ladki ki taraf dekhti hai: main yeh to nahi jaanti ke kiya sehi hai aur kiya galat lekin maine yeh sunna hai ke chup kar aur bagh kar woh kaam kiya jata hai jo galat hota hai, aab aap dono ko decide karna hai ke aapka par galat hai ya phir sachcha

~ ~ ~

Prem and Heer are very happy... They are walking on the street

Prem: Heer mujhe yakeen nahi ata ke sab thik ho gaya

Heer: aise laghta hai jaise yeh koi sapna hai

Prem smiles: sapne bohot dekh liye, aab iss pal ko jee lete hain

Heer: pal ko kaise jeeya jaata hai?

Prem: Heer! mujhe pyar pehli baar huwa hai, I don't know lekin movies se hi
todha bohot experience hai

Heer smiles: aab tum koi filmi line mat ched dena

Prem: what do you mean? main khud pe poety kar sakhta houn

Heer: jaise ki?

Prem sochne laghta hai aur ulta sida kehne laghta hai: main tumhare liye chand taare todh laoun ga

Heer zor se hasne laghti hai: Prem yeh line to bohot hi filmi hai, isse chor kar koi aur bol dete to bhi chal jata

Prem bhi hasta hai: patta hai, jab school mein teacher poem likhno ko bolti thi to main kuch nahi likh patta tha, aur friends ki chori kar ke teacher ko de diya karta tha aur teacher har waqt meri tarife karti rehti thi

dono hasne laghte hain

Heer: tum jaise ho mujhe waise hi ache laghte ho

Prem: mujhe bhi tum bilcool simple si cute laghti ho..

~ ~ ~

Arohi Arjun ko ishara karte huwe upher ane ko bolti hai.. Arjun upher aata hai

Arjun: kiya huwa?

Arohi: I neend your Help

Arjun is suprise: you neend my help? tumhe kiya laghta hai ke junk mein koi kissi ki madat karta hai?

Arohi: Arjun.. please sirf kuch time ke liye iss junk ko bhool jao, Mohabbat ke liye? I know you don't believe in love lekin kissi aur ki khatir man jao

yeh sunne ke baad Arjun Arohi ki ankhon mein kho jata hai.. aur phir woh kehta hai: thik hai

Arohi usse unke paas room mein lee jar kar sab baata thi hai

Boy&Girl: humne soch liya hai ke hum bagh kar kuch nahi kareinge!!

Arohi smiles: Arjun! Mr.Mehra ko manna ne ke liye mujhe tumhari help chahiye.. please?

Arjun: ok!

Arjun call kar ke unne room mein ane ko bolta hai aur phir woh ate hain.. they told the whole story to Mr.Mehra

Arohi to Mr.Mehra: please sir yeh aapki baithi ki zindagi ka sawal hai...

Arjun: haan sir.. mujhe laghta hai Arohi sehi bol rahi hai.. waise mein inn sab mein believe to nahi karta lekin iss bar mujhe lagh raha hai ke yeh sab sehi hai

Girl: please papa!! I really love him

Boy: main bhii apki baithi se bohot pyar karta houn..

~ ~ ~

Khaane khate waqat bhi Prem aur Heer ek dosre ko muskurahte huwe dekhte rehte hain... achanak Prem table ke niche Heer ka haath pakkar leta hai

Meher: di.. woh plate dena!

Heer dheere se Prem ke kaan mein bolti hai: Prem.. haath chodo

Prem bhi dheere se kehta hai: arre.. abhi hi to maine Teji maa se promise kiya ke main tumhara haath kabhi nahi chodoun ga!!

Heer sharmane laghti hai... Teji kitchen mein jaati hain

Meher: dii!! plate do!!

Preet: laghta hai ke dono ka romance karne kaa mood hai

Prem yeh sun kar jaldi se Heer ka haath chodh tha hai to Heer Meher ko plate dete huwe dheere se Prem ko kehti hai: arre.. tumne to maa ke haath chodne wali baat ko andheka kar diya!!

dono muskurahte hain...

Preet: broo!! mujhe jana hoga

Prem: tu ne to abhi kuch khaya bhi nahi.. khaa le phir chale jana

Preet: girlfriend ke saath date pe jaana hai.. agar itna kuch khaa liya to usske saath nahi khaa paoun ga...

Prem: terii yeh girl friend badal ne ki adat nahi jayee gi!!

they smiles... Preet chala jata hai

Meher: shukar hai kee jeeju Preet jaise nahi hain..

Prem aur Heer muskurahte huwe ek dosre ko dekhte hain...

~ ~ ~

At Party... Mr. Mehra announce: main aap sabse sorry kehna chahta houn.. main apni baithi ki shaadi ussi ladke se karoun ga jisse woh pyar karti hai...

unn dono Boy&Girl ki engagement ho jaati hai aur woh Arjun&Arohi ka bohot shukriyaa karte hain

Boy: aaj aap dono ki wajah se yeh sab possible huwa hai.. Thanks a lot!

Girl(Mehra's daughter): aap ne papa ke saath, unn ladke walon ko bhi manna liya...

woh Girl yeh kehte huwe Arohi ko hug karti hai: Thank you so much!!

Arohi: yeh sab meine sirf pyar ke liye kiya hai...

Boy: Hum dono wish karein ge ke aap dono bhi hamesha khush rahe aur hamesha saath rahein!!

Arjun: oyee!! phirse aisii baat mat karna nahi to abhii hi tum dono ki engagement todhwa doun ga

they smiles...

Girl: pyar hone se pehle.. hum dono bhi aise hi ladte rehte the aur ek dosre se nafrat karte rehte the lekin phir ek din pyar jeet gaya

Arohi: haan lekin hamare case mein aisa nahi hone wala!!

Boy: Kismat mein jo hota hai wohi hota hai..

Arjun unn dono ki baton ko ignore karte huwe Mr.Mehta se kehta hai: Sir.. aab mujhe jana chahiye..

Mr.Mehra: Thank you so much for comming.. agar aap na ate to bohot badi galti ho jati

Arohi think " agar main isse na batta thi to yeh sab kabhi na hota.. sara ka sara credit khud hi le raha hai.. "

Arjun Arohi ki taraf dekhte huwe kehta hai: yeh sab Arohi ki wajah se huwa... I mean agar woh na mujhe bholti to main kabhi yeh na karta

Arohi feels something for Arjun...

Mr.Mehra: Thanks!! aap dono sachch mein Perfect ho for each other!

Arjun aur Arohi iss baat ko ignore karte aur phir chale jaate hain...

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I hope you all like it.. Hit the like button and leave ur compliments if u like it.. Thnks for reading =D

~Amira~

Edited by amira_saeed - 15 years ago