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Posted: 14 years ago
Opps! Sorry double post 😳
pls update soon
Edited by siroilily - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loving dis kasak btn maan n geet. Loved angry maan 😡 😆 gussa karne ke bad pyar bhi toh dikhaega 😳 msk style
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: siroilily

Loving dis kasak btn maan n geet. Loved angry maan 😡 😆 gussa karne ke bad pyar bhi toh dikhaega 😳 msk style


Soo.. now I'll make sure.. ki woh pyaar zarur dikhaye..
But if u want MSK style.. to pyaar bhi gussa hi hoga!!!!
😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Mahima
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 9

Maan: Geettt.. I don't want to listen to ur silly excuses.. I think maine hi tumhe yeh project saup kar galti ki..

She started crying.. louder n louder.. she suddenly fainted..

Oh God.. he couldn't see her in that condition.. he quickly reached to her.. held her before she falls like before.. n carried her to KM yet again..

KHURANA MANSION

Maan reached KM.. with Geet.. again in his arms.. she was again fainted..

Dadimaa.. was really worried seeing this.. By now.. she was understanding wat was Maan feeling.. but then.. Geet.. agin faint.. this was really shocking.. wat happ to her.. she thought.. She quickly rushed to Maan.. who has now gone to his room..

MAAN'S ROOM

Dadimaa: Maan bete.. kyaa hua inhe.. yeh phir se..

Maan: Dadimaa.. mujhse bht badi galti ho gayi.. Maine Geet aisi halat me daant diya.. aur usne rona shuru kar diya.. bas aur wo faint ho gayi.. He was sounding low.. like he was feeling very guilty somewhere..

Dadimaa: Maan bete.. apko apne gusse ko thoda kabu me rakhna seekhna hoga.. aap Geet k paas bethiye. Hum Dr ko bulate hain..

Maan nodded his head n Dadimaa went to call the Dr.

Maan was really feeling very bad.. already there was a fight going on in his heart..n to top it.. now he did something.. that he can not even regret.. it was totally his fault.. he didn't even listened to her.. knowing that she was sick.. he just shouted at her like anything..

But he was angry.. angry for not seeing her.. hearing her.. feeling her.. when he wanted..

His heart was crying.. he was feeling so much of pain.. he didn't dare to look at her.. even once.. he was scared.. Yess.. he was scared.. of his act.. He couldn't see her like that.. He couldn't see her.. her eyes.. in pain.. that he had given to her..

The Dr came.. she checked Geet.. she looked worried..

Maan: Kya hua dr.. sab theek hai naa..

Dr: Mr Khurana.. inhe kya kal vomits hue the..??

Maan: Dr.. yeh to I don't know..mai.. she interrupted

Dr: Its ok Mr Khurana.. anyways.. mai medicines likh deti hun.. aap wo mangwa lijiyega.. n nothing serious.. I think inhone kuch allergic kha liya hoga.. BTW.. was she tensed.. or something like that.. I mean.. inka bar bar faint hona.. its not good for her health.. so plz tacke good care of her from now on..

Maan: Ji dr.

Dr gave the prescription to Maan.. n left.. Maan gave it to Nakul.. n asked him to bring the medicines..

Maan was all in tears by now.. he couldn't control himself.. his heart was aching.. he didn't knew why he was crying.. but just he was.. he was not able to see her like that.. Finally he spoke..

Maan: Geet.. aankhen kholo.. plz Geet utho.. mai tumhare bina nahi jee sakta.. mujhe nahi pata ki yeh ehsaas kya hai.. but I can't live w/o u.. u r my life.. u r the only light in my life.. utho Geet..plz utho..

This time.. he spoke it.. he spoke it all.. n he was not surprised by wat he just said.. he was happy.. to understand it.. he was feeling something.. but he didn't knew wat.. it was very diff.. He felt that he has said the biggest truth of his life to his life.. but his life.. was lieing there.. w/o any response.. he so much wanted to tell her.. wat he feels for her.. why he cares for her.. why he was worried for her.. but she was there.. with her eyes closed.. ears closed.. she wasn't hearing anything.. How unlucky he was.. he thought.. when he realized the biggest truth of his life.. there was no one with whom he can share it.. He was angry at self.. for doing this to his life.. to his jaan..

This kasak was killing him from inside..

He felt.. as if his heart has stopped.. wen she tried to open her eyes.. she fluterred her eyes open.. to see trails of tears on his cheeks.. she immediately got up.. n cried..

Geet: Maan sir.. aap ro kyun rahe hain.. kyaa hua apko..

Maan: Geet.. he was so happy to again see life in his life..

Geet: Boliye naa sir.. kya hua apko.. her hand caressed her his cheek now..

He immediately snapped her hand..

Maan: Tumhe kya lagta hai.. tum kuch bhi karogi aur mai dekhta rahunga.. kucvh nahi kahunga..

Geet: Sssir wooo..

Maan: Tumne kyun nahi bataya mujhe.. kyun nahi bataya.. ki u were not well.. kya zarurat thi office ane ki.. haan..

Geet: Ssir.. this project was very imp to u.. apka bht loss hota.. agar mai.. He interrupted

Maan: To ho jane diya hota loss.. tumhe kya lagta hai. Abb mera bht profit hua hai..

(Profit to hua tha.. in a way.. he realized that something he felt for her!!!!)

Geet: Ssir.. plz aap royo mat naa.. I can't see ur eyes in tears.. plz sir..

Maan was too much emotional.. to say anything.. he just hugged her.. n she hugged him back.. trying to sooth him..

Both of them were very emotional at that time.. they didn't knew wat they were saying n doing.. Yess.. they have started falling for each other.. but not realized it.. Maan had somewhere realized it by admitting that Geet was his life.. the only light of his life.. but still.. they both didn't knew.. wat love meant.. so how will they realize it this soon.. But the Kasak that was in both of their hearts.. was now soothed by each other.. it was the only way.. to sooth that Kasak..

Maan so much wanted to feel her.. feel every part of her.. but he stopped himself.. just kept hugging her.. as if he was a small baby..who needed his mother all the time.. n this small baby.. needed his love all the time..!!

PRECAP

Kasak kasak.. now the bells of Geet's heart rings!!!!!


This was the best part I hav written until now.. was literally crying writing this..

Hope u all like it:-)



part 10

Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow! Awesome part ⭐️ Loved der hug. Finally maan has realised dat he has got feelings 4 geet 😳 .
Loving msk's ka pyar bhara gussa 😳.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...2 gud...
plzz continue it soon..
precap sounds intresting...

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Posted: 14 years ago
just read the whole one... add me to ur PM list.. :) have sent u a buddy request
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow <3 ! :)
aww !!! awesome par t to the core sweety <3 ! :)
lykd it so much dear <3 ! :)
keep going dear <3 ! :)
luv ya <3 ! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part 😊 can u plz add me to ur pm list ? 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
chalo pyaar ka ehsaaas hona toh shuru hua ...
bhale hi ek taraf se ..
dusri taraf se bhi shuru ho jayega ...

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