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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 7

Maan left the room to bring dinner for her making her lost in her thoughts..

Geet't mind was just lingering on her family.. she was thinking wat if they got to know the truth..will they accept me.. or will be an.. a tear escaped her eye.. she couldn't.. just couldn't say that word.. she thought.. nahi nahi.. aisa nahi ho sakta.. they love me.. they all love me.. wo log sach jankar bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karenge.. ek wo log hi to hain meri zindagi me.. how cud I not have trust on them.. haan.. mujhe unpe pura vishwas hai.. they will love me.. aur phir papaji hain naa unhe sab samjhane ke liye.. that why did he did this.. haan papaji unhe sab samjhadenge.. n they will have to accept me..

Her thoughts were disturbed wen Maan entered the room.. Nakul followed him.. taking the plate in his hand.. Maan ordered him to keep the plate on the table n leave..

Maan: Geet... chalo abb utho aur dinner karo.. He said ..what said.. ordered her..stirnly..

Geet thought.. abhi thodi der pehle to itne pyaar se bol rahe the.. lekin yeh bhi naa mera shock zyada der nahi rehne denge.. ban gaye phir se dudht danav..uff..

She turned her face in refusal..

Maan was really angry.. someone not obeying his orders..!!!!!! n that too Geet..!!

Maan: Geeettt.. u said u will eat here.. tumhe kisi ki fikr hai bhi yaa nahi.. mai kab se tumhare liye pareshan ho raha hun.. n u.. u r not trying to understand..

Geet very cutely said: Sir.. maine thodi naa kaha tha aapko mere liye pareshan hone ko.. she started sobbing..yet again!!

Now he was not able to bear this.. Firstly he was confused that why did he say that he will die without her.. n now why was he not able to see tears in those eyes.. why were those eyes so imp to him.. those eyes were like mirror for him.. which cud read him from inside.. his heart..he was just in luv wid those eyes.. ek kasak thi un aankhon me.. to which Maan cud relate.. don't know how.. but just he cud..

Maan: Geeettt.. tum rona band karogi yaa nahi.. He decided to reamin stern.. he thought.. he didn't had any emotions.. so he shud not speak softly.. spl with her.. otherwise he will go mad.. wo uski aankhon me behna chahta tha.. but he somehow controlled himself..

Geet started crying more now.. actually she too didn't knew why was she crying.. but she didn't liked Maan being so rude with him.. well he was always rude.. so why now.. abb kyun farak pad raha hai mujhe she thought.. unhone ek do pyaar k shabd kya keh diye.. geet.. tu bhul gayi kya ki wo kaun hain.. dusht danav..umm

She somehow stopped crying.. Maan had that victorious smile on his face.. buit he hid it.. but his eyes..uff.. his eyes.. said it all to her eyes!!!

He made her have the dinner.. n dropped her to her home..

Arohi was waiting outside the home.. Geet had already called her and told her the whole scenario..

Geet thanked Maan.. and went inside with Arohi..

AROHI'S HOME

Arohi: Geet tu theek to hai naa.. I told u to hav ur lunch naa.. but u nvr listen to mee.. actually tu kisi ki bhi baat nahi sunti.. wahan par lunch nahi kar sakti thi.. n m sure tune dinner bhi nahi kiya hoga..haina

Geet: Aru.. bas yar.. itni sari complaints.. wo bhi ek hi saans me.. lunch karne ka time nahi mila aur dinner kara diya hai Maan sir ne.. her voice was low.. she was not able to even stand there.. she quickly rushed to the washroom.. she just puked it all..

Arohi rushed behind her: To yeh hai tera dinner.. u know naa.. wen u skip ur lunch n just eat ur dinner.. u always puke it all.. kitni baar kaha hai.. pehle medicine liya kar.. den dinner..

Geet: Aru.. bas kar yar.. I'm sure yeh naa Maan sir ne jaan bhuj kar kiya hai..

Arohi: Kya janbhujhkar kiya.. aaj to wo tere se kitne ache se behave kar rahe the.. abb ki hua..??

Geet: Mushrooms..she made a face saying that name..

Arohi: Wat mushrooms..

Geet: Pakki baat hai.. unhone dinner me mushrooms dal waye the..dats why only I puked..

Arohi: Oh ho Geet.. u know u can't eat them.. to why did u ate at the first place..

Geet: u knw naa mujhe pata nahi chalta hai.. but den baad me I puke it all..

Arohi: Geet.. chal abb yeh sab chad.. n go to ur room n sleep..chal jaa..

Geet nodded n went to her room.. she quickly changed her night dress.. n fall asleep within seconds..

KHURANA MANSION

There Geet was sleeping peacefully.. but here Maan didn't even closed his eyes once.. His mind.. his heart was just surrounded by her.. but why.. why why why.. he thought..

He was missing her.. her eyes.. he just wanted to flow with those eyes.. he so much wanted to see her.. her eyes.. but why.. he didn't had any idea..

It was 2 now.. but he just couldn't sleep.. he was so disturbed.. n angry too.. he didn't knew.. wat was all this.. wat was happ in his life.. he just didn't knew..

He wanted to kill himself.. so much was the pain.. but why why.. wat was this pain.. n why mee.. he thought..

He wanted his answers.. but how he thought..

He decided to sleep for a while.. he closed his eyes..n again.. agin those eyes..!!!!

Now it was it.. he had it enough.. he immediately got up.. n called Geet..He thought why was he calling her.. didn't knew.. but he wanted to.. so continued..

The bell was continuosly ringing.. but no answer.. then he realized it was too late to call her now.. He throwed the phone in frustration.. He was really pissed off!!

He lied on his bed again.. closed his eyes.. saw hers.. n fell asleep..

PRECAP

Geet illn Maan angry on Geet!!!!

Part 8

Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fab. update n precap is awesome cant wait. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
U updated quite a lot, just read it now... way more improved than ur first update. N yes finally d word kasak too. Loved all d updates. Wanna know more of geets past! N btw as ur ff has crossed 15 parts now it will have to be moved to ff forum. Ther is a sticky on d 1st pg of geet forum regarding tht.
Ps:U dont need to pm me twice yr!. Pm on IF is suffice no need for fb msgs:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita21992

U updated quite a lot, just read it now... way more improved than ur first update. N yes finally d word kasak too. Loved all d updates. Wanna know more of geets past! N btw as ur ff has crossed 15 parts now it will have to be moved to ff forum. Ther is a sticky on d 1st pg of geet forum regarding tht.
Ps:U dont need to pm me twice yr!. Pm on IF is suffice no need for fb msgs:-)


Dii.. i didn't got it.. FF forum?????? do 1 thing.. FB pe samjhao..plz
BTW ty 4 liking:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...update dear ..
pyaar ki shuruat ho chuki hai ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww superb update..
continue soon...
cant wait...


jyothi
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww
she is ll
he is angry ufff
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved the update...
well building up the suspense abt her life...
quite eager to know abt her...
liking maan's restlessness...
so geet doesnt like mushrooms...
waiting for the next update...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... continue sooon... 😊 thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... continue sooon 😊 thanx for the PM

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