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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivikasavvy

aesa kya hone wala hai ki maan is tensed for geet ...


u will get to know.. wait 4 sum time..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

awsome yaar ..precap sounds intersting !!

geet gonna be miss or kidnapped or something like that ???


Yaa.. kind of.. wait 4 sum time.. u will get 2 know..
BTW thns 4 liking it..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
really i loved the way
he want to see geet on sundays also
hey give liitle big plsss
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Posted: 14 years ago
U updated today:-) where were u kal? N delhi ki no burai haan... Metro le leti traffic tha to:-P anyway gr8 part... N precap seems good 2!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
so this dhust danav sunday ko bhi bicari ko nahi chodta
like that geet answer "sssir.. Delhi me kahin bhi half an hour me pahuchna n wo bhi sun ko is not possible..
some one is answering back to mr.maan singh khurana.gr8 geet
hye update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
❤️❤️ loved it ❤️❤️
😆😆maan- mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...
geet-aap se bura koi ho bhi nahi sakta😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely ff...

just read all the parts...

do add me to ur PM list...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita21992

U updated today:-) where were u kal? N delhi ki no burai haan... Metro le leti traffic tha to:-P anyway gr8 part... N precap seems good 2!


thanks 4 liking it.. n m too frm Delhi.. so delhi ki burai thodi naa karungi.. but Maan ko batana to tha naa dat sun ko kaam nahi karna chahiyye:P
n kal dere was sum net prob so didn't updated..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 6

They discussed the project.. it was 7 now..

They both got ready to leave..

They stepped out of the office together.. Maan went towards his car.. n Geet was thinking that how will she get a cab this late.. how will she go back.. she was already too tired to walk n go.. n dat wud b really a walk.. it cud take 1 hr n it wud not be safe..

Maan saw Geet lost in her thoughts.. He called her.. she didn't listened..

He went near her.. n called her name so softly..

Geet: Ji.. she wondered can he speak softly too!!

Maan: Geet.. tumhari car kahan hai.. how will u go home..

Geet: Sssrir.. mere paas car nahi hai..

Maan: Kyaa u don't have a car.. then how do u come 2 office..??

Geet: Cab se..

Maan: Oh God Geet.. tumhe bolna tha naa.. now how will u go back.. abb to koi cab bhi nahi milega..

Geet: sir u don't worry.. cab mil jayega opr I'll go back walking..

Maan: are u mad.. walking.. chalo.. meri car me betho.. I'll drop u..

Geet: Nahi sir I'll go.. she was sounding weak.. Maan got worried for her ( Maan worried!! n dat too for geet!! OMG he is really falling for her!!!!)

Maan: geet chalo mere saath.. he was arrogant..

Geet thought.. abhi toh itne pyaar se bol rahe the.. abb phir dudht danav ban gaye.. umm mai kyun jayun inke saath.. aur vaise bhi wo pakka jhoota concern dikha rahe hain.. haan.. natak kar rahe hain.. why wud he be worried for mee!!

Maan: Geeettt.. kyaaa soch rahi hoo.. chalo..

Geet: Nnnahi ssir.. mai.. She couldn't complete.. she fainted..

Maan: Geeettt He got scared!! (MSK scared!!!)

He catched her.. before she cud fall.. He took her in his arms n carried her to the car..

He made her sit on the seat..

Maan: Geet.. Geet.. utho utho Geet.. plz utho..

She didn't respond.. He was worried.. really worried.. tensed.. wat happ to her.. why did she fainted.. was she ill.. n I called her to office.. Oh God.. wat did I did.. yeh sab meri wajah se huya hai..

Maan: Geet.. utho plz utho.. agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to I'll die..

He repeated wat he said I'll die.. yeh mai kyaa bol raha hun.. he thought.. why wud I die if anything happ to her.. Oh God Geet tum mujhe pagal kardogi!!

He drove the car furiously n reached khurana Mansion..

KHURANA MANSION

Dadimaa saw Maan carrying sum girl.. she rushed to him..

Dadimaa: Maan bete.. yeh kaun hain.. aur kyaa hua inhe..

Maan: Dadimaa mai aapko baad me sab batata hun.. first u plz call dr..

Dadimaa: Theek hai bete.. hum abhi dr ko call karte hain..

Maan took Geet to his room n made her lie on his bed.. dadimaa called the dr n rushed to his room..

MAAN'S ROOM

Dadimaa: Maan bete.. dr abhi aa rahe hain.. lekin aap hume bateye to sahi.. yeh kaun hain.. aur kyaa hau inhe..

Man told her everything.. bout Geet n wat happ to her.. even his guilt that he was feeling except his emotions BTW did he had any emotions.. not until now.. not until Geet came in his life.. His thoughts were disturbed wend r came..

Dr checked Geet..

Dr: Everything is ok Mr Khurana.. I think she has not eaten anything.. dats why.. Aap thodi der inhe sone dijiye.. wen she get up.. make her eat something.. she will be fine..

Maan: Thanku dr..

Two hours passed.. Geet was still sleeping.. Maan was sitting near her.. holding her hand (why was he holding her hand.. he didn't knew.. but he wanted to.. he wanted her near him.. why.. he didn't knew.. he just wanted.. He was feeling something.. wen she was in front of him.. something dat he couldn't name..Ek kasak si thi.. jo kasak wo samajh nahi paa raha tha..)

Finally Geet opened her eyes.. she saw Maan near her.. holding her hand.. she tried to get up.. Maan stopped her n his eyes said it all.. she knew he was worried.. tensed.. n that too for her.. she felt guilty.. she was not able to see his eyes tensed.. why she thought..

Geet: I'm sorry sir.. wo

He put his fingers on her lips..

Maan: Shh.. tumhe kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai.. actually I shud b sorry.. meri wajha se tum.. she interrupted ..

Geet: Nahi sir.. aapki wajah se kuch nahi hua..

Maan: Did u had ur lunch today..??

Geet: Woh.. mai.. woh.. nnnahi

Maan: Kyun Geet.. why r u so careless.. naa kam pe dhyan hota hai aur naa hi apni health pe.. can u ever take care of yourself..

Geet: Mai kaise rakhun apna dhyan khud.. mujhe mamma chayiye.. aap bhi naa.. yaad diladi mujhe mamma ki.. she started crying..

Maan thought why is she behaving like this.. but then.. she is Geet can do anything..!

He was not able to see the tears in those eyes.. he was becoming more n more tensed now.. why is she behaving like this..

Maan: Geet.. tum ro kyun rahi ho.. if u miss ur family.. to tumhe unke paas jana chahiye naa..

She started sobbing more n more..

Maan: Kyaa hua Geet.. tum.. tum.. plz mat royo naa..

She suddenly realized that she shud not behave like this.. he wud ask her about her family n then she wud hav to tell him.. n maybe she wud say that truth.. the truth dat nobody know.. She stopped crying n said: Maan sir.. plz mujhe ghar jaana hai..

Maan: Geet.. ghar chali jaana.. I'll drop u.. leking pehle chalo.. dinner kar lo..

Geet: Sssir.. mmai.. ghar jake kar lungi..

Maan: Geet.. why can't u listen to mee.. maine kaha naa abhi toh abhi.. chalo abb..

Geet: Acha mai kar lungi.. but plz yahin par..

Maan: Theek hai..mai abhi lekar aata hun..

Geet nodded: ok

He left the room making her lost in her thoughts..

PRECAP

Maan missing Geet.. is he feeling something.. but wat!!!


Part 7

Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago

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