An os kya pyar karoge mujhse last part pg117 - Page 23

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ok thanks for the people who pressed like button and also thaks for those who are silent readers i am very happy for your support
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ok guys irrespective of your comments irrespective of everything i am going to update my oses now and then because by next month end i will leave IF and i want to complete my FFs before I leave in this OS the main story has not yet started it is still in starting stage i require more than a month even if i update thrice a week so guys please dont feel sad if i provide less mayur or sajan scenes because as the story proceeds focus will move from one pair to other and i cant write extra scenes because I dont have time for main scenes so please dont feel bad here is my next update hope you like it
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part 11
Mayank and his friends search for nupur every where actually he came to pick them up so they cant leave him alone and they go with him atlast they reach shergil house

Sam and adhi are worried for nupur when sam sees mayank alone his fear increases

S-mayank nupur kahaan hain tumhare saath thi na woh phone kyun nahin uta rahin woh teek hain na tum kuch bol kyun nahin rahe ho

M- mujhe bhi pata nahin nupur kahaan hain

S-kaise nahin pata hamesha use apne saath lekar ghumte ho humne tumhare bharose use choda hain mujhe meri behen chahiye abhi isi waqt agar use kuch hua toh main tumhein nahin chodunga its my promise

M-sam main samaj sakta hun ki tum kitna pareshan ho main bhi utna hi pareshan hoon par mujhe sach main nahin pata nupur kahaan hain tum toh jaante ho na use bina bataye jaane ki aadat hain hamesha ri shut yeh mujhe pehle kyun nahin strike hua zaroor ridzi ke saath hogi

S-ridzi kaun

M-nupur ki best friend daily evening nupur usse milne pucca jaati hain

(he calls ridima)

M-hello ridzi main mayank nupur tumhare saath hain kya

Ri-mayank nupur (she starts crying)

M-tum ro kyun rahin ho kya hua nupur ko woh teek toh hain na

Ri-mayank nupur ka accident hua hain main use lekar city hospital main hoon tum jaldi aajao

M-wat

(listening to that he is shocked he drops the phone)

Armaan goes to mayank

Ar-kya hua sab teek toh hain na

M-nupur ka accident hua hain humein abhi isi waqt city hospital jaana hoga (he has tears in his eyes he runs to the car armaan goes with him he drives the car because mayank was not in position to drive car)

On other side sam is also in same position adhi has tears but sams position is worst he is not even crying he just want to see nupur right now

All reach hospital

Ridzi hugs mayank and starts crying

Ri-mayank woh

Flash back

Nupur went to meet ridzi she takes ridzi out both sit in caf have some gossip while returning nupur was about to start her bike she sees a small kid crossing the road a car was coming in that direction she goes to save that kid and car hits nupur

Sayanks position is critical they only know how they are feeling

After one hour doctor comes out and says that she is safe

Everyone go inside to meet nupur and talk to her

Sayank give a big lecture to nupur first time in life they were supporting each other

But after accident mayank didn't meet nupur for two days and suddenly she comes to know that he is leaving to US very soon

She is crying sitting on bed

Suhaani , gunjan and mayank friends come there

Sayank, adhi are talking to doctor

Su-kya hua tum ro kyun rahi ho

N-mayank mujhe chod kar US jaa raha hain

G-par use kuch zaroori kaam hain isiliye jaana pad raha hain waapas aajayega na

N-agar usne wahaan kisi ladki se shaadhi kar lit oh tab main kya karoongi

Su-nupur tum paagal ho gayi ho woh kaam se US jaa raha hain shaadi karne nahin waise bhi next month tum dono ki shaadi hain tab tak aajayega

N-agar nahin aaya toh main kuch nahin jaanti mujhe mayank ke saath US jaana hain

G-par aise kaise ho sakta hain tum dono ki shaadhi ab tak nahin hui hain

N-toh kya hua shaadhi karke jayenge

G-par nupur abhi toh tum hospital se discharge bhi nahin hui ho aur abhi itni jaldi shaadhi tumhare bhai nahin maanenge

N-main kuch nahin jaanti tum dono unhe manaoge warna dekho main kya karti hun

G-tum khud pooch humein kyun beech main laa rahi ho

N-kyunki tum meri bhabhi ho aur meri icha puri karna tum dono ka farz hain

G-par nupur

(just den sayank and adhi enter)

S-kya baatein ho rahi hain

N-kuch bhi toh nahin(nupur looks at gunjan to talk but she says no in anger nupur removes the blood syringe)

S-nupur tum yeh kya kar rahi ho

N-mujhe kuch nahin chahiye jab tum logo ko meri parvah nahin hain toh jeeyu ya maru koi faraq nahin padta

S(he cups her face)-tum yeh kaisi baatein kar rahi ho kisine tumse kuch kahaan kya

N-nahin par main jaanti hun ki kisiko meri parvah nahin hain(looking at mayank)

S-mayank ne kya kiya mujhe batao main usse baat karoonga

N-mayank mujhe chod kar US jaa raha hain

M-toh baat yeh hain isiliye itna gussa actually main batane waala tha par isse pehle tumne itna bada hungama khada kar diya US main akele nahin tum bhi mere saath jaogi

N-sach main

S-nupur tumhare saath nahin jayegi tum shaadi ke baad use jahaan chahe lejao par shaadhi hone tak nupur yehi rahegi

M-main nupur ko shaadhi kar ke hi lejaonga

S-matlab tum kehna kya chahte ho

M-main jald se jald nupur se shaadhi karna chahta hun

S-tumhari shaadhi ki date next month fix hui hain

M-shaadhi prepond bhi toh ho sakti hain

S-mayank saaf saaf batao problem kya hain

M-mujhe mahino ke liye US jaana padega kuch zaroori kaam hain isiliye main nupur se jald se jald nupur se shaadhi karke use apne saath lejaana chahta hun

S-par shaadhi tumhare lautne ke baad ho sakta hain

M-jaanta hun par main nupur ko chod kar nahin jaana chahta isiliye main mere jaane se pehle shaadhi karoonga

S-main iske liye tayyar nahin hun

M-sam please mana mat karo samajne ki koshish karo main iswaqt isse jyada aur kuch samja nahin sakta

(sam accepts and nupur was on cloud nine nupur was discharged next day from hospital and in a week marriage was going to be held )

Three days before marriage nupur was not in house suhaani searches for her whole house and atlast calls mayank.

Su-Mayank nupur kahaan shaadhi main teen din hain uske baad woh tere saath rahegi tab tak toh use hamare saath rehne do

M-nupur mere saath nahin hain par jaanta hun kahaan hogi main use lekar aata hun

(he calls ridzi)

N-kiska phone hain mayank ka agar wohi hain toh use mat batana main tumhare saath hun warna aake meri lmbi class lega

Ri-hello

M-hello ridzi tumhari pyari dost kahaan hain kaise doctor ho tum use rest karne ke liye kehna chodke use apne saath lekar ghum rahi ho

Ri-tum use jaante ho na woh kisiki sunti kahaan hain

M-waise tum dono ho kahaan caf main

Ri-haan

M-main abhi aaraha hun

Ri-ok

N-kya kaha usne

Ri-kuch nahin coffee piyo

N-yeh mayank bhi na pata nahin khud ko kya samajta hain but I am hppy usne ghar waalo ko shaadhi ke liye manaya warna main toh darr gayi thi ki kahin US jaake koi aur ladki dundega toh main kya karoongi

M-i think that idea is better

N-tum yehaan ridzi tumne ise kyun bataya ki main yehaan hun

M-use bataae ki zaroorat nahin hain main ache se jaanta hun ki tum yehi rahogi tumhein zaraa bhi akal hain abhi tak tumhare chot puri tarah se bare bhi nahin baahar ghumna shuru kiya tumhein ghar main rest karne ke liye kahaan tha is tarah baahar ghumne ke liye nahin

N-ghar main bait ke bore ho rahi thi isiliye yeha aayi hun tum sab ke sab busy ho kisike paas mere liye time nahin hain

M-nupur sab shaadhi ke liye busy hain achanak shaadhi matlab sabki yehi position hogi

N-par mayank

M-tumhein shaadhi karni hain na

(she nods head)

M-isiliye hum tumhein time nahin de paa rahe ab chup chap mere saath ghar chalo

(they leave ridzi at her home nupur is still dull)

M-kya hua nupur

N-tum aaj kal mere saath time nahin spend kar rahe ho hamesha busy rehte ho jab main hospital main thi tab bhi mujhse milne nahin aaye

M-uske liye sorry mujhe bahut zaroori kaam tha

N-mujhse bhi jyada

M-woh kaam tumhare liye tha

N-matlab

M-woh sab chodo tumne medicines liye

(she nods saying yes)

M-that's good ab main tumhein ghar chod kar office jaonga mujhe office main zaroori kaam hain

N-mujhe ice cream khana hain

M-kya

N-haan

(he smiles and brings her icecream)

(she smiles and takes it he kisses her forehead)

M-tum sach main paagal ho

N-jaanthi hoon

(he drop her home)

After tthree days mayor marriage occurred with all the rituals

In mayur room

Nupur is standing at window he goes near her

M-kya hua kya soch rahi ho

N-tumhare bare main aisa lag raha hain mujhe mera life waapas mil gaya hain mujhe aur kuch nahin chahiye ab mujhe marna bhi hoga na haste hue maroongi

(he puts finger on her lips)

M-stop it nupur don't use such words

N-main mazak kar rahi

M-phir bhi abhi hamari shaadhi hui hain tumhein aise baatein nahin karni chahiye mujhe acha nahin lagega

N-sorry phir kabhi nahin kahoongi love you

(she hugs him)

M-love you too (he has tears in his eyes)

N-mayank waise tumhein achanak US kyun jaana pad raha hain'

M-honeymoon ke liye

(she starts blushing)

(he covers her lips before she could say anything)

part12

Edited by --unknown-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
mayur ki shadi ho gayi...wow
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...superb...
mayur scenes yipee...
thanx for pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago

mindblowing update👏 sad to hear that u will leave if next month😭will miss u a lot

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Posted: 14 years ago
part was very nice :)
loved it too :P
but shadi ho gayi now she is going to US n koi bhi sanu scn nahi :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mayur weeded yippee
I am so happy
I loved Nautanki Nupur
Thanks for Pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was so nice i really like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Nupu met accident
thnax GOD she is fine
Wow mayur got married- yeee i m really very happy for them
loved mayur very much
nice part
keep it up

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