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Posted: 14 years ago

This Update Is Entirely Dedicated To Desigirl144, and all my readers who have supported my by reading this FF, who Wanted Me to update again...

Desigirl144 now you have to update Both your FF's Lol :P

Quick I'm Waiting... :)

Lol :P

Anyway xxx Enjoy Guys...

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thanks x


Chapter 11

Geet was in her bedroom' after that long talk she had with kajol she decided she should think about it herself as she was getting a little worried' she went to the wardrobe and opened it' she then got out a picture of a small chubby boy' (guys think the short chubby Rohan From Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham)

She sat on her bed and looked at the photo' stroking the photo she started talking to him'.

Geet ' Ladooo'. Guess what'. I'm well happy today' Kajol's back' well she came back ages ago but I've seen her after a long time'. Or ladoo do you know what she said' that I have started liking Maan' I Mean I can't'. that's wrong'. I love youu' not Maan' she started crying'.

I miss you ladoo'

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Maan was in the study' he made this room for his office work' he was typing away on the laptop when he suddenly felt something'. Something telling him that something was wrong' someone was hurt'. Someone was upset' his mind went straight to Geet'.

He wanted to know what was up with her.. she seemed upset' he could feel it' he could feel her crying and he wasn't with her' he needed to go upto her and hug her'

Instantly he grabbed his phone and walked into Vicky's Room'

Seeing Vicky not There He got vicky's phone which was on the bedside table' he got Geet's number out and rang Geet'.

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Seeing her phone flash Geet immediately put the photo down and picked the phone up and saw unknown number flashing and pressed the green button.

Geet tearfully ' Hello'

Maan was worried but he didn't want Geet to let know that'

Maan ' hello Geet' Kaise ho..

Geet was a bit confused now' wondering who was on the phone'

Geet ' kaun??

Maan ' oh sorry Geet.. Main Maan bol raha hoon'

Geet was a little bit relived now' knowing it was someone she knew'

Geet ' oh thank god''

Maan ' thank god?? Kyun??

Geet ' vo mujhe laga tha ki koi stalker hoga'

Maan ' Geet.. main stalker nahi ho.. waise bhi tum roh rahi thi kya??

Geet ' nahi she said immediately wiping her tears'

Maan ' jhoot mat bol Geet' Abhi tum apni asooo poch rahi thi'

Geet was shocked' Tumhe kaise pata??

Maan smirked' Mujhe Sab kuch pata hai..

Geet ' vo ba mujhe kisi ki yaad ah rahi thi'

Maan ' acha' kis ki'

Geet feels awkward' she immediately changes the subject'

Geet ' Vicky kaha hai' aur tumhe mera number kaise mila'

Maan ' vo Vicky bahar chalagiya aur tumhara number maine Vicky ki phone si liya.. usse pata nahi..

Geet ' acha' waise mujhe need arre hai' mujhe sona hai'

Maan ' teek eh Geet' Tum so joa'

Geet- bye Maan' Goodnight'

Maan ' Goodnight Geet.. Sweet Dreams'

Geet ' Sweet dreams Maan' she smiled and blushed as she cut the phone off and lay down on her bed' thinking about Maan.. it didn't bother her now' just for this ONE night she would think about Maan'.

She fell asleep..

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In the middle of delhi... bhai is busy getting things ready to launch'. This launch will be the biggest thing in bhai's life as it is something personal' he would get his revenge.. now knowing that this 'sister' goes to college he is waiting for the right time to spring'.

He has been keeping tabs on his enemy for ages' every time he thinks he knows his routine his enemy changes it' but not this time.. this time he will be there and this time he will get it right'..

He has got every detail of his enemy..

Its time to spring' he thought'.

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Radhe and Rahul were sat down'

There was something going on'. He knew it.. he could sense the danger coming' ever since this secret has been out he had a weird feeling regarding Geet.. even though his secret it only out with Three of Geet's friends. Radhe and Rahul knew it was not long now before someone comes looking for them'

Radhe ' Rahul mujhe Dar lag raha hai'

Rahul ' haan bhaiya mujhe bhi bohat daar lag raha hai'

Radhe ' pata nahi kyun mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki humme Geet ko kahi baj dena chahiya'.

Rahul ' Haan bhaiiiya'

Maan who is standing near the door hears everything'

He walks to Radhe and sits down'

Maan ' dekh yaar kuch nahi hoga Geet ko'. Hum usse kuch hone nahi dengeh'

Radhe ' lekin Maan' humme Bohat daar lag raha hai'

Maan started teasing him'

Maan ' Arre Delhi ka itna bara Don ko daar lag raha hai'

Rahul ' Dekh Bhai ko sirf ek baat ka daar hai'

Radhe ' aur vo Geet ko kone ka daar'. He said freaking out'

Rahul ' Dekh Maan humme Geet Ko Door Bajna Hoga' Aur Sirf Geet Ko Nahi Lekin Pinky Or Meera Ko Bhi'

Maan ' haan aur Saath Vicky or Sameer ko bhi'

Radhe looks confused'.

Maan ' vo unki dekhbal karengaa'

Radhe ' haan'

Maan ' Dekh Radhe Daadima Apni Dost ki pothay ki shaadi meh ja rahi hai next week or vo bhi USA 2 months ki liye kyun na hum Geet ko daadi ki saath baje' hmmm??? He waited for Radhe answer'

Radhe ' haan.. yeh teek raha ga'

Rahul lekin bhai kya vo jayengi kya'

Maan ' haan' main usse keh doanga' hmm' and if she doesn't agree Then Daadi ko Keh doanga'

Maan smiles'.

Precap '

Geet in danger??

Well guys you have to find out if she is in danger or if it's a false alarm'. In the next Few update Geet is going to be really brave and scared'Also in the next update you will get a flashback scene of Geet n Maan When they were younger... And will know how maan recognised his Mishti... <3😳

So Please no jutti's or chappals''

*run and hide under bed*

HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND PLEASE COMMENT' :)

<3

Edited by Nazmaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update::
Awww loved how maan was worried for geet
Ooh so maaneet loved each other from ther younger days,,maan recognised his mishti but how is geet gunna recognise her laddoo as he's changed from his childhood
Hope geets life is really not in danger
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Lovely update::
Awww loved how maan was worried for geet
Ooh so maaneet loved each other from ther younger days,,maan recognised his mishti but how is geet gunna recognise her laddoo as he's changed from his childhood
Hope geets life is really not in danger
Cont soon Xx...



Thanks...
Yeah Maan was worried...

Maan recognised his mishti... how can he not...
she the only sister Radhe has got and since him n radhe were childhood friends
Maan knew who she was... :)

Now Geet Has to remember him... but obviously she can't...
but Maan Can...

Don't worry this confusion will end soon...

i did this so you guys get a little something out of the updates so your not fed up with the twist... :)

x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: puth

nazmaa lovely update...



Thank you...
Sorry i've not replied to yours or anyones comments... :)
i've been busy ... :)
inshallah will start to comment ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part.
loved it.
maan worried for geet.
precap is scary and interesting.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...


continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome updates
part 10
love it
loved maaneet
sooo cute
loved maan nickname ladoo
cant wait 4 da twist
part 11
loved it
loved radhe
sooo sweet
loved maaneet
sooo adorable
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

AWWHHH... thankyouu for dedicating this to mee Nazmaa!!!😊 You are too sweet!😳
I loooved the update... and especially the phone conversation!!! I hope Geet and Maan realize that they are Ladoo and Mishtii! so sweet once again... and and.. I am updating BOTH my FF's and I'll dedicate those to you againn hehe
😆 Update soon and I might think about giving double updates 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan worried for geet
amazing part
love it
precap sounds scary
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww that was fantastic part
acually jst started to read one part lead to another
nd now m craving for more lol
Nd oooh maaneet loved eachother from childhood that's cute
finally maan recognized his mishty now can't wit till geet recognize him lol
jst hp that precap is jst a false alarm hehe

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