-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 - Page 71

muskan di???? what happned to u... too big note???? will read and then comment

Hi muskan, any chance of an update?

Dear Muskaan
m totally upset
infact ub tho mujhe pata chal gay hei ki mei pooori saal upset he rahoongi
because
i got fooled on my birthday ( that is on 31st may )
c ve been waiting for a complete 4 days & i dont get updates
seems like silver jubilee update is very expensive
please yaar reham karo

amazing parts, loved them

wow !!!!!!!!! dat amazing .. entire thing summarized so beautifully ...

She went down angrily only to meet a strange man claiming himself to be their bedi bahu's ex-husband. She looked at Geet's face for answers but she stood broken..scared now to face more pain. Yash held his collar & called the guards to throw him out.
Dev - throwing me out won't change the reality.. she was my wife, we were in love
yash - just leave.. she is our bahu u r talking about
dev - we were married for 3yrs before that.. ur son poisoned her innocent mind.
yash - just leave she is our bahu now..we don't want to know anything abt the past
dev - I am taking her with me
Daadi - for god's sake just leave us alone we just lost our grandchild

daadi
Priya held her hand & pushed her towards dev. Leading them towards the door.. just get out of our lives!! humne tumhe kitni izad di.. kitna pyar diya.. all u gave us in return is pain, betrayal. Maan ne tumhara kya begada? Kyun kiya uske saat aisa? Humne tumhara kya bigada tha? .. kyun aakir kyun?
Maan - koi isse kuch nahi kahen ge



Priya held maan's arm.. koi zarorat nahi tumhe yeh jhota rista nibhane ki.. dad ko main samjha doonghi.. I will call the lawyer & get u out of this mess.

Maan - enough mom ' enough!!

he looked painfully at his family.. na saat pheron se dil judthen hain...
he looked angrily at dev.. na chand kaza pe sign karne se rishten thothen hain..
he walks down the steps towards Geet & holds her hand.. slowly slips his fingers into hers.. tugs her closer.. yeh hum patti patni ki bech ki baat hain.. we know how to sort it out. His touch was so comforting.. she wished if she could just die that very moment in his arms.




She packs her dress .. she knew, he deserved a better life.. a better life partner. He was angry at her but not even shouting at her because.. he probably lost his hope on her, she thought. She didn't know wat right she had any more on him to stay back. She has not taken care of his love with in her.. she has never reciprocated to him in any way to justify his feelings.. then why why would he want her in his life. .. babaji had made her destiny like that!!!.. but she didn't want to give him pain any more... she wanted to relief him of all the misery. She carried her suitcase & walked pass him.. he stood numb!!!








his anger on self didn't let him form those letters into words .. aching ' his soul..cried...giving in to his love.. matjavoo

I am sorry..I shouldn't have left u alone their.. I am really sorry he fell on his knees.. holding her hand that hung next to her sides... kissed them.. her hands felt drenched in his tears drenching her heart.. I am sorry.. I couldn't take care of our baby.



mujhe chod ke mat javoo.. main tumhare bina jee nahi sakta..he inched closer on his knees.
She immediately sat on her knees & hugged him.
Main jaan tha hoon..it was pain in love that forced me to seduce you, take you into my world, mold and console you...but trust me it is love that emotional bond that holds me to you.
She looked at him in awe... she knew it he loves her.. but even now.. to this extend..her heart felt heavy hearing those words. She couldn't stop herself falling for this unconditional love.
I don't want pain to be the way you walked out of my life.
She shook her head & pulled him closer.. gesture promising enough to never leave.
They lifelessly hung on to each other.. consoling the wounded souls... soon his hug turned their envelope into a intense moment & they lost themselves..& they did! they made love like never before. His touched every bit of her ..claiming her.. his tears drenched her..as her soul was soaked in his love.





updates

but yeh kya yeh bhi end

muski plzz update this too

plz update the next part soon

muski you are updating...???


I always miss your updating status... busy dear.. thats y..

please update soon dear..

waiting waiting..

-Ehtesaab-
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Maan didn't know this is wat she is been working so hard for. He cursed himself to be here. He immediately called Adi to change the business plan.. she immediately looked at him.. & shook her head. He never wanted to stand in front of her as a competitor.. he was beside her.. he hated the destiny yet again.. to put him in a situation like this. This was an impt deal for him.. but definitely not as impt as it would be to her!!

after a small break the final announcement was made..
the US firm was willing to take over geets s/w but her firm was to small to support their requirement. The next best option was Dev's & Maan's.. KT was too huge a IT company.. so off course KT was the best option. But they couldn't deny the quality support they have been getting from MT for so many years. It was a bit tricky situation.
They firm decided to work with all the three companies.
Geets s/w getting accepted over Dev's. But the service from both MT & KT.

As they all moved to sign the deal..geet held maans hand. Maan felt her hand was warm.. he looked at the grip.. & looked at her. He just nodded in acceptance. She didn't even had to say wat she wanted.. he just walked out holding her hand..texting adhi the next move.
adhi smartly refused the deal granting the whole deal to MT..to dev

Her kiss was all Maan wanted.. it said it all.. those words he was wanting to see in those eyes.. hear from her lips.. she said it all.. her heart was only filed with him.. only him.. when her heart was deserted just full of grief and sorrow he had come along defending her firmly & wonderfully defeating the suffering. Maan triumphed over the suffering making them go away silently without any struggle..which seemed so effortless.. though she knew.. all the while how he felt deep inside!! still in a hidden unharmed way he ended them all...she knew he was her everything!!

They reached home to find the whole KM was beautifully decorated for their first wedding anniversary celbration. Maan was unaware of this pleasant surprise from his wife. Though he had no complains. The whole family was happy to see Geet looking happy & enjoying with them. Maan still couldn't believe she actually arranged all this. He shook his head & went to the room.
Geet closed the door at his face.. ek min

he cupped her face.. she shied.. turning pink.. he took those lips in .. I love u ..she said it in the kiss.. he chuckled.. & pulled her closer. ..love u too.. tears well down her eyes.. he let her cry.. ..long after the night had passed.. he caressed her empty stomach & shed tears.. silently.. so did she!!.. he knew this was the last time he was letting her cry... no more ehtesaab!!

It was the their baby's death anniversary. Both Maan & Geet went to the place were they buried their heart.. it was painful. It felt like only yesterday that they heard the news, they could clearly remember how their family were in rejoice. Tears didn't stop streaming down their face,.. the angel that got them together.. his realization of love.. her realization of truth..reality.. that she denied!! they hugged & cried.. Geet slowly took his hand & rested it on her stomach.. & hugged him again.. now in happiness... he jerked & pulled her away to see her face.. & nodded questioning her.. she blushed & looked down..
thank u thank u.. thank u.. he kissed her... million times... & gave a million kisses to her stomach.

He carried her home.. screaming in joy!!!
mama.. dad!!! mama..dad!!!!
he turned her around.. all of them came running to the hall..
he screamed.. main papa!!! mama.. mama.. he shook priya.. & then hugged yash...
they all rejoiced yet again..

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