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29priya

@29priya

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#131

awesome part yar...
loved it...
i hope nupur anurag ko kuch na bata de...
aur mayank ki bat sunle...
thnx 4 d pm...
cont soon...

get well soon and
take care...

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RoohPay

@RoohPay

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#132

hey nautanki ,lol
such a rocking update.!!
(after reading ur update everytym i get confirmed dat u r nt 17...lollzz)
cant wait 4 the next!
Thnx 4 pm.!
Take care of ur health..ok?
Payal_

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#133

Awesome update, Mayank is so in love with her...Beautiful update...Nupur-Anurag's relation is very sweet, if something happens to oen the other is worried and vice versa... its a sweet sibling bond..

For Mayank-Nupur Looks like a big argument coming up as Mayank's occupation is revealed...Now I'm very curious to know Nupur's reaction, I think she will understand Mayank and don't tell Anurag as of yet... but awesome update Bidz, very well written...Continue soon..

-Laiba

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

wow lovely part

mayur moments were nice'

beautiful song

thanks for the pm

do continue soon'

thanks for the pm😊

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#135

awesome update

thanks 4 the pm

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#136

Chapter Seven

Mayank ran after Nupur and grabbed her wrist. Nupur turned to Mayank and stared angrily.

Nupur [angrily]: Mayank, chodiye mujhe.
Mayank [pleads]: Nupur, ek bar meri baat toh sun.

Nupur moved away her hand like a storm.

Nupur [angrily]: Baat? Kya baat sunu? Aab sunne ko aur kuch baaki hai kya? Main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi ke aap aisa niklenge. Itni badi baat chupaakar aap kaunsi dosti niva rahe the?
Mayank: Nupur, main tujhe sacchai bataane hi waala tha..
Nupur: Bas! Mujhe aur koi baat nahin sunni.

Saying that, Nupur turned away and started walking straight going away from Mayank. Mayank looked at Nupur sadly.

Mayank: Tune agar mere ko ek pal ke liye bhi dost manaa hai toh please rukjaa.

Nupur stopped. After a while, she turned back.

Mayank: Maine tujhe sacche maan se apna dost mana hai Nupur. Aur aaj ussi dosti ke khaatir main tujhe apni life ki sabse badi sacchai bataane jaa raha hoon.

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Anurag was lying on his bed with his hand on his forehead.

Anurag: Aaj itna sar dard kyun kar raha hai. Uff!

Taani entered with a trey of lunch, a bottle of medicine and a glass of water. She sat beside Anurag on a chair.

Taani: Teri sar dard ka ilaaj hai mere paas.
Anurag: Taani, tum?
Taani: Obviously, main! Tu kya parosi ko expect kar raha tha?
Anurag [laughing]: Arey! Mere matlab hai ke tum toh iss samay apne kaam par jaati ho, phir aaj ghar par?
Taani: Woh actually, Nupur ne jaate waqt kaha tha ki tera tabiyat kharab hai, iss liye main aaj yehi ruk gayi.

Anurag shook his head and smilingly said, "Yeh Nupur bhi naa!"

Taani: Accha aab yeh sab chod. Tu lunch karle, phir dawaai khaale. Tujhe aaram milega.
Anurag: Subha maine dawaai li thi par koi fark nahin padha.
Taani: Accha? Toh phir theek hai. Main tera sar daba deti hoon, agar tujhe koi problem naa ho toh.
Anurag [smilingly]: Problem? Nahin nahin! Mujhe koi problem nahin hai. Tum meri dost ho, so itna toh haq banta hai tumhara.

Taani smiled. She stood behind Anurag and started massaging his forehead. Anurag closed his eyes in pleasure. While massaging Anurag's forehead, Taani lowered her eyes and looked at him. The window was open, so a breeze of air came inside. Anurag's silky hairs were blowing and it came on his forehead. It made him so beautiful, when seen through Taani's eyes. Touching him was the best feeling, she thought. She felt shy and smiled. While massaging, she had the flashbacks of the moments she spent with him. She felt amazing. She felt like her world was completed.

Anurag: Bas! Aab rehene do. Tumhara haath bhi dard kar raha hoga.

Taani came back to reality.

"Jab bhi isko dekhti hoon, yeh kya ho jata hai mujhe? Iske saath jab reheti hoon tab kuch aur kyun nahin soch paati hoon? Oh god!" Taani thought and sighed.

Taani: Anurag, tu abhi lunch kar aur yeh dawaai le, main abhi aati hoon.

Anurag nodded. Taani left.

Taani said to herself, "Aab bas bohot ho gaya. Aab mujhe aakhri natije pe pohoch na hi hoga. Aur iske liye mujhe apne plan par concentrate karna hoga."

Saying that to herself, she took her phone and called someone.

Taani: Plan ka waqt ho gaya. Jaldi aaja. Main intezaar kar rahi hoon.

Saying that, she cut the call and said to herself with a mischievous smile, "Mr. Anurag Chatterjee, aab tera test lene ka waqt ho gaya hai. Ready rahena." Saying that, she smiled mischievously.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Mayank and Nupur were sitting beside a beach.

Mayank: Nupur, jab main 7 saal ka tha aur Taani 3 saal ki, tab humara maa-baap ne humhe ek bade se factory ke maalik ke paas bech diya. Zara soch Nupur, kuch paiso ke khaatir maa-baap ne apne baccho ko bech diya. Tab toh hum duniya-dari jaante bhi nahin the. Sara din bhuke pyaase kaam karte tha main. Lekin badle mein mujhe aur Taani ko kuch accha nahin milta tha. Milta tha toh sirf maar. Hum log maut se bhi battar zindagi ji rahe the. Mere ko koi taklif de toh mere ko manzur tha par Taani ko koi taklif pohoche yeh mere ko manzur nahin tha. Iss liye ek din main Taani ko lekar waha se bhaag gaya. Bohot dino tak hum uss sab se bhaagte rahe, aur phir shayad bhagwaan ko humpar taras aa gaya tha. Iss liye woh log giraftar ho gaye. Par yehi humari taklif khatam nahin huyi thi. Mere paas ek sabse badi responsibility thi.. Taani. Aur main kisi bhi halaat mein usse duniya ki saari khushi dena chahta tha. Uss ko woh sab dena tha jo woh chahe. Par paise kaha the humare paas? Iss liye mazburi mein mere ko woh banna padha jo main kabhi nahin chahta tha. Aise hi hum bade huye. Mere liye Taani meri duniya ban gayi aur usske liye main. Par ek din achanak destiny ne mere ko tujhse milaya. Tujhse milne ke baad, tujhse baat karne ke baad, mere ko aisa feel hua ke shayad mere life mein jo ek khaalipan hai woh bhar jaaye. Ek dost ka khaalipan! Aab yeh sab sunne ke baad agar phir bhi tu Anurag ko sab kuch batana chahti hai toh theek hai. Nahin rokunga main tujhe. Par haan, ek baat kehena chahta hoon. Bhale hi hum 2 din pehele mile hai par maine tujhe sacche maan se apna dost mana hai. Baki sab teri marzi. [after a pause] Main bike ke paas tera intezaar kar raha hoon.

Saying all these, Mayank left from there with tears in his eyes.

Nupur listened to Mayank. She had tears in her eyes. Till now, she thought that her sorrow of losing her parents cause of her was the biggest sorrow. But she was wrong. Mayank's sorrow had touched her heart. She couldn't do anything but believe Mayank. Mayank's eyes told her everything.

She wiped off her tears, stood up and left. She saw Mayank near his bike from a distance. He was crying silently. Nupur came near him. Seeing Nupur, Mayank wiped out his tears.

Mayank: Chal ghar chalte hai.

Saying that, he was about to sit on the bike when Nupur grabbed his wrist. He had an amazing feeling right then. He turned his face to Nupur. Tears were falling from his eyes. Nupur wiped out his tears and said smilingly, "Yeh dost apka saath kabhi nahi chodegi."

Hearing that, Mayank smiled. They became friends sometime before but seems like their friendship had taken a step ahead to a new level. Mayank trusted Nupur and told her everything about his life which only he and Taani knew till now. Mayank smiled thinking that there was no lie left between him and Nupur. He smiled thinking that he got a lifetime friend in his life. He smiled thinking that the girl, whom he was in love with, became his best friend and his partner of trust and loyalty.

Mayank and Nupur sat on the bike and left for home.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Anurag was lying on his bed with his eyes closed. Taani looked at Anurag from the doorway secretly and thought, "Sorry Anurag but mujhe yeh karna padhega."

Just then, a doorbell rang. Taani ran to the door and opened it. There stood a girl at the doorway who was wearing a mini skirt and a short top. Taani showed her a thumbs up sign. The girl smirked and went inside.

The girl went inside Anurag's room. Taani was a part of this scene from a corner. The girl sat beside Anurag and touched his cheek. Anurag opened his eyes in shock.

Anurag: Jee aap kaun? Aur aap mere kamre mein kya kar rahi hai?
The girl: Mera naam Sheela hai aur main tumse milne aayi hoon jaan.
Anurag [shocked]: Kya? Jaan? Kya bakwaas kar rahi hai aap? Aur kaun hai aap? [high tone] Taani, Taani!
Sheela: Taani ghar pe nahin hai Anurag. Aur tum itna chilla kyun rahe ho? Ek sexy ladki tumhari samne khadi hai aur tum aise react kar rahe ho? Cmon!

Saying that, Sheela came near Anurag and held his shoulders. Anurag moved her away like a storm.

Taani was a witness of all these scenes. She was trying hard to suppress her laughter.

Sheela: Cmon Anu! Itna bhi kya sharmana? Main tumhare itna paas hoon aur tum mujhe dekh bhi nahin rahe ho? Bas yeh nautanki bas karo aur chalo shuru ho jaao.
Anurag: Chee! Aap yeh kya bol rahi hai? Aap ko sharam nahin aati? Aap please chali jaaiye yaha se. Just get out!

Sheela smiled and started caressing Anurag's cheeks with her fingers. Anurag moved away her hand angrily and got up from bed.

Anurag: Kab se main bol raha hoon ke chali jaiye par aap hai ki sunti nahin. Kya problem kya hai aap ki?

Sheela walked around the bed and came near Anurag.

Sheela: Meri problem yeh hai ke tum mujhe bohot acche lagte ho aur main tumhare saath rahena chahti hoon.
Anurag: Oh god! Yeh kya musibat hai. Aur yeh Taani kaha gayi?

Taani stood there, trying her best to suppress her laughter and was thinking, "Aab shayad meri entry hai."

Taani entered into the room and acted as if she was unaware of all these.

Taani: Kya hua Anurag? Tu itna chilla kyun raha tha?
Anurag: Dekho naa yeh kaun aa gayi hai ghar mein.

Taani looked at the girl and was trying her best to suppress her laughter. She went near the girl and said, "Tu phir se yaha aa gayi? Teri himmat kaise hui yaha aane ki? Chali jaa yaha se."

Sheela left from there silently.

Anurag: Thank god ke tu thik time pe aa gayi. Waise yeh ladki kaun thi? Koi pagaal thi kya? Kitni weird behave kar rahi thi.
Taani: Haan yaar! Woh iss basti mein yeh ek pagaal hai jo sab ki ghar mein jaakar ulti sidhi harkatein karti hai. Lekin tu tension mat le. Woh yaha aab kabhi nahi aayegi.
Anurag: Accha theek hai! Anyways, main zara nahaake aata hoon. Tum please mere liye juice bana dogi?
Taani [smilingly]: Yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai? Abhi deti hoon.

Anurag went to the washroom.

Taani laughed to the extent. After some minutes of laughing, she thought in mind, "Iss plan mein toh tu pass ho gaya. Aab baari hai agli plan ki jo ki kal hogi." Saying that, she smirked.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Anurag and Taani were sitting on the couch and watching TV.

Anurag [worriedly]: Yeh Nupur abhi tak aayi kyun nahin?
Taani: Don't worry! Aa jayegi.

Mayank and Nupur entered. Taani went near Mayank and Anurag near Nupur. Anurag noticed Nupur's frown expressions and asked, "Nupur, tu itna udaas kyun hai? Aur teri audition ka kya hua?"

Mayank looked at Nupur shockingly. He thought in mind, "Kahin yeh Anurag ko sach bataa toh nahin degi? Agar Anurag ko sach pata chal gaya toh woh Nupur ko lekar chala jayega. Nahin! Nupur, please sacchai mat bataana."

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I hope you all liked the update. 😳

Waiting for your comments. 😊

And thanks for the previous comments everyone. 😃

Don't forget to press LIKE. 😉

Oh yeah, a promo will be updated tomorrow. 😃

Love.. Bidz 😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 15 years ago

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Anahita Nanda

@Fangirl_Annie

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#137

THE UPDATE WAS FANTASTIC...PLS CONTINUE SOON..!!!
ANU IS REALLY SWEET..!!!!
PLS UPDATE SOON.!!!

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Awesome updt. OMG!!! Mayank nTani ko bech dia parents ne :O hw could they :s feel bad for them ...waing for their lovestory ... M happy k nupur ne mayank pe trust kia, ek sache dost ki tarha. warna pata nahi kya ho jata... Mayank is very sweet, he dint hid anything to nupur...aur pyar me most imp thing is honesty, jo Mayur me hai...anu-tani scene is very nice...cute...d girl scene is awesom...too much hilarious...lolz...she s trying to seduce anurag, bt he is scared n calling tani...lolz...bechara bht nervous ho gaya tha...lolz. Beautiful updt...very well written...continue soon... Thanks for d pm.

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-Ripal-

@-Ripal-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#139

fab part

luved cute scene between taanu

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#140

Special Promo
Khatre Mein Hai Anurag Aur Mayank Ki Jaan

Mayank said to Nupur, "Nupur, main tujhse waada karta hoon ke main chori karna chod dunga." Nupur smiled hearing that.

Mayank said to his boss, "Maalik, main yeh kaam karna chod na chahta hoon. Aab yeh sab main nahin kar sakta." The boss replied, "Mayank, humare business ka ek rule hai ke iss mein log aate hai apni marzi se aur jaate hai sirf ek hi raaste se aur woh hai maut ka raasta." Mayank was shocked.

Nupur ran to Anurag and told him while crying, "Dada, Mayank ko bachaaiye warna woh log unhe maar daalenge." Anurag ran out of the house.

Mayank and Anurag were badly injured. Nupur and Taani were crying continuously.

Doctor told them, "Unn dono ka operation karna padhega jiske liye aap ko 50 thousand rupees jama karne honge." Nupur and Taani were shocked.

Such a huge amount is required for Mayank and Anurag's operation. How will Nupur and Taani manage that? Is this twist in their lives going to effect in their relationships? If yes then will it effect in a good way or a bad way? What has destiny stored for them? Stay tuned with "It's all Destiny" to know all the answers.

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Friends, I know I had told that I'll post the promo tomorrow but seriously, I am very impatient. So here's the promo. I know it's very shocking but hope you all will like it. Waiting for your comments. Please press LIKE! 😳

I know many of you are ready to kill me as I have put our heroes' lives in danger. So I'm running. 😆

Love.. Bidz 😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 15 years ago

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