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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi buddies,

Thank you very much for your lovely and hilarious comments. Loved them. I have replied to some of the comments. Sorry for not replying to each of you individually. Buddies, if you want a PM please either add me as your buddy or send me a pm request...143 sweethearts...Tonya

Part 15

Maan was busy at work for the whole day. Work gave him the much needed distraction from geet's thought. After a long day at work, maan returns to the mansion.

Maan is driving to the khurana mansion...

M: (st) what would have dadima done? She would have sent geet out of the mansion. Hena? Yes! Definitely she would have. I know dadima very well. She will never take risk in my case. But will geet leave the mansion that easily?. She is being so adamant and keeps on repeating her lies. She has definitely come with some intentions.. But what is that? ...chodo maan! Whatever may be the intentions, it doesn't matter to you. What i want ultimately is that geet should leave the mansion. I hate woman and there is no place for a woman in my life.

At Khurana Mansion @ 9.30pm

Maan enters inside and no one was there in the drawing room. So he leaves for his room.

@maan's bed room

Maan walks into his bed room and his eyes automatically start to search for geet. but she was not there.

M: where is she? She was not there in the drawing room also. Has she left the mansion? Acha hua. Hereafter i can be at peace

He leaves for washroom to get changed. After few minutes he comes back and looks around the room again

M: has she really left?

Maan realises that he keeps on thinking about geet. He lays flat on the bed and closes his eyes.

M: maan! Jyada math socho. This is for your own good

Maan opens his eyes

M: I hate women. I don't want any woman in my life. I don't want to know where did she come from and for what? i don't want to see her again

Maan again closes his eyes

M: yes! I don't want to see her again...forever

Immediately geet's face pops into his mind. Maan opens his eyes. He yells at himself

M: what the hell is happening to me? Maan! Now stop this nonsense

After a few seconds, he calms down and dosses off on the bed.

After some time, chandu knocks at maan's room door. Maan is still in semi- sleep. He couldn't open his eyes. Chandu keeps on knocking at the door. Maan's eyes are still closed

M: (says loudly) come in Geet. The door is open

Maan realises what he just said and he opens his eyes immediately and gets up from the bed with a jerk

M:(st) ye maine keh diya? Lekhin kyun?

Chandu hears what maan said and he is shocked

Chandu: (st) ye mera kan kya sun rahe hai? what did maan sir said just now? "come in Geet. The door is open"...that means...is he expecting geet madam to come to his room at this time? Ye kaise aadmi hai?. In the morning he asks her to leave the mansion. in the night he calls her to his bed room. Why is he behaving so cheaply? Chi chi... if the elder son of khurana khandan behaves like this, then what will happen to its reputation. Hey bhagvan khurana khandan ka ka izzat ko bacha lena.

M: (st) who is there at the door? Is it geet? Didn't she leave the mansion? Haan... It must be geet only

Maan gets down from the bed and walks to the door. His heart beat quickens in his each and every step towards to the door. Chandu is still knocking at the door

M: (shouts) geet! Why are you still knocking at the door. Meine kaha than a ki the door is open. Now stop it

Chandu:(st) hey bhagvan! Ye dadima ne mujhe kaha phas gaye? Ab maan sir is expecting for his wife. If he sees me at the door, he is going to kill me. Ab mein kya karu?

Maan opens the door suddenly and he didn't see that it is chandu who is standing at the door. Maan misunderstands that geet only is standing there so he grasps chandu's arm and pulls him inside the room. Chandu is shocked to death.

at the very right moment Jugnu mama comes there and notices that maan is pulling chandu inside his room

jugnu: (st) why maan is pulling chandu into his room at this time?

Jugnu mama remembers the Pee Loon moment at the breakfast table

Jugnu: (st) is maan and chandu are really like that? Hey bhagavan!

Jugnu mama almost faints at his thoughts

Inside maan's room...

Chandu: sir! Mein geet madam nai chandu hu

Maan realises what a blunder he just did and he is started at his action. Maan immediately releases chandu's hand with a jerk

M: (st) maan! Sach mein tum pagal hogaya kya? Ab chandu ka haath pakkad ne keliye kya zarurat tha? But... i thought i was geet. Waise bhi...ab geet ki haat pakkad ne ke liye kya zarurat tha?bolo maan! Kuch nai...hmmm... Kuch nai na? Phir tum yesa kyun kiya? Par...ab geet hain kahan?

Maan is lost in his thoughts and starring at chandu without blinking his eyes. Chandu is thinking that maan is going to punish him for his Pee loon song at the break fast

Chandu: (st) chandu beta! Aaj tho tum gaya? Ye maan sir ne aaj tume nai chodenge. Why on the earth you should sing pee loon song in front of him? But why maan sir is looking at me without blinking his eyes. Chandu gathers courage and speaks

Chandu: sirrr...mein geet madam nai hu.

Maan comes out of his thoughts

M: haan mujhe patha tha ki um geet nai ho

Chandu: then why did you pull me inside?

Maan is irritated by chandu's question and gives him a murderous look

M: chandu! Ye tum mera kamare me kya kar raha hu? (OMG!!!! Ye MSK bhi na? Ab bhi attitude)

Chandu: sir... aap ne mujhe...

M: chup bilkul chup

Chandu:...

M: ab jao yahan se

Jugnu mama overhears the conversation between maan and chandu and he is relieved.

Jug: (St) ye maan ke baare me mein ne kya kya soch liya? Jugnu tum bhina? Always jumping into conclusions. Maan bohat acha ladka hai. But why did he pull chandu into his room? Was maan expecting someone else at the door? But whom? geet?

Jugnu mama smiles at his thought

Jug :(st) i think, mere bacha maan is falling in love. Par itna jaldi? Sirf ek hi din me? Chalo jugnu... Who can refuse a pyari girl like geet? Yes! Geet is the one who can bring all the happiness in maan's life. Hey bhagavan! Let maan fall in love with geet

Jugnu smiles and leaves for drawing room

Inside maan's room

M: chandu! Get out

Chandu: sir dadima ne aapko bulaye

M: chandu! Tum ne suna nai maine kya kaha? Ab jao yahan se

Chandu: sir , par dadima...

M: get lost

Chandu turns to leave the room. When maan is about to shut the door chandu turns to maan

Chandu: sir! Dadima is calling you

Immediately after saying this chandu starts to run. Maan couldn't take chandu's torture anymore. So he closes his eyes in frustration and shouts

M: stop it

Chandu stops from running and turns to maan and notices that the latter's eyes are closed.

Chandu: (st)maan sir only told me get lost? Now why is he stopping me? what is he going to do now?

Maan opens his eyes and he is annoyed to see that chandu is still standing in front of him

M: i told you na ...get lost. Then why are you still here?

Chandu: par sir...aap ne kaha than a ki "Stop it"

Maan rolls his eyes

M: (st) ye stupid mera 'stop it ' ko yesa samaj gaya. He is being impossible

Chandu: boliyena sir, why did you say "stop it"? that is why i stopped

Maan gives chandu a stern look and he himself leaves for drawing room leaving chandu confused.

Chandu: (st) pata nai ye maan sir ko kya hogaya?

M: (st)patha nai ki ye geet kahan chali gayi!

Edited by tonyahk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Maan sach me pagal ho gaya hai...
poor chandu...what he has to go through ...in Geet & maan's lover story

Edited by muskaan... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan is defo gone mad ... 😆


hopehot thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update
instead of maaneet i m loving maandu 😆
keep it up i love this ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesoem udpate dear
loved it...uff lagta hai maan sach much main pagal ho gaya hai
lakh kosish karne ke baad bhi uski gadi Geet pe hi ake rukti hai
love MaanDu scene
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor Maan
Poor Chandu
Where is Geet??😲
The suspense is killing me😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
loving maans desperation 4 geet...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ek part mein Geet nahi hai toh dekho Maan ka kyal hogaya...aur waise bhi Tonya,yeh Geet hai kahan??
Edited by Saams - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome.Maan has gone mad...
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan has gone mad really 😆
where is geet...is she in outhouse????????🤔
Edited by -memorable- - 14 years ago

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