~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 4 - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

824

Views

332.6k

Users

217

Likes

3.8k

Frequent Posters

MystiqueDew thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#21
sarzah thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Congrats for the new thread...now waiting for an update!!!😊
MystiqueDew thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#23
MystiqueDew thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#24
PoojaMishty thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Aarthi_01 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago
#26
di congo for the new thread... and loved the last part...
18mypride thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#27

😛

👏👏👏👏 congrats ... wow dekhte dekhte ek aur naya thread...👏👏👏👏👏
Be.edgy thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Congrats on the New thread ..
libra25 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#29
congrats for the new thread...
muskanp thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 14 years ago
#30

~maitri~
28

Maan - I am not lazy bum
lazy bum lazy bum..lazy bum lazy bum
she ran behind chasing him.

*******************
Geet spoke to darji holding his hand. He gave a weak smile & blessed her. Later Brij drove them to handa hawli. This was the first time Maan was ever coming to her house. It really felt special. Though he knew each one of them personally. But had never met anyone except veerji. But the whole family even today treated him like a family member. Especially Rano, she really loved him, actually she used to speak to him more than to geet. Wow Geet was super jealous of that. She would always crib meri mama hain & he would love to tease. Thai ji was funny she always wanted Maan to marry Geet then. Rano patted maan's cheek.. I think u have list wt. He smiled & took her blessing. Thi ji teased mera nahi logen..sirf sasu ma ka. He was tickled now with the thought & took her blessings.


Geet hugged Rano & cried.
Rano - yeh kya hal bana rahka hain?
Thai ji - Geet puttar darji teehk hain
she couldn't control herself & went into the room.

Later at night after dinner. Rano went to talk to Geet.
Geet - yeh sab aachanak kaisen ho gaya?
Rano - tum tho unhe jaanthi ho.. he is always worried about ur wedding
Geet - mama I don' t want to talk about it..she snapped & turned to leave
Rano - aakhir kab taak Geet? Bhool kyun nahi jaathi usko..
Geet cried & ran away to the terrace. She saw Maan on the way, she cried even more hiding her tears.
Dodo kya huwa tujhe...she just ran past him..leaving him puzzled. he heard Rano screaming Geet sun tho beta painfuly.
Maan went to Rano. he worriedly asked kya huwa dodo ko?
Rano very sadly broke down to him - tumse kya chupa hain beta
he looked painfully at her, bit confused
Rano - actually darji iski shaadi ko lekar pareshan hain
he was feeling little conscious.
Rano - lekin yeh maan hi nahi hai hain
he had a naughty thought in mind..thank God!!!
Rano - pata nahi kis se pyar karthi hain.
He was shocked ..his dodo loves someone!!!
Rano - tumhe pata hain kya
he was blank, he felt like his heart was crushed into pieces. His eyes burned. He didn't understand anything, why he felt so hurt.
He weakly shook his head.. it felt for that moment he didn't know her dodo at all
Rano - tumhe kaisen nahi pata? Tumhare college ka hi hain.
Another big shock. All the while she was involved with someone else & he wasn't aware of it. No thats not possible.. he was dam sure she wasn't ... Nahi aunty woh shayad Masters main uske saat pata hoga.
Rano - pata nahi beta, koi tho hain jiske liya yeh mari jaa rahi hain. Its been so many years he left her.
He was getting furious now, how can anyone hurt his dodo.
Rano - duniya bharke vada karke chala gaya
Geet retorted - main ne kaha hain aap se aisen koi baat nahi hain..usne koi vada nahi kiya
Rano yelled - phir kya baat hain.. why can't u get married to him? Do u even know where he is? if u can't then why can't u move on, when u know he never promised anything
geet didn't want to look up..her eyes would have helplessly looked at Maan. But she kept quiet.
Rano turned to Maan - dehka beta aisen hi chup rah thi hain. Agar usne koi vada nahi kiya tho yeh kyun uska indzar kar rahi hain.
Maan was fearing to even look into those eyes. He felt his heart may break into pieces just seeing that eyes filled with love for someone else. Just hearing her defend that guy was killing him deep with in. he didn't want to hear anything like that ever in his life. He didn't know why he was hating it all. Above that the fact that ..that someone hurt her, left her, cheated her.
Rano shook Maan - tumhare bharosa hi maine issen choda tha. Kanha challen gayen then tum
Geet yells mama!!
he felt himself responsible for his dodo's shattered life
Rano - tum saath the isseliyen tho we agreed for her PG in US.
How cold break ur promise Maan??
he felt defeated yet again by his life. All his discussion were wrong. Every thing he did was wrong. Wat hurt him the most was..not only did he scar his life but scared his most prized position. He knew his dodo was nave, she couldn't have managed alone in US. Oh god she couldn't manage in Bangalore..how the hell she would have managed in US.. definitely someone would have took advantage of her innocence he cursed himself. His heart felt heavy as he stood helplessly infront of them. Geet was still not liking the idea of accusing that someone..he wondered how innocent she was still.

~BLOG maitri 28~
Precap
Maan dropped out of MS
-PREV NEXT PART 29-
thanxs a lot for all the comments
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".