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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 31:
"I'm sure you were dreaming Mr.Khurana", Maan shot Geet daggers as she said this.
Geet glared back at Maan.
She had come to office after four days, though the doctor still recommended rest, she had refused to stay home.
Maan had been creating a ruckus in the office of Handa & Garewal Constructions, and it had been getting impossible to handle him, even for Rahul who was the co-owner.
And Geet very well knew why he was doing this.
Office was the only place he could meet her, hence, he was doing everything in his power to get her there.
He had been throwing tantrums, making life miserable for her staff, and accusing their company of unprofessionalism, creating a huge fuss over Geet's absence.
And Geet could not let him just torture her babies like that.
Yes, that's what the company and all her emplyos were to her, her babies.
"And please Mr.Khurana, there's absolutely no need to act so difficult with my employees."
"Don't change the topic Geet, I know what happened that night in France, and don't you dare deny it"
"You were drunk out of your wits, and could have easily conjured such an event in your head, and what exactly makes you think that I would have slept with you! I'd rather die than do that!"
and saying this she turned away from him and marched out of his cabin and into hers, collapsing in her chair.
It had taken every last bit of her strength to face Maan today after what happened that night.
She had been mustering courage these past few days, and had finally done what she had planned to do.
She had taken two shots of vodka before going to talk to him, to calm down her fraying nerves.
And it had miraculously minimized her trembling, and subdued the body ache she had been carrying around since that night.
Her body still bore the marks of their passionate love making, forcing her to wear full sleeves kurti with a high neck, so that none of her skin was revealed and gave her facade away.
She felt a little dizzy, but passed it off as an effect of the alcohol.
...
Maan paced his cabin up and down, now he had only one choice left.
...
A few weeks later...
"So Geet, which one is better?", asked a very very confused Meera, pondering over the ten bridal trousseau that she had shortlisted of all those that Eliza Fernandes, the head of the Bridal Collections department at Versace had shown her.
"I don't know Meera, you look so pretty in all of them!", said Geet, who had come shopping for Meera's upcoming wedding.
They did this almost every day.
Took half day off, and went crazy in the malls of the United States of America, they even sometimes flew to other states and European fashion destinations to check out some special collections.
And all this really helped Geet forget about her troubles with Maan.
Though she still met him at the office, but he had ceased to be a nuisance ever since that day when Geet had told him off. And other than the pain of seeing him every day, no other problem had cropped up since then.
And it had all been Yash's brilliant idea.
He knew women , and what he knew about them told him that no matter how big the problem was, when a woman was out shopping, nothing occured to her except for credit cards and shopping bags, rates and sales, shoes and dresses, not to miss out the very expensive accessories.
So Rahul and Yash would take care of all the extra work while Meera and Geet went to the malls and burned their money.
"Aren't you guys done yet?", spoke an exhasperrated Rahul.
"Yash is really losing his patience!"
Yash and Rahul had also accompanied them today.
"Well that's his problem then!", screamed Meera at a slightly terrified Rahul.
"What am I supposed to do! Take care of his tantrums or pick out my weding dress!", Spoke Meera, shooting daggers at Rahul, who now hid behind a very amused Geet.
Meera was getting more cross by the minute, as she couldn't decide which dress to choose of the ten she had short listed while Yash was bent upon acting like a brat.
"Atleast let him come in"
"ABSOLUTELY NOT!!!!
HOW HARD IS IT FOR YOU BOTH TO UNDERSTAND THAT!! WHICH LANGUAGE SHOULUD I EXPLAIN IT TO YOU IN!!
HE CAN'T SEE THE DRESS BEFORE THE WEDDING, IT IS UNLUCKY, TELL HIM TO WAIT, OR ELSE TAKE BACK HIS ENGAGEMENT RING!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Rahul scurried away to Yash, to tell him that his fiancee had completely lost it.
...
They were sitting in the Chinese Cavern, a chinese restaurant, waiting for the girls to finish their trousseau shopping.
Both were making faces.
"What is it with women before their weddings, it seems to bring out the worst in them!
I mean, do you see me going crazy over what I'm going to wear, no, but then how can I, I'm not even allowed to decide what I'm going to wear, that too is Meera's call! Aur agar kuch kahoonga, to engagement ring wapas karne ki baat karegi! Uff! What have I gootten myself into!!"
"Jab shadi se pehle hi yeh haal hai, to shaadi ke baad to woh pata nahi tera kya haal karegi. Teri to koi aukad hi nahi rahegi.
Yash bete, tu to gaya!! ", spoke a very empathising Rahul.
So that was PART 31.😉
Hope you all enjoyed😃
WILL PM LATER.
PLZ PRESS LIKE AND COMMENT!!!😛
Edited by mirnalini - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
loved the update...
but maan is not a kinda person who will change his mind and that too if its abt geet...
he wont let it go until geet is his...
something has to b cooking in his mind...
definitely he shud b planning something...
eagerly waiting for yash-meera wedding and maan's plans
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
aree yaar what is maan's plan i m really getting nervous now. Hope geet is not expecting his baby
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice update.. liked the way geet spoke to maan.. wonder wht he would do now!!! luved the shopping bit.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
loved it😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
awesome part...
really waiting for crackers from maan...

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Awesome update
maan cooking some thing
yaar jaldi update karo
he told only one choice is left
what ??????
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
aww, a very cute update! 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 32:
"Kya kaha tumne??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!", came Meera's deadly tone.
Yash and Rahul turned around, and came face to face with a seething Meera.
And she looked mad
very
very
very mad!!😡😡😡
"HERE I'VE BEEN GOING CRAZY SHOPPING FOR OUR WEDDING, AND YOU'RE BUSY PITYING YOURSELF!!!
AGAR KHUD PE ITNA HI TARAS AA RAHA HAI, TO MUJH SE SHADI KYUN KAR RAHE HO!!
YEH LO, KISI AUR LADKI KO PEHNA DENA YEH ANGOOTHI!!!!!"
and saying this, she slammed the engagement ring that Yash had bought her from Tiffany's on the American chopsuey that they had been having, and walked out of the restaurant.
Yash stood transfixed, so she had really done what she had been threatening to do all along.
Fishing the engaement ring that he had payed $50,000/- for, out of the gravy of the American chopsuey that he had been enjoying, he looked at it with a sorrowful face.
"Yaar, ek chauthai bank balance is ring pe khali kar diya tha. Agar use patakni hi thi, to table pe, ya mere haath mein de deti, ab in diamonds ke beech mein se yeh tomato gravy kaun nikalega!! Aur uske upar se meri chopsuey bhi kharab kar di!!", he whined.
that was when he noticed Rahul making weird gestures.
"Ab tujhe kya hua?? Mujhe laga tha ki sirf Meera ka hi dimaag kharaab hai, par tujhe dekh ke lagta hai ki tujh par bhi meri fiancee ka bura asar ho raha hai.
Main samajh sakta hun. Tujhe meri dosti mein kya kya jhelna pad raha hai."
"Yash shut up!!!", Rahul finally blurted out.
"Ab tu bhi Meera ki tarah shuru mat hoja!"
"You're SO DEAD MATE!!"
Confused at what Rahul had been looking at behind him, he turned around, and got the confirmation of his wedding being called off, written all over Meera's furious face.
"Oh SHOOT!!", he whispered to himself.
And without saying a word, Meera turned back the way she had returned, and marched out.
"Go after her, YOU IDIOT!!!!", Rahul yelled at him.
"Meera sweatheart, I was just kidding!!", and saying this he rushed after the category 5 hurricane that his pumpkin-pie had become, all thanks to him of course.
"Should we go after them?", Geet, who had been watching all this silently asked Rahul.
"No need! Let them sort it out.
Waise bhi un ke beech mein padne se humme hi chittar padne waale hain", rahul smirked.
Geet giggled and sat down to enjoy the American chopsuey that Yash had left behind.
"Hey look, he left behind his $50,000/- worth engagement ring from Tiffany's", they both threw back their heads and laughed.
Rahul cleaned the ring with his napkin and said
"May I?", as he held out his hand to Geet.
Confused, Geet nevertheless placed her hand in his.
Rahul winked at her and got down to his knee.
"O my dear!!
How shall I ever express the depth of my love for thee
Marry me , marry me and make me the happiest of men"
Shocked at Rahul's cheek, Geet composed herself and winked back as she faked wiping away tears of happiness and replied with equal dramatic effect
"Oh Rahul!! I thought you'd never ask!"
...
From a distance Maan watched Geet laughing and having lunch with that Rahul.
And if that wasn't enough fuel for the fire burning in his chest, he saw him get down on his knee and propose to Geet in front of everybody, and she accepted!
Maan formed a fist as he saw Rahul slip the ring onto her finger, and his eyes burning red as he saw them get up and hug.
The last thread of forbearance snapped, the fire in his chest burnt to a supernova, and Maan got up with murder in his heart.
So people,
That was PART 32😛
Hope you enjoyed😉
Edited by mirnalini - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woow Great part dear!!!

Continue soon honey!!!!!!!!!

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