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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi everyone,
Thank u all for ur encouraging comments...
Guys I went out on vacation n I'm back just 2 days back... so I updated the part 40 today, I'm sorry for last update.
-Sravanthi

Part 40

That Night,

Geet comes to maan.

"hi"

"hi,you did not get ready."

"No'..Actually.."

"What???"

"In which car r we going????"

"y"

"Just."

Maan looks at Geet n Geet says "Just wanted to wear matching sari." N thinks "what?"

Maan puts a shocked face n says "what??????"

"Nothing" n thinks "flop plan" n turns to leave .

"Black'.n there is black sari on ur bed wear that."

Geet turns with shocked face n says "what???"

"Actually I did not gift u sari that day''.I mean I did not select'..so/"

Geet smiles n says thanks.

Maan smiles n they leave.

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In room

Geet calls Yash

"hello"

"where r u"

"just reached home."

"Ok I'm coming."

She leaves.

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Yash was standing near the parking area n Geet reaches there,

"Yash"

"thank god u have come'.."

"y u thought I will not come."

"Nothing like that'''but.."

"whatever''''.black car, I mean this one."

"Ok''..keys."

"here." Geet gives the keys n yash takes the keys n starts his work."

"what should I do."

"O'ya, see yash party is at 40Km from here n 20km there r chances of getting lift '.so after 25-30km if car stops its enough."

"But geet,if sir calls someone for lift'or if any vehicle comes."

"Then it will be our bad luck'.what else can we do."

"Ya..but'''Ok I caqn't tell exactly after 25km car will give u some problem."

"appx"

"Ok "

"Yash ''..Part time job."

"O'..Actually After Dad's death, mom had to take all the responsibility'..she used to work in a office n then she even used to sell home made cakes n chocolates ''.after her 12th even sis used to help her''''..so even I thought I will help her."

"that's good."

Yash smiled''..n said "geet '.." n was showing some this."

"I don't need to know anything."

"But''"

"bye I need to get ready."

"bye."

They leave.

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Maan gets ready n was waiting for geet.

"geet''.." shouts Maan

"Maan" saying this dadima comes near him.

"Dadima" saying this Maan gets up.

"it will take time for girls to get ready."

Maan smiles n says "but is not like other'''she will not that so much time'..but I don't know y its'.." saying this Maan looks at the watch.

Geet come there adjusting her sari.( She looked great''.white n black design 'sari. Black blouse with (unable to explain properly. hope u understand) 2 broad cloth

Pieces to tie nods at neck n 2 ' back)


Maan n Dadima looks at geet n dadima smiles n says "geet ur looking beautiful "

Maan does not speak anything but has a smile on his face n just stars at her.

"Maan" says Geet.

"o. lets go."

They leaves,

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After some distance car stops suddenly.

"what happen???" says Maan n gets down. Even geet gets down.

Maan tries to do something but nothing worked. Maan stands there angrily n geet silently.

Both looked at car n then eachother.

Maan closed the bonnet n sits on it. Geet comes near Maan

"Maan."

"what will we do now" saying this Maan gets up n continues "This is my dream project n''." he looked sad.

Geet fells guilty for what she has down. She calls yash,

"hello Geet"

"yash where r u"

"on the way''..."

"Where."

"geet I can see u."

"thank god'..come fast n repair the car."

"but'.."

"come''."

"Ok"

Yash comes there

"hello sir, hi geet"

Maan looks seriously at him, n geet with eye expression asked him to repair.

"sir what happen"

"O actually''."

Geet says "car repair."

"O ''..don't worry I'm there."

Yash starts to repair.maan comes near Geet, n Geet thinks "I need to tell Maan'''there should not be any miscommunication or misunderstandings later."

"Maan''"

"A'what happen"

"I need to tell u some thing important."

Yash says "its done sir."

"Ok." Maan was about to go near car but Geet stops n say 'I need to talk to u"

Maan stops n turns towards Geet.

"Maan promise me that u will listen to me."

Maan smiles but was little confused.

"of course Geet I will"

"completely'''.plz don't leave in between"

Maan was completely confused.

"Maan'''Maan''''actually''.actually"

"what geet"

Geet closes her eyes n says "I only did this"

"what''what do u mean"

"I only '''."

"repair'''I know u called Yash"

"no'''."Geet does not look at Maan

Maan in shocked n says "what??????????but y"

"O Maan"

"I did not''''''"maan angrily leaves

"Maan " geet follows maan

Maan stops suddenly n turns n says "tell'''what was the need for u to do this"

"maan'''.maan''"

"What Maan maan...what next?" shouts maan.

"Maan I met Nt last night."

"NT''.."

"I mean she came to meet me."

"what????????"

"she asked me to do same thing so that u will not meet her'''as she has to definitely come there '.i had to stop u"

"but''''.y"

"Maan she told me that u boh was lovers n then''..whatever'if u see her after so many years it will affect ur present''..I mean."

Maan looks angrily at geet n sits in the car ''leaves leavings. geet

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Edited by sravss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
after a long time, nice update 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
do add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee
bt hope maan doesnt take out d anger on geet laterrr
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Posted: 14 years ago
after such a long gap

Why will NT say that i confused does maan yet have some feelings for NT
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome one yaar...loved it !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oho what is this nt issue going on hope she does not create problems in future
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update after long time.plsss continue soon i hope maan has feeling for geet not for that NT.
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Posted: 14 years ago

distance make love stronger... making them angry for some days will take them more closer lol

nice part!! loved it!!

plz continue soon!!

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