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Posted: 14 years ago


Part - 8
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Geet's Apartment
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"Geet ..I've a confession to make.."

"Boliye na..Please... Now you are scaring me!!"

"Geet...there are lot of things you need to know about me.

I know that I've kept myself aloof from you, but not anymore dear...

I love you Geet..
"

She stood frozen at the sudden confession, too stunned to

respond!

"Par Dev.."

"Please don't interrupt me today Geet..mujhe bolne do ..sab kuch

badal gaya hai meri life mein Geet!! You've brought this change

baby. You've made me a better person.

I want us to start our life together like any normal married couple.

I know I've been a bad husband, not giving you any time at all..
"

"No Dev.." she opened her mouth to protest, but he cut her off .

"Yes, Geet..that's the truth..but do you know something????

You are the nicest,purest human being I've ever come across.

I've been behaving like a moron all these days , but you put up

with me without any complaints. But not any more dear...

I'll make it up to you baby...never ever will I neglect you.. I'll take

care of all my responsibilities towards you...promise..

I want to give you all the love and happiness in the world..

Just give me little more time dear...just a little more time..

Will you be kind enough to give your husband a second chance to

redeem his mistakes
??"

"Definitely Dev!!..as you wish!!"

*******************************************************************************

She hoped, she sounded convincing enough..

She didn't know what to say..she was not in love with him,

but her conservative upbringing didn't let her think any other way..

"Geet.. listen carefully to what I've to tell you now...ho sake toh..

Please stay away from Maan
!!"

Her breath caught in her throat.

"Oh God,why is he telling me this?? Did he notice anything?? Did

he understand about my feelings for Maan??"

She sat fidgeting with her dress unable to look him in the eye...

she suddenly felt like an adulteress!!

He mistook her silence..and said " Geet..please don't get

offended...See.. I'm really happy that you made a friend here, but

you chose the wrong person
!"

"Ji, main samjhi nahin.."

"Geet,I can't tell you anything more at this point..Please try to

understand..I'm telling this for your own good
!"

"Dev,I do understand your concern for me,par Maan bohot achcha

insaan hai..I think...there is some misunderstanding.."

"No Geet,I know him too well..He'll land both of us in trouble..

Trust me
!"

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She wanted to trust him badly, he was her husband, but her heart

just refused to accept his words.

"No Dev, I know him well too. He is very caring and kind..he has

helped me a lot..He was always there when I needed a friend..I

don't know what happened to you.. last night ,you guys were

getting along like a house on fire..teasing me and all..what has

changed overnight??"

"Geet,last night I was just putting up an act for your sake..

samjhi
??"

"Kya??"

"Haan Geet,main tumhara dil todna nahin chahtha tha..

but anyways, since you don't want to hear a word against your

dear friend Maan, I don't see any point continuing this

conversation any further...Well, I don't blame you for not trusting

me..Maybe this is what I deserve.
"

He gave a dejected sigh..

She was feeling very guilty..his disappointed face put her in more

misery...

He got up to walk way but felt a slight tug on his shirt..

"Yes Geet??"

"I'm sorry Dev.." Her gentle voice was laced with worry.

He closed his eyes and took a deep breath..

He hated to see her like this...She was not the one at fault here.

Maan was using her but so was he...


***************************************************************************

He turned to look at her..She was sitting with her head bent,

shoulders slouched...one hand on her lap and the other still

clutching his shirt.

He sat next to her and gathered her into his embrace..

He gently kissed her forehead...and felt her body shaking with

silent sobs.

"Geet baby please..I can't see you like this..I love you so

much!!..Baby stop crying..I won't hide anything from you..

I promise..I'll tell you everything...everything about Maan and me
!!"

She pulled back from his embrace and sat still gazing intently at

him.

"Geet..I don't know where to start...". He paused looking for the

right words..

She didn't even move a muscle..

" Geet..Maan and I,,ummm..we are not strangers to each other..

our acquaintance goes back a long way...
"

"Dev, aap log ek doosre ko pehle se jaanta the?? par kaise??"

He looked very uneasy..it looked as though he was fighting with

his inner self...His expressions scared Geet!!

"Geet,my job here as a financial consultant is just a facade, to hide

my true identity and mission...there is a Dev behind this mask,

about whom you are not yet aware of!!!
"

"Kya??" She felt weak and dizzy..

Who was this stranger standing before her in the guise of her

husband??

Why was he saying such strange things to her??

She was definitely in the midst of a terrible nightmare..Yes, that's

it!! Once she wakes up, everything will be back to normal..

"Geet..honey are you alright??" He shook her,seeing her sway..

She looked at him with a jolt..Oh so this was not a nightmare..this

was the reality of her life.

She suddenly felt very scared!!!

"Who are you Dev?? How many more secrets are hidden in you?"

"Geet..I'm Dev Malhotra..an officer with the Interpol..I'm an under

cover agent,who has come to Netherlands to annihilate a terrorist

group and end their activities
!!"

She sat with her mouth agape,her eyes as round as saucers..

"Terrorists??"

"Yes..we had received information about terrorists activities in this

country..there are more agents like me here and we are working

towards the same goal..catch them before they strike..dead or

alive
!!

We've identified most of the baddies,but yet to figure out the main

man - The Chief
"

"Haaye Rabba!! Aap CID hai??"

He chuckled at her innocent question..

"haan,something like that!!"

"Toh issme Maan kahan se aa gaya???..Why you want me to stay

away from him??"

He took a deep breath..looking straight into her eyes..he said..

" Kyun Ki, Maan is the right hand man of this CHIEF !!"

*******************************************************************************


Okay..jhooti time for me😆😆😆 ..(Ducks and runs for cover!!!)
I'll be back only after you guys calm down...see you...Tanya😊

Deviyon, mujhe marne ke chakkar mein, please don't forget the

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Edited by tanya_vi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edit 😊


Finally made it 1st 1 to comment 😛
Ok, mera prediction ulta ho gaya
Dev is the good guy & Maan ko terrorist ka chief bana diya 😲 😆 * babaji * 😆
I told u na am watching a blockbuster bollywood movie 😎 ; see am I wrong , no na

Gr8 twist , but still something is not adding up 🤔
Why do I feel Dev's bluffing 🤔 ? There's defo more than merely what he's saying . I'm giving a benefit of doubt .

Fantastic as always 👍🏼 & thoroughly enjoyed the long update ... 😃
Edited by drashsree100 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar..i guess he is changing the plate all together !!!..do contnue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
super this guy is changing the plate it self
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
dev cheating with geet he is telling lie for her
maan is the one CID agent he want to keep geet away from maan.
let see next what will come
dont show maan is a bad guy
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey amazing update...
loved it..
m really curious to read d next part..
thnx 4 d pm..
cont soon...
.

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Posted: 14 years ago
ooye sada maan sher khurana... sada pujabi munda terrorist hega...
maine phle hi post likha tha that there is sumthng fishy about this maan... PAR TERRORIST...????????????????????????????ouch ouch😕
hun tussi chetti cheeti update maro... aage k comments. aage ki update par
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Posted: 14 years ago
what the hell??? i just hope watever dev said is a big lie!!! now definitely geet is gonna keep away form him!! this is a sockin update.. waitin for the next 1 eagerly
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Posted: 14 years ago
i jus hope dev lied to geet!!! i dont want maan to be a terrrorist..geet is gonna keep away from him now... waitin for next update eagerly!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hai babaji yeh kya ho gaya 😲
I still feel Dev is lying ...Maan can't be baddy or arggg😲
will wait for your update

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