**~TRUE LOVE~**updating - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
interesting ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely
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nice concept.. plz update soon... add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
wonderful intro...thanks 4 da pn...please include me in ur pm list 4 this FF...waiting for the update😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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In Mumbai

Geet is doing her packing

Arohi:geet tu sure hain na

Geet:haan

Arohi:par

Geet:main uss bareh main wapas baat nahi karna chahti

Arohi:tujhe pata hai na agar tu wapas jayegi toh maan ki yaad ayegi

Geet:main maan ko kabhi nahi bhul sakti main abhi bhi use bohut pyar karti hoon

Arohi:par wo tujse nahi karta

Geet:haan wo mujse pyar nahi karta wo sameera se pyaar karta hai

Arohi:tu yahi par job kyu nahi karti

Geet:nahi mom dad chahte the ki main delhi main kaam karu

Arohi:tu maan se milne jaegi

Geet:nahi main maan se nahi mil sakti agar main uske saamne gayi wo poori tut jaongi aur abhi tak toh maan ki shaadi bhi ho gayi hogi

Arohi:tu kabhi maan ko maaf kar paegi uss din jo usne tere saath kiya

Geet:main maan se kabhi bhi naaraz nahi ho sakti hoon usne jo bhi mujhe kaha wo gusse main kaha aur maine usse maaf kar diya hai

Arohi:lekin tu job kaha karegi aur rahegi kaha

Geet:main delhi ki koi bari construction company main kaam karungi aur jab tak ghar nahi mil jata main hotel main rahungi

Arohi:kaun si company

Geet:wo pamphlets lekar aa usme diya hua hai

Arohi:hmm

Geet:khurana constructions,chopra industries,khanna industries aur ye sab hai dekh

Arohi:tu sabse pehla kaha jaegi

Geet:khanna industries

Arohi:areh budhu larki tujhe pehle khurana construction jana chahiye

Geet:kyu

Arohi:kyonki wo company number 1 position main hai tujhe pehle wahi jaana chahiye kya pata tujhe wahi pe job mil jaye

Geet:tu sahi keh rahi hai

Arohi:main toh hamesha sahi kehti hoon

Geet:par mujhe yeh naam kahi suna hua lag raha hai

Arohi:tv par suna hoga

Geet:shayad

Arohi:chal jaldi packing karke so jaate hai kal subah ki flight hai

Geet:haan

In delhi

Maan was sitting in his room with a photo of his and geet in his hand


Maan:geet tum mujhe chor ke kyu chali gayi agar main uss din tum par nahi chillata toh tum nahi jaati aur nahi tumhari flight ka accident hota

~FLASH BACK~

Geet:maan mujhe tumse baat karni hai

Maan:mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai

Geet:maan tum mujhe avoid kyu kar rahe ho

Maan:sab tumhare kaaran hua hai

Geet:maine kya kiya hai

Maan:kya kiya tum mere aur sameera ke beech main misunderstanding create kar rahi ho

Geet:main tumhare aur sameera ke beech kabhi nahi aayi aur mujhe tumse sameera ke baare main baat karni hai

Maan:sirf tumhare kaaran sameera mujse naaraz hai aur usne kaha hai ki main tumse baat na karu

Geet:maan sameera tumse pyaar nahi karti

Maan:geeet

Geet:main sach keh rahi hoon sameera tumse nahi tumhare paison se pyar karti hai

Maan:agar tumne ek aur shabd kaha na sameera ke baare main toh main bhool jaunga ki tum meri dost hoon

Geet:you don't trust me na

Geet had tears in her eyes and maan was getting more angry

Geet:maan main sach keh rahi hoon maine sameera ko phone par baat karte hua sunna

Maan:bas bohut ho gaya main tum par trust nahi karta aur tumhari himmat kaisi hui sameera ke baare main aise kehte hua aaj se na tum meri dost ho aur na main tumhara NOW GET LOST

Geet:aaj tum meri baat nahi sunn rahe ho lekin ek din tum jaroor manoge aur jab wo din aayega tab bohut der ho chuki hogi you will repent and you will realize your mistake by not trusting me will repent maan you will repent

Maan:JUST GET LOST I DON'T WANT TO SEE YOUR FACE AGAIN GET OUT OF MY HOUSE

Geet ran out of hi house with tears all flowing down

~Flash back~

Maan had tears in his eyes remembering that day

Maan:geet tum sach keh rahi thi i am repenting i am realizing my mistakes geet please wapas aa jao i am sorry

His mom came to his room and saw that he was holding his and geet's photo and was crying

Prerna:kya hua maan

Maan:mom geet

She sat on the bed while maan kept his head on her lap aad ruffled his hair

Maan:mom please geet ko bula do

Prerna:wo wapas kabhi nahi aayegi

Maan:mom please

Prerna:agar tum usspe uss din nahi chilate toh nahi wo jaati aur nahi hi wo accident hota

Maan:geet mujhe chor ke nahi jaa sakti

Prerna:wo chali gayi ab wo kabhi nahi aayegi

Maan:mujhe maloom hai ki geet jaroor aaegi

He kept mumbling and slept after some times in her lap.

"TRUE LOVE IS WHEN YOU SHED A TEAR AND STILL WANT HIM"

PRECAP:GEET IN DELHI

NEXT PART: PART 2

Edited by sweety.2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Gr8 part
Hated maan in the flashback scene---he broke his frendship wiv geet ova sum girl that he lyks
Can't w8 4 maaneets meeting after 5 years
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWSOME UPDATE...TOO GOOD...FELLING BAD FOR GEET BUT NO OFFENCE ...LOVED THE 1ST UPDATE...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Awesome update
wow sweety ur to good
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow loved it 😛

hope Maan and Geet meet after 5 years
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
great part dear loved it 😊

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